Wings of the Seraph Ch1 Preview (Patreon)

Hey, guys. So here is a rough draft of the opening chapter for the new book. It's pretty long (~6k) and I tried to include a little bit of everything - sex, intrigue, and action. 

As you can imagine, this kind of thing is really important for a new series. Most people won't read beyond a few pages if they aren't already hooked, so I would really appreciate any feedback you have. The main question is: would this whet your appetite enough that you would want to keep reading?