Spider Zero Feedback (Patreon)
Published:
2018-07-12 23:23:05
Imported:
2026-06
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Hey, guys. So since you've had a bit more time to read the previews, I had a few questions for you as I finish up the first draft.
-Do you think the "mystery" here is too confusing, or is it keeping your interest?
-Are the interlude chapters working for you?
-Do you think there's too much exposition or not enough?
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On an unrelated note, I have commissioned a portrait of Kaveri from a different artist that I'm hoping will be pretty cool. And yes, it will have a NSFW version. :)