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Spectre (Patreon)

Published:
2018-09-23 18:27:19
Imported:
2026-06

Content

At last, the book is ready!

As usual, please let me know if (when) you see any typos so I can make corrections before the public launch!


Comments

SpectralTime

So... I don't know if you *meant* to offhandedly and unceremoniously reveal what I already knew about a certain character's identity in the middle of the interlude before Chapter Seven, but, considering you go back to using a very different name immediately afterwards, I suspect it's a typo.

SpectralTime
>>15731434

So, while I am legitimately and pleasantly surprised that my favorite character survived this one... I am trying very hard not to spoil too much. So, the only major typo I can remember is a point between the rendezvous and the heist where Sekolah says "no" instead of "not." But, I also just searched the entire story for every instance of the word "no" and didn't find it, so... I guess you probably already got it? Also, I always thought Raxyl had a snake-tail instead of legs, so that time at the end where he "strode" somewhere surprised me, but I guess I was probably just wrong. All this time. Which is embarrassing. And I admit... I felt like the major reasons Cole would make a terrible ruler, namely that he has no training in statecraft, doesn't know anything about the polity he would try to take over, and also is a child inside, was something the various friends around him should've brought up and didn't for most of the book. But then, it *did* come up at the end, and I was glad. And it *is* weird that the Sekolah in his memories seems "warm and compassionate" now, when the one we actually met was... I mean, she was nice to *him*, but the implication is that she was also growing up to be her mother? I don't know. Might've been reading too far into it. I did like this book a lot, and it did a lot to develop and advance several characters, though I do feel Shandris is a bit... underdeveloped, considering she's on the cover. But that's barely a major complaint at all when I enjoyed the rest so much. I admit, I'm mostly reading for the story and romance more than the sex at this point, and lesbian stuff was never really my jam, so I'm probably not 100% the target audience anyway. Good job.

Sarah Hawke
>>15731434

i just searched and I did find that "no=not" thing, so thanks! I don't know about audience, but my #brand today seems to be "serious, emotional moment" followed by "preposterous sex scene."

SpectralTime
>>15731434

...I mean, the major example from the very end of the book isn't that preposterous... I mean, they're both human and everything...

WhiteRabbit
>>15731434

Kind of did that in reverse in the last chapter. Also, the twist at the end was EPIC. Did not see that coming at all.

Darkroguex11

Chapter 3 spelling error Selorah replied. Frankly, I am fortunate have you haven't kept me restrained...get rid of the "have" ... Chapter 5 The stations facial recognition scanners will pick is up in a heartbeat ...change "is"to us