AmongUs Story Part59 Color Progress (Patreon)

I switched the page where Red is at the door with a last black page. That scene with Red will probably come later. I find it more interesting to see the door open. You, as a reader, could then think about what will happen next. I find it dramatic when a black page comes after White's attack, confusing and unsettling the readers.

What do you all think? Should I leave the original with Red? Or a whole dark side after White's attack?