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Jill makes up her mind as her desires overtake her fears. 

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D G

... *FUN*. I love all the text--all the emphasis in the main narration and the little argument in the thought boxes sort of reinforce the narration (and the shift from black to red for those as her resistance to the idea breaks down). Really fun. Oh, and the nudity is awesome too (Goes without saying, but I didn't just read this for the font choices--but I really do like how you're handling the characterization here with all these little stylistic choices).

Cole A. Canth

Love the use of text color there,a wonderful way to show her two sides finally hitting that agreement. Also you are nailing it with the expressions, the pure want on Jill's face there is _so good_