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A Vast And Endless Sky v3 (Patreon)

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2025-05-15 20:26:01
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2026-06
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Rees's story again--and this time it feels much more complete. As usual, comments are welcome as I am planning to put this in the second anthology. This current draft runs at about 12.5k words, which is a little over our desired limit so of course I would consider judicious cuts.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bhvtLxhyJ-o1T8Ba7T0gU57W_JUc82P_pGP6y1joHLg/edit?usp=sharing

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A Vast And Endless Sky v3

Clink. My car keys narrowly avoided hitting me in the junk. All the noisy chatter stopped, and it was replaced with the sound of the rain outside and the TV movie Invaders from The Edge of Space tuned down to half volume. Everyone in our little grooming circle-save me-looked down in shock, and t...

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MX682X

I'd say the beginning was a pretty bumpy road for me. I had a bit of trouble to understand what was happening. Like what keys, who threw them or were they just droppen (on accident), if thrown in anger or for someone to catch. I mean - with the description of the sounds there was a feeling of anger "in the air" but still confusing. Only later, with the information on kidnapping, the puzzle pieces fell together. I would have preferred a less abrubt entry to the story, but this is pretty subjective of course.

Kaylos Stonecutter

Not been keeping tabs on this, so apologies. If the start is the genuine start and I'm not just missing previous bits, a little vagueness is indeed causing a little trouble, but if this is more bein familiar with world lore, then it's probably relatively fine (it's just lack of information). I feel like there's more I'd want to know and learn, but consider it's current length you still did a pretty good job at what you did deliver within the content provided!

Kujiiro

This was a really interesting read. Love the direction it took, really cute in a lot of parts. As one who's not quite as learned on your species and their universes, this is a great one-off on its own. I'm not so good at visualizing a lot of the environment descriptions, but the characters and dialogue started making me envy Rees' position a bit lol.