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Sorry for the delay, I got caught in a meeting!

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Power crashed around Noah like a roaring ocean. It flooded his lungs and pooled in his stomach, slamming into his mind like mighty waves. He grasped the reigns of consciousness and weathered the violent magic with every scrap of intent he could bring to bear.

His will dug deep into the swirling magic and drew it together, forcing it to obey his mental command. The more his body formed, the harder the energy tried to escape. Noah didn’t let it. His reformation ground to a halt as it slammed into a mental wall and he drew deeper on the latent magic that came in his reformation.

The throbbing pulses of his headache grew stronger with every second as he resisted the pull of Sunder. His vision fluctuated between the darkness of his soul and the dim light within his tent in the Damned Plains. Flashes of runic pressure wove in and out together with his consciousness, but Noah’s will had been forged by the very Line itself. He had millennia of impatience and determination to draw upon — but that wasn’t all.  Noah had one flame of motivation that burned brighter than anything else ever possibly could have.

Moxie would be fucking pissed if he had to kill himself a second time.

That was more than enough to keep him on track. The waves of power slammed into him over and over, and Noah drank from them with every blow. He ripped the churning power out and pulled it into himself, forcing it into his soul and bending it to his intent.

Crackles of grey and white energy flashed behind Noah’s eyes and arced through his mindspace. They slammed home before his flickering hand, driving themselves like pieces of jagged porcelain into the beginnings of a rune forming before him.

Every single angle of the rune seemed as sharp as a blade. It had no curves — only jagged lines and floating components connected to the others by nothing more than a thread. If someone had grabbed their favorite plate and dashed it across the ground with all their might, the instant after it shattered would have been a fair representation of the growing rune.

Pain burned through Noah’s soul as pieces of it started to fragment. Chips formed in the empty darkness, allowing brilliant white light to spill through. They lengthened into cracks that spiderwebbed through his soul like fingers of frost.  

 Noah snarled, the noise lost to the recesses of his own mind. There was less power now, but the mounting pain and soul damage were starting to eat away at his concentration. He could feel himself faltering and the rune’s formation slowing.

He still hadn’t managed to draw in all the latent magic flowing through his soul. There was more left. If he failed now, it would all be wasted. He’d have to go back to the auction or find another way to get more runes.

I won’t let that happen. We don’t have the time to waste. I will not fail now. I’m so damn close.

Noah snarled in defiance. He doubled down, thrusting every scrap of intent and power he had forward. Pressure bore down on him from Sunder as his will locked horns with its power. A tight band of force wrapped around his neck and started to constrict, trying to force him out of his soul and into his forming body.

Some of the cracks carving through the dark widened. Agony gripped Noah’s skull in a vice. His vision of his soul started to fade away. Tingles raced down his fingertips and toes. They reached down his limbs and raced toward his chest. He was getting pulled back into his body. If the rune wasn’t formed by the time his eyes truly opened, then everything would be wasted.

Noah desperately pushed back against the encroaching feeling, but it was fruitless. Sunder’s pull was too strong. His soul faded away completely. He tasted blood in his mouth and his entire form tingled like every one of his limbs had fallen asleep. A thick fog started to form at the edges of his mind, taking with it his access to magic.

He groaned, and the sound dimly reached his ears in the distance. He’d nearly completely reformed. Desperation burned in his chest as he clutched onto the final strands of power he still had. Noah couldn’t see the darkness anymore. His senses were fading, but he could still feel the energy at the back of his mind.

With one final cry of defiance, Noah yanked on the remaining power. There was a sharp crack followed by a brilliant flash of light. A wave of force slammed into his head and fog rolled through his mind like a crashing tsunami, washing away every last scrap of connection to his soul that remained.

Noah’s eyes snapped open and he drew in a ragged gasp. Pain slammed in his skull like someone had been hammering away at it for the past hour. He could feel the blood pumping with such intensity that it made the veins on his forehead and the back of his neck bulge.

A hacking cough forced its way out of his chest, intensifying the pain with every sharp movement, and blood splattered from his lips onto the ground. Something grabbed his shoulder. Noah couldn’t make out who it was. The world was a sea of hazy indecipherable colors and all-too bright lights that burned into his retinas like hot brands.

He squeezed his eyes shut and grasped the sides of his head as if to dig the pain free with his own fingers. Something wet trickled down from his nose and across his lip. He barely even noticed. It wasn’t just pain — the world felt disconnected. Distant.

Voices brushed across his ears, but their meaning arrived at his mind garbled and destroyed beyond comprehension. Forming words was equally impossible. His tongue was thick and heavy in his mouth. Every thought that attempted to take root in his mind was washed away by the powerful ebb and flow of fog.

There was no option remaining to him. The human body could only handle so much before shutting down. Noah’s consciousness mercifully drifted away until only empty darkness remained.

***

Thought returned slowly. The world was still dark, but the pain had abated. A throb was still present in the back of Noah’s mind. Its savage claws dug deep into his soul. He definitely had a significant amount of soul damage.

The rest of his senses started to trickle back. A faint sweet smell reminiscent of strawberries lingered in the air. Something warm and soft was pressed against his body and his face was nestled in a smooth, tickly bed.

He groaned and squeezed his eyes even harder. Noah worked his lips and opened his mouth, only for something to work its way in. Hair. He let out a startled grunt. The movement sent spikes of pain jabbing into the back of his head and he jerked to a halt with a grimace. His grip subconsciously tightened around the soft bed he was laid out on.

“Noah?” Moxie’s voice came from just behind his head. Her tone had been gentle, but the words resonated through his head like the echo of a massive drum. He grimaced and forced his eyes open, blinking furiously. Even the dim light felt like it were made of dozens of tiny needles trying to work their way into his skull.

“That… didn’t go how I planned it to,” Noah muttered. More of the world formed around him. He was laying on against Moxie on top of her bed of vines, his arms wrapped around her back in a stranglehold that probably would have been somewhat dangerous if he didn’t feel so drained of energy.

“Are you okay?” Moxie asked, tone tinged with deep concern. Her voice didn’t come out as loud this time around. It was almost manageable.

“Yeah,” Noah said. He reluctantly released his grip on Moxie, though he made no move to distance himself from her side as he drew in a deep breath and let it out slowly. “I’m fine. That was rough, but the worst is gone. Just some nasty soul damage.”

“Idiot,” Moxie muttered into the top of his head, giving him a gentle squeeze. “This is why dying shouldn’t be your first solution to literally every single problem.”

“Hey, it’s been a while since the last time,” Noah defended. The last dredges of disorientation finally sloughed away, though he could still feel traces of fog lingering in his mind. “How long was I out?”

“It’s kind of hard to tell hours down here, but I’d say something close to half a day back in our world. Maybe a bit more,” Moxie replied.

“Seriously?”

And I still have a headache? Goddamn. What did I do to my soul?

“You’ve been out for a while. Lee and I were worried,” Moxie said through a huff. “I trust it was worth it?”

“I sure hope so,” Noah replied. He reluctantly pulled away from Moxie and pushed himself upright. A twinge of pain shot through his head again and he grimaced. Moxie sat up beside him and sent him a worried glance.

“Are you sure—”

“No,” Noah admitted through a wince. “But I’ll find out. If it’s been half a day, my magic should be back. I’m going to go use the Fragment of Renewal and see if I managed to pull this shit off or not.”

Moxie inclined her head and Noah let his eyes drift shut again. He drew in a slow breath and exhaled through his mouth, pushing past the headache to sink back into his soul.

Darkness bloomed all around him, but it was far from absolute. Pale, glowing cracks covered the edges of his soul like the web of a massive spider, climbing all the way up to the Fragment of Renewal and Sunder.

It wasn’t the worst soul damage he’d ever found himself with — and Noah could barely even bring himself to pay any attention to it. His eyes were fixated on something new. Something that hadn’t been in his soul when he’d last left it.

A jagged gray rune floated across from him, equidistant from Crumbling Space and Natural Disaster. Ripples of pale energy pulsated within the jagged shapes that made it up. It definitely didn’t feel like a flawless rune, but it would have been a fantastic first attempt if it hadn’t been for one small issue.

Ribbons of thick inky darkness hung from the rune like someone had dumped a bucket of sludge over it. They wove through the holes in the rune and formed a shadowed mass behind the it, running down and merging into the floor of his soul. He couldn’t read the rune at all.

Noah swallowed. A headache still pulsed in the back of his head. A quick summon of the Fragment of Renewal would have purged it, but he couldn’t pull his eyes from the rune before him.

It wasn’t possible. Every component that had gone into the rune had been a normal one. The runes he’d broken to make it were readable, but there was no denying what his eyes told him. The rune floating before him looked eerily similar to the ones that he had seen lodged in Lee’s soul.

Did I just make a Demon Rune?

Comments

T'Ericka

Ooooooo maybe this is what was hinted before. Demons are broken because they are composed of damaged Runes. They literally form their core with a broken foundation. They are a failed experiment

T'Ericka

If fixing the runes will fu dame rally change who they are how the hell do we fix Lee?!

Alexander Dupree

I was thinking more that demon runes are more closely tied into their bodies and he created one using the creation of his body as the template. So broken or not it’s tied to him.

Derze

Huh. Did he just forcibly make his body/soul accept demons runes? Will he be able to understand those now after he heals. Interesting development

Tommy

Oh heck yeah, from this if he backtracks through exactly what he was doing when the rune formed he might be able to figure out what makes demon runes demonic! Was it his mindset, or the dark energy that seeped in from cracks in his soul? Maybe the fact he made it in the damned plains? And also, now he can potentially fix a demonic rune in his own soul. Use that learning to “fix” Lee’s runes maybe?

June

I guess he doesn’t have to pretend to be a demon anymore😅

Enif

I was wondering when something like this would happen.

Allastin

I wonder if this will affect his domain in some way or form?

Marian Ch

"Ripples of pale energy pulsated within the jagged shapes" - try criscrossed/sharp edges instead. Something other than jagged to avoid repetition.

Code Reed

Now isn't that interesting. Even more implications. Also, I thought he cut up the crumbling space rune to put into this one? The specifically mentioned how he cut it up but it didn't become lesser runes but just a mass of energy.

Dev Rez

Interesting. Noah used the inciting energy from Sunder's body reformation ability to create the rune, and demons were created as an experiment by Decras. It makes sense this could happen. He's kind of forced to solve the Divine Rune formation problem now. I wonder if he'll develop an emotion to feed on. Some cool possibilities there. He also still has more of his repressed emotions from the line to unlock--could be a tie in there.

Danielle Warvel

I mean, Noah is awfully good at playing the bad guy or ancient demon when he’s in the mood, and had done so almost since he arrived on this world, and in a certain respect you could say he falls into the same category, seeing as he’s also an invader from another planet of reality. You could say it’s fate, or that the universe decided to acknowledge and agree with his claims of being one, which is once again a complete boss move.

Tommy

He syphoned off 15% of the energy from his crumbling space rune and formed a copy of the rune with it. Then he sundered the copy (or original I forget) for energy

Daniel is ŁØNE

Did Noah somehow become more demon than human? Bro got the universe to acknowledge his race change lmfao.

Daniel is ŁØNE

Something else just occurred to me, if Noah has a demon rune which from what we know is more innately close to their being then does that mean that he will get an emotion to feed on and get the physical augmentations demons have due to their unique physiology to an extent?

Chris

Wait a second, is Noah gonna have a personality change too?

itisaparty

Please tell me the rune is called Spider’s Silk. He needs the ego boost of a rune with his name on it.

Kenshii

gotta be something with spider

Damian Czeszek

I feel like Noah would be a Knowledge Demon, but only limited to Runes and magic. It would fit him and everything he discovered already. Bro would create his own food xd

Damian Czeszek

I doubt it. And even if yes it will almost definitely be temporary. The entire purpose of him researching demon runes is to prevent personality change in Lee after all

Axelios

Dang the twists and cliffhangers just keep coming! Actus is 🔥.

Kitti Lumpo

better develop the ability to read demon language real fast 😬😬

Alexander Dupree

Actually a cool one is waiting or anticipation. But this rune was created during his rebirth it might be that it forces some emotion related to that.

George R

Amazing chapter

Tommy

Death demon. He remembers being dead in the Line for hundreds of thousands of years…

Ryan Clair

OK. I wasn’t expecting that. Well played Actus. Well played. Two suggested edits: “He was laying on against Moxie on top of her bed of vines, his arms wrapped around her back in a stranglehold that probably would have been somewhat dangerous if he didn’t feel so drained of energy.” => maybe “…laying against Moxie atop…” “They wove through the holes in the rune and formed a shadowed mass behind the it, running down and merging into the floor of his soul. He couldn’t read the rune at all.”=> “… behind it, running…”

Douglas Davis

I knew this was a really stupid idea, why didn't her just form a rune the way he normally does starting with rank 1s and building up to flawless? He had the components and energy to do it.

Nicole Hicks

He got the wrong type of impatient and thought he could make another rune from scratch, again. So, maybe a little pride got in the way also.

kp8080

"He was laying on against Moxie on top of her bed of vines," -> "He was laying against Moxie on top of her bed of vines," Also, called it on RR! Hah!