Quick check in poll
- I like all aspects of the story so far 15
- I like the story but dislike the narrator 0
- I dislike the story and the narrator 0
- I dislike the story but like the narrator 0
Hey guys! I've gotten several Eldritch Bestie chapters done now. To be honest, this is really more of the prologue than anything, as the real story will start when Damien is 17.
I wanted to check in and see what you all thought of it so far. In particular, you've likely noticed that I've added a narrator to this book - someone, or something, is telling you the story. This gives me some opportunity for comedy while also adding a layer of mystery to the story. The narrator is an actual character, so it won't always just be a disembodied voice.
This is a pretty big stylistic choice, so I wanted to see what y'all thought of it. Your feedback here will help me continue with the rest of the novel. Thank you for your time and support :)