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Heyyy! How is everyone doing?

~This is the censored version of this episode~

Hope you like it šŸ˜‡ I sure liked making it

As always, try reading it slowly and share your thoughts in the comments~! ā¤ļø

Next one is gonna be…. Well 🤭

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Winniethekay

Girlllllll we need the rest!

user47858

AHHHHHHHHJSIENCKCJDOWNFNVIENXNC

Tessa

oh my god

Asia 2911

You should’ve seen my face when I read "uncensoredā€

Pineappler

Noooo why is he going with it

adeli

i thought patreon has uncensored version? 😭

Nikki C.

Oh damn. Didn’t think he would actually do it

Brittney

Isn’t there an uncensored version of this episode?

Hazel

Is it just me? This makes me sad for Axel 😭

Iq Iqra

No, we’re gonna tell me why I was growling and freaking scream and kicking up my legs like

JenBear

I was anxious at first but after reading it i trust Kai will handle things well enough

Ann_drew

Kai’s making me mad bro

Anon_xx

SJDKFKFLLDLSEIR HOLY. I HAVE BUTTERFLIES IN MY STOMACH. I FEEL BAD FOR AXEL THO 🄺🄹😭

Hermione

I don’t care how much I want them to be together… this is cursed

Crud

Y’all think we are going to get a flashback of why Axel doesn’t like being touched?

Nani Dawson

I think Kai is going to stop him

Michi Rae

Hellllllll yesssss 🤤

Alex

This… uh… I wanted them together but this is much. The power imbalance, the way he’s only doing this out of desperation, it’s all just gross. I don’t see how this could turn into a healthy relationship sadly

Lala

i don't like this power imbalance and sexual coercion that'll end up making then into a couple some way down the line...i was here for the main couple, but i don't think i'll be here much longer sorry

Mellissa

I really hope Kai will stop him or idk bc it’s really weird right now It’s just fell wrong and toxic since Axel accepted the deal just for money

Alph

Just doing rape scenes in this comic now, huh?

Random

I’m so uncomfy

Š¼Š°Ń суно

im reading ts since 2022 and when i noticed theyre gonna be side couple i was excited but im SO not into it like reading the straight and bicurious guys making out with each other just for the money even tho one of them clearly doesnt want it feels off

Linny bear

Nooooo this isn't what I wanted for them 😭😭 i wanted them to fall in love properly

Em

Please don’t let any comments dictate how you write your story !!! I Love it that’s why I’m here !! You’re the creator not us !! Please continue to do your work how YOU please !! I’ll continue to support you:)

Becshlec

Wow, okay, these comments are crazy. People realize they don’t have to read something if they don’t like the content, right? God, people these days šŸ™„ personally, I’m loving it, and I hope Pastaflavour never changes

Pressreal

PLEASE learn what rape actually is before commenting saying that this is rape. Very invalidating for the ppl who have actually gone through something like that. If this makes you uncomfortable, do not read. Very simple.

Fayelight

Hard to believe they are gonna end as a healthy couple or smth if this is how they are starting out. I liked the side couple more but god I just wanna see Onxy and Keane again 🄲

BugsBlog

guys ... don't throw words just because you just learned it. for example, I like their conflicting dynamic and angst and I know they're fictional, I can make a distinction between reality and fiction. but many don't and that's sad.

Hazel

I think there's just one comment mentioning rape, but for some reason many ppl act like the entire comment section is about that. Am I missing something? ...I think we all can feel differently about the events that are unfolding in the story and that's ok.

Zack

Toxic reminder of what Axel did to Onyx btw. Just so you don't feel that bad for him

Joobus

Sexual coercion can be a very tricky thing to navigate and to analyze.

Luca

hey so ā€œif you don’t like don’t readā€ is not the argument you think it is😭 when you post your work publicly you open yourself up to criticism. People are allowed to feel iffy about dark romance and that’s ok. Also ok if you do like it (in fiction). That’s all I think

BugsBlog

ok? I don't like people policing every single aspect of fiction. "you open yourself up to criticism" and that's ok but acting like police/puritans doesn't help to freedom of speech. it's censoring, it's shutting up people. heck, I like darker themes, exploring the worst part of humans and I watch horror movies, who are famous for not being cute nor family friendly. it's not that people aren't allowed to feel iffy about dark romance, it's that y'all act too much on the red or green flag boxes and humans are not boxes and are way more complex. irl and in fiction, since y'all cannot make the distinction.

Alea Beard

What part is being coerced . Axel brought it up which kind of changes the aspect of consent

Joobus

As someone who felt they had to do something because the other option was worse and the person who offered knew it: that's a form of sexual coercion. Axel never would have brought it up if Kai hadn't first. This was never on the table for Axel until Kai made the offer. Axel and I made choices that weren't really choices in the end.

Luiza A.

In my perspective in the capitalism scenario we are all prostitutes heheheheh and for me this is what is happening an exchange ( toxic ? Yes but axel is toxic too !). And like lot of people said in here, is important to learn how to separate fiction from reality.

Chromi

Look I'm into it but I also know my flavors are much much darker than most. Guys it is fiction of course but don't pretend that Axel has much of a choice here. He has been told multiple times he makes his next payment or he'll get fucked up worse. He's already pretty fucked up so what do you think worse would be exactly?

Luiza A.

You're totally right but I'm the person that hold grudges for long time kkkkkkkkkkk. I'm still mad at him UnU kkkk

Andrea

Okay, hear me out: I don't like that for Axel (especially because it's hinted that Axels past isn't all sunshine and happiness; and no, i don't think he was behind Onyxs' outing). I don't know how Kai can still turn things around. I don't think it's really possible, or at least I can't think of a way. At this point I'm to invested in the story, so don't come at me with "don't like don't read". But please: stop romanticizing this. It's coercion and at this point, Axel hasn't a real chance. I hope Kai feels really shitty at some point.