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Hey guys! ā¤ļøThis episode feels rather shorter than usual, because I didn’t want to cut the next scene in half, forgive me 🄹🤣 (the next scene is… nice šŸ˜)

Also, since some of you guys brought it up in the last sneak peek I posted, I wanted to address the issue of Hailey and Keane’s ā€œrelationshipā€œ 😌🤔

The gap between their age is actually very very small (2 years)(and Keane is almost of age anyways) so there are technically no issues with them being together neither morally nor legally. The only issue is that it cockblocks de gay… šŸ˜€šŸ¤£

In any case,I hope you like this episode! Tell me what you think! ā¤ļø

See you all soon! šŸ„°ā¤ļø

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Kittiefemm

"You're not feeling it"..... that is correct.... not a damn thing

Kittiefemm

However, I still ship Ethana

rei

THE CLIFFHANGER IS KILLING MEEEEEEE

MotleyPariah

Hopefully he's honest about his feelings, for everyone's sake

Monkey D Celia

Am I the only who think it’s kind of funny that Hailey went from hugging a teddybear to straddle a guy topless? From 0 to 100 before you could blink. XD

MAY✨

Having Hailey recreate what onyx/lynx did….. I have so many thoughts and I’ll probably reread it again and again to form them and then properly write something that nobody asked for but I will do anyways šŸ˜‚

AceOfHearts

Im so invested in the Ethynx story

Julie

NOT KEANE ASKING HER TO DO THE THINGS ONYX DID 😭😭🤭 keane.. we have some great news for you šŸ’€šŸ˜Œ i’m so excited for the next episode!

Aria Eudaimond

onyx/lynx is literally the only thing in keene’s mind the boy is soo unknowingly down bad hopefully he starts to realize now lol

artsy_amusing

Keane, stop being an ass and quit leading this girl on. She does not deserve that, my guy. 🤨 Not you thinking about Lynx/Onyx while trying to get in the mood, lol. Substitution does not work - the original is always better, heh. šŸ˜Hailey, Hailey, Hailey... you ask about becoming official after grabbing for the package and taking off your shirt? Backward much? This is a nice little recipe for disaster. šŸ˜®ā€šŸ’ØšŸ¤¦šŸ¾ā€ā™€ļø

Sarah Miller

I feel bad for Hailey. The gal is TRYING. And I don't want to be that person, but... if a healthy teenage boy isn't getting 'excited' for you, Hailey, a cute girl... it's not going to happen. But she's too young to realize that he's clearly having her recreate something else, whether that would be something he saw or something he experienced before. Although we all know which of those it is.

Olyvia

The only thing is, I hope Keane doesn’t just like Onyx when he’s Lynx. Cuz that’s not who Onyx really is. He deserves to be loved as himself. If he wanted to be Lynx that would be one thing, but he’s shown many times that he likes himself as Onyx, and only does Lynx cuz it attracts Keane.

Jas

IM SO SAD WE DIDNT GET TO SEE MORE ETHAN & ONYX 😭🤧 I love that we slowly get to see the improvement of your skill too !!!! It’s amazinnngg

Misskittyb92

he's like "it's not working" šŸ˜‚

Ivette

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Denisse

Omg Hailey is not the only one cockblocking the gay miss author 🤣. Keane over here trying to reenact his tris with lynx/onyx with Hailey but he ain't feeling it at all lmao.

MAY✨

Okay… First things first I’m really excited to see Onyx exploring with Ethan. I’ve said it before, as long as Ethan knows there won’t be feelings reciprocated and doesn’t get hurt I think it’s great for both of them! They’re both young and still figuring things out, might as well have some fun while they’re at it. It’s also great for Onyx to build up some more confidence with his sexuality whatever it is if he decides to l o abel it. Now onto Hailey and Keane…where to even start…. Hailey honey, you need to slow down. I know she’s older than Keane but at this point no matter what even if the whole Onyx/Lynx thing wasn’t going on she just seems to be pushing her feelings on to Keane a little too hard imo. Slow down there a little bit girly especially when there seems to be some hesitation from his side. Keane, honey, my sweet sweet dumby…you need to take space and collect your thoughts. Pls don’t agree to make things official with Hailey when you are having thoughts about someone else AND literally trying to recreate what happened between yourself and another person with Hailey. That’s no way to start any relationship official or not. That will just end up putting both of you in an awkward and uncomfortable situation. I saw someone mention about being worried Keane only likes Onyx when he’s Lynx and I’ve been worried about that too. But, when you think about it the most intense make-out they had was when Onyx was dressed as Lynx. All the others were ā€œplannedā€ and the first actual move was made by Keane. I think that’s why he’s trying to recreate the one that onyx/Lynx initiated because it was so intense not necessarily because he was dressed as Lynx…I hope at least. Idk those are my random ass long thoughts. Enjoy if anyone actually reads it! šŸ˜‚

Ljay

Both onyx and keane are trying to do their own thing ( LOVE IT ) and onyx is at this point where he is in denial about how he feels so he wont say it out loud but the thought of kissing keane and their past experience does something to him . I get why onyx is doing what he is doing … like hello who wouldn’t when the person you are gravitating towards has interest elsewhere. Keane my sweet stupid boy … what works for your and onyx will not work for you and Hailey. Gooood luckkkkkkkk but go to the one we all know you want subconsciously

Silva Debonair

I get what’s going on, unlike Onyx, Keane is dumb so not until the very last minute before crossing the line with Hailey would he realize he actually loves Onyx. So now I understand why he had to go so far with Healey before the story turned to Onyx. Even Hailey already realized he likes Lynx. šŸ˜

Silva Debonair

If I had to guess I’d say Hailey is just waiting for Keane to chicken out to then say she already knew he would chicken out because he likes Lynx and tell him to go be with her.

Naiya

I lost it when she asked can we make it official? Like your going to ask after telling him he can take your shirt off? Not before? Seems a little twisted if ur asking in the middle of things and initiating. Especially when after one freaking kiss she reaches immediately down to see if he’s hard for her. Like actually let the passion start before assuming it should move straight to more. I think the wig doesn’t matter they practiced either way but that last one was spiccy, so it could definitely confuse him a bit.

Nothinbutasmile

Bro ain't feelin it at all lol. Can you feel it Mr crabs 🤣

Lee Blic

Still wanting Ethan/Onyx endgame with Keane as an angst ridden mess.

Yasi Yasuri

NooošŸ’”šŸ’”šŸ’”šŸ’” I Wish nothing will happen between that stupid girl and Keane😭😭😭

My_FleetingMind

First and foremost…thank you so much author for keeping us on our toes week in, week out! The plot is continuously really interesting/exciting and your cliffhangers are epic (if not a little traumatic)!šŸ˜… Also, the way in which your drawing skills have developed. Wow! The artwork is phenomenal…right down to all of the little details and I personally really love the colour pallette! My favourite detail this week was the scene transition from Ethan and Onyx kissing to Keane and Hailey kissing. It was like a mirror image and impactful because it made me feel..if only they were kissing the right people (I’m bias for Keane x Onyx so I would think this)! It was also good to get an insight into Keane’s thoughts though and his comparison of Hailey to Onyx/Lynx. I love how you keep the character’s and their feelings and actions very real and human. So many people would react in a similar way in this situation. Keane has clearly just had the straddle/kiss/bite of his life with Onyx/Lynx and he’s also starting to feel things…so it’s inevitable that he would compare. I actually really like Keane. Our slightly dumb and confused but still sweet boy! I also think that all those wanting him to experience angst are probably going to get it in bucket loads very soon! I can’t stop feeling like Onyx fell first but perhaps Keane is on his way to falling harder… šŸ˜ I agree with May above that Hailey is coming on too hard. Like maybe calm down a bit girrrl! āœ‹šŸ» I don’t fully blame her as she clearly really likes Keane but I wish she would read the very obvious mood and put her foot on the brakes a little. I also feel that the Keane liking Lynx rather than Onyx issue may crop up at some point and might even be a slight stumbling block. BUT I think Keane is ultimately very into Onyx (and Lynx is merely the route to discovering his true feelings). That being said I’d love to see them both embracing the very obvious kink Keane has for Onyx in a dress and also the potential praise kink Onyx has about dressing like that for Keane! šŸ”„ Ok, I will stop now before I don’t! Haha!

izukugooo

not gone lie author you ate this one up i love me a love triangle, drama, romance bl 🫔 Go ethan goo

Ria

a lot of people are saying that Hailey is expecting too much from Keane but you have to remember that at the beginning, it was the other way around. so yeah it might be confusing to her as to why Keane isn't giving the same effort/ feelings as before as when he was chasing after her. but despite all of this, im thinking that Keane is probably going to say yes to becoming official - i mean it makes sense for that to be the next step for them but i do see that he is slowly realizing that it's onyx that turns him on... not hailey.

Ria

now im wondering if keane will get hard the next time he makes out with onyx and realize what the real problem is lmaoo

Ria

still hoping for a little more onyx/ethan action because i would LOVE to see a jealous keane 🤭

Silas

Ngl all for the ethan x onyx kiss! Also for keane only getting off on shit lyn- oh no right onyx did !!!!!!

Ria

also another thought, onyx and ethan are making out in public. what if someone like axel sees them šŸ‘€

Doc Mnc

Loving this development. Feel for Keane here, getting to grips with your own sexuality can be a confusing experience. Also all for the Onyx and Ethan kiss

mochateal

I truly appreciate the way you’re able to build multiple emotions flowing at the same time through perspective/inner-dialogue telling! Seeing Keane truly want to connect with Hailey, making a real and honest effort to be in the moment with her is very sweet and nerve-racking at the same time. I can *feel* his nerves to be ā€˜good enough’ for her, to meet expectations, while genuinely caring. Then there’s the flashbacks, the comparisons to that oh-so-intense kiss with Onyx/Lynx. All of this just after they had a very awkward and (to Keane) revealing conversation that just maybe ā€˜Lynx might like him.’ These short snippets are actually more *hot* and *moving* than even the supposed to be spicy previews with Hailey. It’s fascinating to see everything with Hailey to feel off, or dull. We might know why (author/audience privilege), but that you were able to keep the character emotions so well intact and convey this confused, steamy, frustrated mess, was a delight to read! šŸ’š

Liz

AHHHH HES REALIZING HIS FEELINGGGG

little bit louder

Ngl, if an almost 18-year-old boy needed extra help to get there while he was with 19-year-old girl me, I’d be humiliated enough to sink into the floor. (Then I’d wonder if maybe he was gay like two weeks later, because 19-year-old me wasn’t that quick on the uptake. 🤣) I definitely wouldn’t be asking if he wanted to make it official! Poor Hailey must like him a lot to put herself out there that much. It’s not really her fault that Keane thought that was what he wanted and now is starting to figure out it isn’t. I kind of got the impression that he’s not super experienced either—maybe he thought making out with anyone would feel as good as kissing Onyx did, because he didn’t have much basis for comparison? Or maybe I’m forgetting backstory that contradicts that idea. Either way I loved this update! Lots of showing not telling.

Emi Ancheta

Hailey kills me! Keane isn’t preforming the way she expects and her first thought to ā€˜make it better’ is to ask him to make it official? šŸ¤¦šŸ¾ poor Hailey

uwu moll

my head is gonna explode

Chey

SHE DONT DO IT FOR HIM! šŸ’€

Laura

just noticed in the back to back frames of them kissing other people onyx isn’t blushing (when ethan is) and keane isn’t blushing (when hailey is) which makes me think they’ll both feel like it’s not the same…

Vedavas

The moment you realise that kissing your crush just doesn't hit as hard as kissing your best friend.

Aubrey Allen

She is not getting the hint šŸ«¢šŸ˜‚

nikki

im so sad for All of them

Even Greene

That coming outs gonna be awkward

Hunter

Hxhanbruayshf I am living for onyx x ethan!! I'm glad that onyx finally tried to take care of his mental health and to stop chasing someone he thinks will never like him back, we know that he does tho 😌😌

Susan Lilley

ā€œOh, all rightā€ yep. Not exactly the reaction of a teenage heterosexual male when asked to remove a girls top.

My_FleetingMind

Happy New Year beautiful author! Thank you so much for all of your hard work in 2022. Looking forward to spending 2023 with Keane x Onyx šŸ’œ

B. Brooke Morgan

I love how onyx is now experimenting. But this whole thing makes me wonder if Lynx will be permanent, which if that happens, that's frickin awesome. On the keane/Hailey side, that's gonna be Hella awkward if he says no, but it'll be even more awkward if he doesn't but figures it out fully in the future... honestly she has all the signs, just needs to figure them out lol. Absolutely love this story, it's the highlight of my week. I stop everything to read the new episodes each time I get a notification. After rereading what's posted so far, I'm only falling more in love with this story

Kyrin Lockheart

šŸ˜„ 🤣 haha "cockblocks de gay" loved that

Maria Davinci

This is so good. I can’t wait to see the development of Ethan and Onyx's relationship.