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New episode time~! 😋

I‘m not gonna comment on the ep ‘cause I feel like ANYTHING could be a spoiler at this point 👀

Super curious to hear what you guys think will happen 😏 Reading your comments and predictions is definitely the highlight of my week ❤️

Hope you like how this turned out! ❤️

..A fun fact 🤣;

When I write the story I don’t plan on the separated episodes in advance; I write the story continuously and then I just divide it in episodes. So really, the cliffhangers are 100% unintentional most of the times 🤣😳

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Sarah Cooke

I have a bad feeling T^T

SpaceSmores

I'm assuming that maybe someone came walking over and he's trying to stop him before they hear him?

Becky2599

This cliffhanger has killed me, now off to work 😭

~emothy~

I’m curious Pasta, does reading our comments influence your writing process in any way? For example do you make tweaks to the story based on feedback?

Simone

My hope: they kiss and both confess and Season 2 is full of NSFW smut 🤣 My prediction: I think the dad spoke to Keane about being a bad influence on Onyx (thus him up late worrying over that) and now he's gonna shut Onyx down. Tell him go to school and be great and that Keane will only keep him back (or some self depricating shit 😔) Onyx, being in his feelings, won't see it as Keane trying to protect him, but rather Keane rejecting him. And because the dad thinks K is a bad influence he doesnt push for them to be best friends still either 🤷🏽‍♀️ We should get a time jump in Season 2 where someone transfers to the other's University and Onyx is fully accepting of himself and super confident. Keane is the jock on campus and being older and seeing Onyx come into his own anyway he now has to convince Onyx that he's (still) in love with him..... after breaking Onyx's heart so it'll be super hard to convince him that he's not lying, or even if he believes him that he wont run off again

Hunter

NOOO

Echo

Wtfffff why make us waittt

Zenxpaii ツ

Not sure why I have a bad feeling about this

Hana Bored

noooo not the cliffhanger 😭

Writer Anonymous

Well, I shall now retreat into a corner and wallow in my anxiety until the next update. Please let them be ok. 😭

kk Mc

Sure... completely unintentional 🙄🙄 (no one believes you- in my whisper voice)

Kasey

I’M GONNA DIE

Kasey

RIGHT HERE RIGHT NOW

Scarlet

NONONO WHAT THE FUCK!! DO I HAVE TO PRETEND A NORMAL LIFE AFTER THIS? the audacity

Georgia Z.

Ok i am really confused

Georgia Z.

I am also sad since I need to unsubscribe soon because I am unemployed now 🫠 damn the curiosity

Manda

Alright this is getting annoying

Miss Rae, if ya nasty

Oh I’m throwing handssss lmfao how could you do this to ussss!! Lol great chapter though at least we’re getting somewhere

Spartan 198

YOU CANT KEEP GETTING AWAY WITH THESE CLIFFHANGERS

Jamie Balasta

Whyyyyy???!!! I've been reading this episode over and over again. It's Onyx's dad! I just know it! Another freaking obstacle between them. Ugghhh! How frustrating. 😮‍💨

pacifyher

NOOOOOOOOOOO I CANT TAKE THESE CLIFFHANGERS

PandaMT07

Ahhh your an evil pasta!!! 😈 haha keep em guessing!!! 🤘😆🤘

Wanda

Ahhhhhhhhh

Mowgla

Nooooooooo!!!!!! Im ready to flip a table that cliffhanger was dirty! Can I pay extra for an extra early release of the next episode 😂

Evie

Ahhhhh this ending

Addy K

YOU SICK LITTLE RAT 😭😭😭😭😭😭

ViolaV

Aw if we get a rejected onyx I’m going to be so disappointed ☹️ it’d be a sad place to leave them at the end of the season. I want to be excited for them moving forward.

Ji_Woo_621

Why do I feel like Onyx will get rejected and probably because of Onyx’s father, he might have threatened Keane in someway 😭😭😭 THE CURIOSITY IS KILLING THE HELL OUT OF ME!!!!

Tiffany Trask

If there was a table flip emoji id be using that righ now XD wtf

JavyFreak

I can feel that ‘sorry’ over the to be continued.. 😂😂

BunnyGirlCalypso

So we're killing Onyx's homophobic deadbeat dad right? Right???

Skip1ron

you are not sorry ><

Darwin

Why are you doing this to me 😭💔

Milly

NOOO. I need to know omg please cause it seemed like Keane was gonna call off their little “relationship” helppp 😭😭

AlyTM

literally sobbing at the cliff hanger- 😭😭😭

Violeta

Hey Pasta! 10th panel, Keane should say coach is “expecting” them, you’ve got “excepting” up right now. PS Love it!!!

Crispin Gram

I wanna know what’s going on with Keane :( The timing of the confession was … strategically set up make sure we’d wanna chase down another plot point, right? ;D