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Hello, everyone. As usual I’m both lazy and working all day at the same time. Some kind of Schrödinger shit.

Here are the things added:

+ 11100 new words (total: 141k)+ 3 CG sets (total: 42)+ 2 lewd scenes (total: 16)

I don’t have much to say. I also worked all day. It’s a bit… embarrassing, but I worked a bit too much on that stupid commentary, and now I’m running out of steam.

In December, if I don’t take a break, He Maid Her Fall will become the main project. I’m hoping having the story go faster will help with some of the issues with the pacing. There have been a few discussions on Discord about how much this feel like a mother NTR. Some think it’s not focused enough toward Kate, which is fair.

Still, I’ve noticed that He Maid Her Fall has been more popular than my other projects, so I guess I must be doing something right.

In any case, I was supposed to take a few hours to re-read and not embarrass myself with bugs and shit, but I instead put that time in the commentary. So yeah, retarded, I am.

You are welcome.

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GuiltyKing

I don't think there is any trouble with the lack of focus on Kate in this game. Though it can certainly be said that she isn't a common part of Johnny's POV, she is always on his mind, and she is shown for major events. Rather, I think the main issue is that Lesley isn't given enough attention in this game and that Johnny's training, infatuation, and attention aren't sufficiently focused on Lesley, weakening the NTR experience. This is because Johnny doesn't believe in himself, is distracted by Kate and Dex, doesn't draw or dream of Lesley anymore...and when he does draw its of his mom, and doesn't train seriously, making his defeats to Gavin not painful and weakening Lesley's interest in him as a whole. I think more attention needs to be spent on fleshing out the competitions between Gavin and Johnny in order to really show off his effort and attention. Currently it's shown instantaneously, which makes Johnny look like he isn't trying at all, and even Lesley calls him out on this. It's difficult to empathize and feel for Johnny losing Lesley (not his lover) when he doesn't even try or believe he can win her over.

nbjJ1994

Looking forward to this later! While I am certainly eager for Kate to become the focus at some point, I do appreciate Lesleys role in this game and the wedge she is driving between Johnny and Kate. I believe in you!