Idea Submission For Bonus Scene #3 (Patreon)
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So it's that time again. I wasn't sure if I should keep on doing bonus scenes or not, but since the reception of the last bonus scene wasn’t as bad as I had envisaged, I'll keep going for as long as you guys are satisfied.
There are a few things that I want to go over before talking about (copy-pasting) the submission process and the rules.
Last time, no one posted more than one idea even though you have the right to post two each. While there are a bit more members in the tier now, there is a good chance that there won't be a lot of ideas submitted this time either. Because of that, I'll make a post to all of the tiers where I will tell them that we've started the idea submission process. I'll take that opportunity to tell them that they can comment their own idea on that post. Those ideas won't count (of course), but if you do see an idea from someone that you personally like, nothing stops you from posting it here (if I do see an idea posted twice, I'll have to delete one of them though).
Another thing that I want to point out because it seems like it's not fully clear. If in the story there's a moment where you feel like something important is going on in the background, you can always submit it as an idea. For example, last update Hellen—Laura's coworker—was corrupted by Luca and we saw the aftermath on a CG. If you want to see what happened, you can always use it as an idea. In that case, the idea would simply be: 'What happened to Hellen during the Hero ending #2 for her to turn into such a whore?' You don't have to fill out the form (who, where, when), since I'm the only one who knows all those things. Just make sure it's a moment in the story where something truly happens (sexually speaking). If, for example, you ask me what happened after the abrupt ending (Harry with the knife), you're forcing me to turn the events toward something sexual. I'll always try to keep everything canon (fits with the events of the game) until an idea forces me to branch from it.
For now, I'm still using Patreon (comments) to gather ideas. If I see that it becomes too much of a clusterfuck, I might try to think of a way to do it on my own website instead, but for right now I think we don't need it.
The submission process/rules posted under is a copy-paste from the last bonus scene submission. If you're already familiar with them, you can stop reading here.
- Submission Process (for those who don't know) -
In order to submit your idea, please comment on this post (a first-level comment! Don't comment on a comment with an idea please). Then, other members of this tier will be able to upvote (heart) the ideas that they like. The five ideas with the most upvote (hearts) will then be used for the final poll to decide on the bonus scene. Every tier that has access to meaningful polls will have the opportunity to vote on the final poll (5$, 10$, 15$, 25$), so please upvote only the ideas that you're really interested to see since the last say is not exclusively yours (if all ideas have the same number of upvotes, we'll have to choose the winners randomly).
Here's the format in which you should submit your ideas:
Who: who is fucking who
Where: where are they fucking
How: A description of the scene (A single sentence, if possible)
When: If there's a specific period of time in which this scene takes place (relative to the game), you can add it. Else, skip this.
Outfit: If the character is wearing a specific outfit, else skip this.
Position: The sexual position. If you can, add an image for clarity purposes. I'm not in your head.
Why: This is for the intent. If there's a specific reason behind the act, specify it.
Here's an example:
Who: Laura and Luca.
Where: In the sky.
How: They have a meeting oversea and they are fucking in the bathroom of a plane while Harry is dealing with Aya's antic.
When: The day after Luca's proposal, in the Normal route
Outfit: Laura's sexy work attire
Position: Standing - https://drive.google.com/open?id=11eNQxhw5NQVyJWKzsPgAoE1GJAJDzm3j&authuser=sagesssama%40gmail.com&usp=drive_fs
Why: Because they are following one of Luca's rules.
An exception to the format:
If in the story there's a moment where you feel like something important is going on in the background, you can always submit it as an idea. For example, in the Hero ending #2, Hellen—Laura's coworker—was corrupted by Luca and we saw the aftermath on a CG. If you want to see what happened, you can always use it as an idea. In that case, the idea would simply be: 'What happened to Hellen during the Hero ending #2 for her to turn into such a whore?' You don't have to fill out the form (who, where, when), since I'm the only one who knows all those things. Just make sure it's a moment in the story where something truly happens (sexually speaking). If, for example, you ask me what happened after the abrupt ending (Harry with the knife), you're forcing me to turn the events toward something sexual. I'll always try to keep everything canon (fits with the events of the game) until an idea forces me to branch from it.
- Submission Rules (for those who don't know) -
These are the rules that you should follow when posting a submission. If you don't follow them, I might have to slightly modify the idea to make it more feasible.
Two ideas per member max.
The characters should have been introduced in the game already (unless it's a faceless character). I might also accept Beth from The Edge Of.
Two sex positions max (very important)!
Threesome max.
If you choose to make a threesome scene, then it's only one sex position (illustrations for threesomes cost a lot).
Keep the idea simple and easily malleable. Short, to-the-point sentences. I want the opportunity to be creative.
If the characters have outfits, keep in mind that I cannot create outfits for the character sprites.
Please try to keep the idea realistic. I can't make very detailed scenes, unfortunately. If you want something specific, like say an image of Laura on the bed after a night of depraved sex, then it's already one sex position out of two. Also, if you want Luca disguised as Santa Claus, I don't have a version of his sprite with that costume. Which can make it harder for me to make a complete, understandable narrative.
Of course, everything can be worked on. If there's a problem or I have questions, I'll contact the author of the winning idea directly.
The submissions will be open for a week. I'll also make a reminder post one day before the end of the submission process so that people can remember to either post an idea or vote on the new ones.
Bonus scenes are between 1k and 3k words. I also try to keep the personality of the character intact unless the plot dictates otherwise. I will try to release it next month, but it might end up being the month after it (depends on my artists, really).