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So it's that time again. I wasn't sure if I should keep on doing bonus scenes or not, but since the reception of the last bonus scene wasn’t as bad as I had envisaged, I'll keep going for as long as you guys are satisfied.

There are a few things that I want to go over before talking about (copy-pasting) the submission process and the rules.

Last time, no one posted more than one idea even though you have the right to post two each. While there are a bit more members in the tier now, there is a good chance that there won't be a lot of ideas submitted this time either. Because of that, I'll make a post to all of the tiers where I will tell them that we've started the idea submission process. I'll take that opportunity to tell them that they can comment their own idea on that post. Those ideas won't count (of course), but if you do see an idea from someone that you personally like, nothing stops you from posting it here (if I do see an idea posted twice, I'll have to delete one of them though).

Another thing that I want to point out because it seems like it's not fully clear. If in the story there's a moment where you feel like something important is going on in the background, you can always submit it as an idea. For example, last update Hellen—Laura's coworker—was corrupted by Luca and we saw the aftermath on a CG. If you want to see what happened, you can always use it as an idea. In that case, the idea would simply be: 'What happened to Hellen during the Hero ending #2 for her to turn into such a whore?' You don't have to fill out the form (who, where, when), since I'm the only one who knows all those things. Just make sure it's a moment in the story where something truly happens (sexually speaking). If, for example, you ask me what happened after the abrupt ending (Harry with the knife), you're forcing me to turn the events toward something sexual. I'll always try to keep everything canon (fits with the events of the game) until an idea forces me to branch from it.

For now, I'm still using Patreon (comments) to gather ideas. If I see that it becomes too much of a clusterfuck, I might try to think of a way to do it on my own website instead, but for right now I think we don't need it.

The submission process/rules posted under is a copy-paste from the last bonus scene submission. If you're already familiar with them, you can stop reading here.

- Submission Process (for those who don't know) -

In order to submit your idea, please comment on this post (a first-level comment! Don't comment on a comment with an idea please). Then, other members of this tier will be able to upvote (heart) the ideas that they like. The five ideas with the most upvote (hearts) will then be used for the final poll to decide on the bonus scene. Every tier that has access to meaningful polls will have the opportunity to vote on the final poll (5$, 10$, 15$, 25$), so please upvote only the ideas that you're really interested to see since the last say is not exclusively yours (if all ideas have the same number of upvotes, we'll have to choose the winners randomly).

Here's the format in which you should submit your ideas:

Who: who is fucking who

Where: where are they fucking

How: A description of the scene (A single sentence, if possible)

When: If there's a specific period of time in which this scene takes place (relative to the game), you can add it. Else, skip this.

Outfit: If the character is wearing a specific outfit, else skip this.

Position: The sexual position. If you can, add an image for clarity purposes. I'm not in your head.

Why: This is for the intent. If there's a specific reason behind the act, specify it.

Here's an example:

Who: Laura and Luca.

Where: In the sky.

How: They have a meeting oversea and they are fucking in the bathroom of a plane while Harry is dealing with Aya's antic.

When: The day after Luca's proposal, in the Normal route

Outfit: Laura's sexy work attire

Position: Standing - https://drive.google.com/open?id=11eNQxhw5NQVyJWKzsPgAoE1GJAJDzm3j&authuser=sagesssama%40gmail.com&usp=drive_fs

Why: Because they are following one of Luca's rules.

An exception to the format: 

If in the story there's a moment where you feel like something important is going on in the background, you can always submit it as an idea. For example, in the Hero ending #2, Hellen—Laura's coworker—was corrupted by Luca and we saw the aftermath on a CG. If you want to see what happened, you can always use it as an idea. In that case, the idea would simply be: 'What happened to Hellen during the Hero ending #2 for her to turn into such a whore?' You don't have to fill out the form (who, where, when), since I'm the only one who knows all those things. Just make sure it's a moment in the story where something truly happens (sexually speaking). If, for example, you ask me what happened after the abrupt ending (Harry with the knife), you're forcing me to turn the events toward something sexual. I'll always try to keep everything canon (fits with the events of the game) until an idea forces me to branch from it.

- Submission Rules (for those who don't know) -

These are the rules that you should follow when posting a submission. If you don't follow them, I might have to slightly modify the idea to make it more feasible.

Two ideas per member max.

The characters should have been introduced in the game already (unless it's a faceless character). I might also accept Beth from The Edge Of.

Two sex positions max (very important)!

Threesome max.

If you choose to make a threesome scene, then it's only one sex position (illustrations for threesomes cost a lot).

Keep the idea simple and easily malleable. Short, to-the-point sentences. I want the opportunity to be creative.

If the characters have outfits, keep in mind that I cannot create outfits for the character sprites.

Please try to keep the idea realistic. I can't make very detailed scenes, unfortunately. If you want something specific, like say an image of Laura on the bed after a night of depraved sex, then it's already one sex position out of two. Also, if you want Luca disguised as Santa Claus, I don't have a version of his sprite with that costume. Which can make it harder for me to make a complete, understandable narrative.

Of course, everything can be worked on. If there's a problem or I have questions, I'll contact the author of the winning idea directly.

The submissions will be open for a week. I'll also make a reminder post one day before the end of the submission process so that people can remember to either post an idea or vote on the new ones.

Bonus scenes are between 1k and 3k words. I also try to keep the personality of the character intact unless the plot dictates otherwise. I will try to release it next month, but it might end up being the month after it (depends on my artists, really).

Comments

Vulcan64

I'm re-submitting this idea because I think it is an important one to show in the "Let’s make a family” ending. Hopefully other agree with me. :) The idea behind this is to get a sex scene showing off Laura’s nipple piercings in the “Let’s make a family” ending where Harry is oblivious to Laura’s corruption into a slut. Who: Luca is fucking Laura Where: In the hotel where Luca got Laura to Dogeza to him and beg for sex. How: Luca and Laura have just gotten back from getting her nipples pierced, as Luca demanded, and Luca wants to fuck Laura to ingrain her sex slave status into her brain. When: After Laura Dogeza’d to Luca, following getting her nipples pierced but before they left to tell Harry about Laura’s new desire to have Luca help her “exercise”. Outfit: Laura has the sexy outfit that she had on before the pencil blue dress in this ending. The one with the exposed panties that has yet to be used in a sex scene (Her daily around the house clothing that she uses once she starts back with the long blond hair in this ending). Position: Something like this is good as it shows both Laura’s pussy and pierced nipples: https://rule34.xxx//samples/5864/sample_1e9b1e93239ada03c8387654567ea043b68b166d.jpg?6666443 Note that we should see Laura’s pierced nipples as that is a large focus of this scene. Why: Luca needs to force Laura to understand that she is his sex slave and the piercings are physical proof of this fact. Laura will succumb to this fact and her slut transformation will continue further.

British Lion

Who: Laura (purple hair) and Luca. Where: Laura’s bedroom. How: Luca is fucking Laura from behind on the bed while she looks at a picture of Harry. When Luca gets close to cumming he grabs hold of the chain necklace slightly strangling Laura when she agrees to become Luca’s girl he cums inside and breaks the chain necklace. The broken necklace gets turned into a Luca Navel piercing after for Laura to get marked as Luca property. Outfit: Both naked except Laura is wearing the golden chain at the start. With Laura having a Luca Navel piercing at the end. Position: From behind holding Laura’s arms to make her look at the picture and then transition to holding the chain prior to climax. Sort of like what happens in this panel: https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5655047 Why: To get Laura to submit to Luca to become his girl and destroy all remnants of love for Harry by destroying the necklace and once broken get it turned into a Luca Navel piercing for Laura to get marked as Luca property with. This is a basic corruption and degradation idea for Laura where she ends up getting physically marked a Luca property which goes well with the slutty out he makes her wear. I hope others like this idea as well and I can’t wait to see the other ideas and how mine stacks up against everyone else’s.

Fluffian PandaCat

Who: Luca fucking unconscious Aya (while Laura helps or just watches) Where: The Karaoke place How: — When: Time of Karaoke, right after Harry and Aya pass out. Outfit: What they were wearing during this time. Position: Using her pussy and maybe ass, doesn’t matter the position. (Would be hot to have her ID between her chin and tits similar to this: https://i.imgur.com/vIzeqlO.png - when Luca is taking more blackmail photos). Why: Needs more blackmail proof and Luca just wants to feel her pussy and rest of her body before having fun with Laura or does it after fucking Laura.

British Lion

As you said in the post about stuff that is happening in the background that we don’t get to see. I would like to see: ‘What happened to Hellen during the Hero ending #2 for her to turn into such a whore?'

Kenathon

Well, this is a bit of a long shot, but I kinda want to see this the more I think about it: Who: Harry and Aya. Where: In the Karaoke booth. How: They went there to blow off steam together but things ended up getting steamy instead. (haha, I hate myself) When: After the vote, no particular route. Why: Because it's all in Aya's head, daydreaming while waiting for Harry to actually follow her outside. So yeah, kinda silly and it would end up showing off a bit of Aya before her path starts, but since people were fine with seeing Sandra early perhaps they will feel similarly about Aya. I hope.

SDH

Who: Laura x Luca, Harry watching Where:In lucas living room How: Harry has a nightmare where he is forced to watch Laura have sex with her blackmailer and see firsthand just corrupted shes become. When: Twist on the abrupt ending where Harry finds evidence Lauras being blackmailed but she and Luca don't come in and have sex to show him its too late. After failing to get a hold of Laura all day, Harry eventually passes out and has this nightmare. Outfit:Any of Laura's "Sexy outfits" Position: Harry is sitting on the couch while Laura blows and/or rides him while Harry is forced to sit in front of them and watch. Why: To watch Laura and her master Luca blatantly taunt Harry without having to worry about real world consequences.

Cosmic Poptart

Who: Luca, having sex with Laura and Laura’s mum. Where: In Harry’s apartment. How: Both Laura’s mum and Luca are invited round for a celebration (for a birthday or promotion), and play a drinking game, spin the bottle. Harry gets too drunk and passes out, while the others continue their ‘game’. The scene could end with Harry waking up and finding Laura and her mum in the bathroom together, undenounced to him so is Luca. When: (No specific time) But it would be after they’re married, and Laura and her mum have been corrupted. Outfits: (Nothing specific) But both Laura and her mother are wearing something quite revealing for Luca’s enjoyment. Position: Having sex next to Harry’s unconscious body, and then in the bathroom, the three of them could be in the tub, Luca resting on Laura’s mum, while Laura goes down on him. Why: Just because Luca can.