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Fixed the pacing by just redrawing this as two pages.

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Minzoku Bokumetsu

They're all great, but I do like Tre's "when DO you feel sexy these days" in the one-page version ever so slightly more definitely not complaining about more Olly close-ups in the second-page version =D

Mangsney

Wow, I didn't feel like the first version was rushed at all, but the way you linger on Tre's face, his hands, the tapes... it really works!