page 8 (Patreon)

I've become a bit more conscious of negative space in my pages. page 7 had a bit too much of it. The streets could have used a but more texture. I'm typically afraid of making things too cluttered, but when I looked through my DA gallery and asked why the better pages were better, it often came down to density. I need to zoom in a little more, and be less afraid of cramming more into a page. Busier line art will mean more pressure to draw the eye to important spots using colour.