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Hey everybody, there is an update to chapter 51, the first part. Somebody brought up a good point about Jin's injuries, and I agree, I did not properly address them. So the first part of the Chapter has been updated. The rest of the chapter is unchanged.

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Steven Ramey

That was a good change. I honestly didn't think to much about his injuries as I was experiencing the catharsis of everyone having survived.

Anthony

I agree with Steven Ramsey.... but also want to just say that being prompted to reread the chapter felt exciting like getting a second cookie from the cookie jar. It is the same flavor, same jar, but still delicious even the 2nd time. 🙂

jord

The addition Definitely is appreciated

Daniel

I think the update was very well done and well needed

Comeback Kid

That's V5 Chapter 51 for anyone who was an idiot like me and tried to figure out where Jin got hurt during the wedding.

Ryan Roberts

What did they change I can't find a new section added but I might be just missing it?

Mark Greenberg

Starting at about the 12th paragraph is different from how I first read it. We didn't know about Jin's injuries til they were with Tianlan.

AkiIokuaAG

Okay good to know the damage wasn’t strictly spiritual. Might need to get a spiritual doctor on that, but where oh where in the Azure Hills could someone like that be found? (include as much sarcasm as you’d like in the last sentence)

Ligeia

That was a useful update for people like me who read too fast and missed it originally. You really are good to your readers!

NameGame

Love the update, everything makes sense now. The second read through was particularly great because I got to bask in the glory that is the Lord Magistrate again. He's really something else. Thanks for the cha...er, update!

Kat

I like the update

Angela Roberts

Love the update. It does make more sense this way. Thanks!