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Surprise!

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Watching her father prepare to depart on his flying sword to the Imperial Capital was hard. Qingyi tried to put on a brave face, she really did, but having father leave… it filled her heart with ill feelings.

She didn’t want him to go. Not now, not for years. She wanted to be by his side, when she finally could be, and make up for all those lost moments. 

But father had to go. So Qingyi forced the feelings away, smiled at her father, and told him to come back soon. She stood with her brother and Aunt Minyan, seeing him off.

“A week at most.” He told them again. He looked deeply into Qingyi’s eyes, and she saw his own pain at having to leave her so soon—but also his resolve. His steel-grey eyes ventured from her to her brother, and then to Aunt Minyan, and the pain softened, happiness creeping in. “I shall return soon.”

And then he was gone, ascending to the heavens.

Qingyi swallowed, watching as he rapidly disappeared, the limitations of the Initiate’s Realm meaning she stopped being able to see him far too swiftly.

“Well. Time for some training, eh?” Her brother’s voice cut through the forlorn silence. “I’m having a little trouble with this one sword stroke, could I have a hand, Qingyi?”

Jin’s words jolted her out of her ill feelings. She knew what he was doing, but was grateful for the distraction. Qingyi straightened up and focused. Her little brother needed assistance! He had asked his big sister to give him pointers! Learning the sword was much more important than staring at an empty sky, especially when he had started so late!

“Yes! Let's begin!” Qingyi declared, and marched over to the wooden swords. They both bowed and took up their positions—and then they began working through the forms together, watched over by Aunt Minyan.

She had a small smile on her face as she sat beside father’s usual place, her cold, ice fractal eyes paradoxically full of warmth—something that had been a constant upon her face over these past three days. It had been really nice, spending that time together, father dedicating the moments completely to them all. They had ridden on Father’s flying sword over the Great Plunge Waterfall, and watched as the ships were lifted on their floating berths up and down the enormous drop. They had climbed up into the Misty Forest just below the Cloudy Sword Sect, and listened to father regale them with tales about how he used to train in there, surrounded by the clouds—stories of his youth that Aunt Minyan occasionally interjected into, wonderful tales that Qingyi cherished. 

Of course, they had also gone to her brother’s clinic, and it never got old seeing people react to her brother’s genius! And more important were the looks on their faces when he just offered to give them his secrets.

Though she did catch Aunt Minyan staring at the massive distilleries and muttering ‘Bailu must never find these’ under her breath.

But the best thing… the best thing was breakfast. It had been waking up to her father and brother singing some tune, the sublime notes of Aunt Minyan’s erhu joining them on the second day.

It was a moment that almost approached the paradise of her youth. Family, together.

Today’s breakfast still had some remnants, though those were fast disappearing.

Aunt Minyan had another perfectly folded sweet pancake in her chopsticks, something that seemed to be a new favourite— an exact amount of whipped cream and berries filling it so that every bite was perfectly harmonious.

Qingyi knew this because Aunt Minyan had, after Jin had finished cooking everything, taken it upon herself to “make sure everyone was eating correctly” and constructed everyone’s crepe for them. And they were perfect. The ratio of berry, or jam to cream and sugar… it was exquisite.

Though it was rather funny to have them just appear on their plates out of nowhere, Qingyi incapable of seeing Aunt Minyan move. The legendary Divine Falcon, folding pancakes for people and looking entirely too pleased whenever anyone thanked her.

Her Aunt was the most stunningly beautiful and thoughtful lady. Even now, there was a cool breeze blowing on them, cooling them down in the hot sun of the Crucible’s summer, and suddenly Aunt Minyan’s eyes sharpened, and she spoke.

“Water, children.” She commanded. “Your bodies are no longer functioning optimally."

They sat and drank some water. And then also had some melon, which just appeared out of nowhere, in bowls beside them, frozen and cut into cubes.

“Thank you Aunt Minyan.” Qingyi said.

“You’re the best, Aunt Minyan.” Jin said with a big smile.

Minyan let out a little satisfied exhale and nodded as if this were the correct path of the world.

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After their morning training they departed into the city, heading for the docks. Her brother had some shipments coming in today, so off they went, along with their Aunt.

“It has been a great many years since I have been to mortal docks in person.” Aunt Minyan mused, putting on her hat and veil, and accompanying them. She and her brother were wearing their matching jackets, and together they walked down to the docks. The crowd parted for them—half because they respected her brother, and half because of the Qi that ghosted around Aunt Minyan, gently making sure nobody got too close to her.

Her brother was as efficient as always, browsing the fantastical goods people brought to him from all corners of the Empire.

It was clearly a good haul, but there seemed to be things missing.

“I’m Sorry, Master Medical Saint, still no luck.” Every captain said, shaking their heads sadly.

“No problem.” He would reply, clearly a little disappointed, but not terribly so.

“What exactly have you been looking for?” Aunt Minyan asked. She had remained silent, content to simply watch as they did their business.

“Well, a few things. One is the sweet syrup of northern maple trees. The others are from further south. Probably Emerald Leaf Jungle. A small black bean pod that has a unique sweet fragrance, and the other, a larger bean pod—here, I have some drawings.” He said, pulling them out.

Aunt Minyan studied them carefully, looking at the drawings her brother had penned. Maple Syrup, Vanilla, and cacao (probably under different names) was written beneath them.

“It's always been a longshot though.” Her brother said, stretching. “No sense being upset when something like that doesn’t turn out. Everyone is trying their best.”

They started moving again, but for a moment, Aunt Minyan stayed behind for a moment.

She waved her hand and a small flock of birds made of ice formed, radiating Aunt Minyan’s Qi.

“New orders for the Storm Wings, Southern Fleet Command and Northern Rainshadow squadron.” She told them. 

Qingyi just watched with great amusement as Aunt Minyan casually diverted enough might to lay low entire provinces because her brother had been mildly disappointed.

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The day had been wonderful. Night fell, and Qingyi let sleep claim her.

She tried focusing on how much fun she had today. She tried focusing on the feeling of Aunt Minyan’s Qi in the next room.

And yet the nightmares, as if sensing her father’s absent Qi, came anyway.

Panic filled her heart, and bile filled her throat as the binders wrapped around her, and as Bu’s hands tore into her chest.

She knew it was a dream. She knew it was a nightmare, and she hated that Bu still held such power over her. She loathed it. Her trembling, locked limbs, frozen with fear.

Then something cold touched her forehead, and she woke up with a gasp, the nightmare dissolving around her.

Aunt Minyan’s hand was on her forehead. Jin was holding her hand. She swallowed, and opened her mouth to apologise.

Aunt Minyan placed a finger over her lips and shook her head. “There is nothing to apologize for, little blade. Rest now.”

It was different than father’s touch. Colder. Father had only compassion for his daughter in his eyes; but Aunt Minyan held something else.

A seething, black, and terrible hatred, all directed at the memory of her brother. 

Father might be hurt, if he had to cut down his son again.

Aunt Minyan would annihilate him without a second thought. Actually no, she would probably freeze all his limbs, shatter his cultivation, then hand him to Qingyi to do with as she wished.

…father may have been gone, but she really was safe.

She thanked them both, and drifted off to sleep again.

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The rest of the week was much better than the first night. Qingyi began her medical studies in earnest, following her brother’s lead. He was good at teaching. Calm, patient, controlled. She was never worried about him hitting her, and cared little if she got something wrong, or even if she deviated from his originally intended lesson. Instead he indulged her curiosity to the fullest, answering as best he could… and when he didn’t know, he would just say he didn’t know.

That said, Qingyi already had a bit of a head start: she had already extensively studied the human body, and how to dismantle it. Every muscle, every organ, every bone.

But taking things apart was much different than putting them back together again.

It really did make her appreciate what Uncle Shou, Aunt Yukong, and father did for her all the more—and just how much her little brother’s idea had helped.

Now that it was fully explained to her, growing an entire meridian system was a truly mad idea.

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On the seventh day, they felt their father’s Qi on the horizon, and Qingyi let out a breath she didn’t know she was holding.

He was back. Back, as promised. She raced into the courtyard with Jin, a bright smile on her face as father descended—but then paused.

Father’s arms were crossed, his frown was heavy…

And he was going to have to leave again, right back after he got back home.

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Comments

TDMC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS IS NOT A DRILL

Gojira

A cliffhanger? How devious

V01D

I have a feeling Shen Yu isn’t going to hold back from the very start, unlike in the normal timeline, where he didn’t go all out until he got the letter from Jin. So with the War Demon even less complete, he likely won’t be as injured/poisoned.

Aaron S

She is correct. Bailu must never know

WarStrider72

Bailu: I sense a disturbance in the booze force

Rake1810

Was not expecting this one to be updated. Thank you!

BeepBoop

His cultivation should also be stronger with the great victory of healing Qingyi. Of course, there is also the question of who else he has fighting with him. Will Elder Ge be there this time? Who else will? Mindanao could go in this timeline, but I think it is more likely that she would stay behind with Qingyi.

Trasen56

Yay, an update to what is now my favorite au

Onean

Sweet, Elder/Younger Sister! Shame that Shen Yu's tasks, at least the first, will start immediately without even a small grace period, but sadly not surprising.

Angel

Yay!!! Thank you for the new chapter! I love Qingyi and am already invested in her story. And this version of Jin seems almost sweeter than the original, somehow.

V01D

His cultivation is stronger than how he was prior to Quinyi’s healing, but he also had a different Baseline. (It’s why I think the greatest difference to the whole situation involves the STRATEGIC choices. Also because while the Cloudy Sword may turn out in more force, Minyan sending people on a task means they’re likely to contribute less)

Thomas Lawless

So Minyan is basically Jins mother in two of the universes now. Starting to see a trend.

Sean Graham

Yesssss, my favorite AU returns! Qinye is just the best.

Basil

My first thought was it's the fight against the demon gate from the original timeline...but I don't think the timing works because Jin is too young, I'm thinking Shen Yu has been tasked with cleanIng the Cloudy Sword Sect of the impurities that Lu Ri reported.

Alex

I think Shen Yu’s cultivation is stronger in this timeline than it was in the main timeline. After main timeline Shen Yu killed his son, he lost his will to live — when Shen Yu recounts his life between killing Bu and finding Jin, he says that the only reason he kept going was because his wife would never have forgiven him if he gave up. The combination of grief, guilt, and hopelessness wrecked his cultivation; he admits to Minyan in the main timeline that his spirit was close to collapsing when he found Jin. In this timeline, Shen Yu never got that low. His desperate struggle to save Qingyi’s life gave him purpose, so he didn’t reach the level where he was coming apart at the seams. Now that Qingyi has recovered, he’s in a MUCH better place than he was when the Emperor called upon his oath in the main timeline. I think this version of Shen Yu would beat main timeline Shen Yu easily.

V01D

No, his failure to heal Qingyi was literally eating him alive - his baseline was different than in canon; in some ways worse off. However, the different strategic decisions he will make will be far more impactful on the end results.

BeepBoop

The Sects don't report their dirty laundry to the Emperor. In the original timeline nobody told the Emperor about the actual details of why the Cloudy Sword Sect was suddenly more willing to act for the Empire. Furthermore, Elder Ge's immediate reaction to this was to handle it and do so before Shen Yu takes an official position.

Thalamus Dredge

Its arguable. His cultivation style causes backlash whenever he loses. The main timeline bu situation was a terrible defeat that he had no way to recover from and was holding it together on sheer grit to not let down his wife. In this timeline the "fight" never ended, he was "losing" due to failing to cure qingyi but it wasn't truly over until either she died or got better, then he got a MASSIVE w by curing her of an impossible to cure condition. It all comes down to the intricacies of his style and what counts as a loss/victory, and to what degree doing the impossible can make up for missing the fact his son was a narcissistic psycopath.

Ligeia

Thanks, CF! I really miss your more regular updates to the main timeline -- especially with Shirtaloon on his book tour so not posting this summer either -- so any art or AU you post is more than welcome! And this AU is really fun and different, so good for comparing all the details of Jin's xianxia life in all the different versions. Your writing always makes me happy!

Cyrus McEnnis

Ah, time for a re-read. It's hard to chose between my favorite AU stories, but I think this one is definitely in my top 5, maybe even top 3 >.>

Miles Sumida

Ah, so that's how that poor cursed wolf dies in this timeline.

Johan

Tftc

ScarletIce

Hmmm, Minyan will probably need to go too, so where will he leave the kids I wonder? Cloudy Sword Sect seems the obvious choice...

Blankarmor

Thanks for the surprise

Cape-tiveAudience

So if Minyan goes with Shen Yu in this timeline then I would vote for Xiaobao to come watch out for Jin and Qingyi. Even though the Storm Wings would be reliably hilarious.

kenlon

Let's be honest, whichever AU he updates is, at that moment, the best AU.

Gwyn

Yes! Let's fucking go, this is tied with SHI for my favorite AU. If you ever write another crossover episode, Qingyi needs to meet her sister in law and nephew!

KyoDaDungeon!!

The TOURNAMENT ARC!!! THE CLIFF THO!!!!

Shin Dig

been waiting for this!

N0m_N0m

I mean, he also lost a ton of cultivation building/removing the meridians that were put in Qingyi

Pat Sprehe

Not sure it will be that simple. It wasn’t explicit in the main story but I don’t think he took so long simply because he was holding back. I do hope that he asks/gets help sooner from Ge and Minyan, although with Ge only just having found the rot in the sect, who knows.

Shweta Narayan

...I kinda want to see them fix the cloudy sword sect 😂

David Bean

Awesome, I love this AU. (Please add it to collections!)

HUN Zuglo

Truly an excellent chapter as always, Thank you!

Matthew Picard

Tell Bailu the truth, that the vanilla beans are used as a flavor additive to Booze!! It WILL be found!!🤣🤣🤣👍👍👍

Lochlan Yone

I'm pretty sure they started fixing the cloudy sword sect after elder ge came back from being told that she was healed. Whe Liu ri went on his 3 hr presentation to ge on issues in the sect, would be nice to have Jin get the proper cloudy sword experience due to this

acg

Another difference is I think because Jin didnt went to the azure hills there is not demonic qi siphoning formation avaliable to them....no the same thing also puts him away from the demonic cultivators on the north so he might not need to fight a peer whilst being badly poisened....and I do wonder what was the effect of him trying to hurry back to jins side while he was fighting the war demon....he might have been accepting hits beacuse it will accelarete the combat in his favour as well...with minyan guarding the kids and elders of CSS near by I dont think he might be as hurried

Mark Greenberg

It IS abut the right time for Shen Yu to be sent demon hunting. In EBYS ch 2 Jin mentions he turned 18 a couple of weeks earlier (it's why she's his younger sister since she's only 17) and in the main BOC storyline he LEAVES the CSS and meets Meimei when he's about 18.`Even if Shen Yu gets Ge and friends to help him track down the demon's portal and they find it fairly quickly, the demons will still be about as far along as in the original story. Hopefully both Ge and Ran will assist him while Yukong and Shu watch over the CSS and Minyan will ask a couple of her fellow elders to accompany him while she watches the kids. With a couple of more Imperial Realm cultivators they can more easily defeat the demon commanders and come home less injured and not need Meimei's formation.

Mark Greenberg

I don't think Minyan will join the attack (she'll be watching the kids) so maybe she'll ask a couple of the other SHI elders to join in. Perhaps Minyan's minions will have found the sugar maples and she'll go with Jin and Qingyi to the Azure Hills where they can meet some familiar characters and stop some things that need to be stopped.

Chuck Haeberle

At the risk of being a nag - don't forget to update the collection to include this update!

Joel Tone

I am really enjoying this version of Minyan. She feels very much like the main story’s version but with more of her own take on the doting mother. Thanks for the chapter

Justus Saucedo

SHI is still my favorite, but this is a close second. Thanks for the chapter

Nathan Oliver

This hasn't been added to the elder but younger sister collection yet. Looking forward to reading it, thanks for all the stories, they're always awesome!

Truedragon5374

I think Jin and Qingyi will fallow their father to war. But not to fight. Jin will make the argument that many will be hurt and he is a healer. And every healer needs a bodyguard when at war, that will be his sister's job. And then Shen Yu and Minyan return from the final battle, injured but victorious, their children will tend to them.

SarcasticDonkey

Thanks for the chapter boss! Every time I read your work I get a smile on my face.

BuccoBruce

Damn I shouldn’t have reread these. Makes me want to ask for more immediately