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The battle upon the lens of air was reaching its climax and Minyan leaned forwards. Her eyes were fixed upon the lens of air that hovered in the middle of the stadium as Rou gave it his all against a man that should have defeated him twenty minutes ago.

Minyan had known he would comport himself well. He had shown remarkable growth so far, stunning even her. And yet even she thought that he should have hit his limit. Unlike the previous cretin, Liang Daoyi had completely stabilized his cultivation and was well into his journey in the Spiritual Realm. He was seasoned, in a way none of the others were.

And yet Rou was still matching him.

That was her boy holding his own. That was her boy, displaying dazzling, wondrous skill that set the entire stadium howling, and crossed the gap between realms, growing sharper with every moment.

Rou had surpassed all of her expectations. No, not just surpassed, he had shattered them like cheap porcelain. Disintegrated them. Her estimation of her boy had gone from talented to prodigy to once-in-a-generation skill in the span of less than a week. 

Again, Minyan was utterly baffled how Shen Yu had missed this. How? How? Was it Bu’s shadow still lingering over him, that he could not see Mount Tai?

Minyan didn’t know, and that bothered her. The Shen Yu she knew was not so foolish as to not see this.

Rou commanded the undivided attention of what had to be the whole sect. The Midships had gone mad, the bosuns down in the near riot with their clubs trying to restore order. The Four Winds were in nearly the same shape, decorum breaking down at this display from what they saw as one of their own.

Both Song and Lili had given up pretending they were only watching out of amusement. Their eyes were sharp and focused, looking at his form, and evaluating every movement.

And then they all felt it. The shift in the battle.

[The Pillar that Holds Up Heaven]

Minayn’s hands gripped the armrest of her chair with such strength that her fingers started splintering the ancient, reinforced stone. It was a completely unseemly loss of control, but she didn’t care at all, her eyes and her soul fixed on the scene before her.

A pillar of Golden Light Descended on Rou.

A deer formed around him, the anima of his power flaring with ancient might.

[The Art of Crafting Mountains: Soaring Heaven's Fortress] 

Both Rou and the deer roared, a deep bass note mixed with the primordial sounding bugle of an elk. 

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Even through the thousand Li View, even through such distance, the entirety of their sect froze, as the noise, and the faintest feeling of Qi washed over them.

 That sound, that cry reverberated through their very souls.

They didn’t know what it was. They didn’t entirely know what was happening, But they knew, without a shadow of a doubt, that it was something they had been missing.

The Deer bellowed. And the feathers of Soaring Heaven’s Isle answered.

What issued forth from their lips was not human. The fierce cry of a hawk, the melody of a thrush, the song of a wren, and a hundred thousand other notes, reminiscing of instruments and even human singing, and it slotted in perfectly into the gaps left by the great deer’s roar, harmonizing into a battle cry unheard since the Age of Darkness. Their Qi flared, feathers forming something almost like a bird in response.

The command staff, the Captains and the Rear Admirals, and the Admirals themselves could feel their cultivation stirring, reaching out a hesitant tendril to the thundering roar.

And even the Godship; ancient, half-dead, scuppered on the rocks, took notice. It was deep, deep within the ship. It was past unparalleled defensive formations, the spirits of those who had willingly given their lives to serve as the last defence, forever bound to stop the enemies of the Isle from reaching the Ship’s core.

It was past the one hundred and eight-fold seals, nestled in the firing chamber. It was a spear, one hundred and eight hands long—the final, and still operational weapon from the Age of Darkness, Heaven Breaker.

The weapon that had shattered an entire floating continent into an archipelago and had slain untold millions of demons.

The last remnants of the bird shuddered, and then felt joy, as the roar of its other half rumbled through her once more. 

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Minyan’s heart thundered in her chest; her blood, normally sluggish and cold, flowed through her veins like fire, burning with the feeling that call had instilled in her.

Song had doubled over in her seat, a palm over her own heart. Lili, who had been lounging, had fallen off her cushion and was even now just staring up from the floor, her mouth wide open, and her normal whimsical smile completely absent.

Xiaobao was on her feet, leaning halfway out of the Elder’s box, her one good eye fixed upon the scene.

Rou, who had fallen, rose. Her boy staggered to his feet, bleeding, battered, and still defiant. His grin was wide and half-mad and all Minyan could see was Shen Yu, smiling in the face of death, and ready to fight it.

The two men launched themselves towards each other for one final blow. They met at the same time. They both fell.

And then Rou once more staggered to his feet.

 It was…. It was… magnificent. Rou, one arm raised. The gift she had given him around his neck, gleaming under the sun.

"Match, Over! Victory! Tianzhe Rou!" 

The sect exploded. Minyan’s boy was swimming in and out of consciousness. And yet still he strode forward. Towards his downed opponent.

“You okay, buddy?” Rou asked, his voice clear. Both men smiled at each other.

She could see her own past, Shen Yu offering a hand in friendship to her, after his victory. She saw that one action, and how it changed everything about the trajectory of her life.

And there was Rou, doing the same thing without thinking.

The Heavenly Pillar Sect…? She would have to address that. Daoyi had proved a spectacular whetstone for Rou. They would have to look into their relationship with that sect. Actually, she would send a messenger today. Best strike while the iron was hot.

Minyan leaned back in her seat and let out a breath. There would be problems because of this. Things would be set in motion. And yet… she couldn’t bring herself to care.

So instead, she just allowed herself to feel content.

“Oh gods shes going to be insufferable for the next century, isn’t she?” Song muttered.

Lili just snorted. “Truly, we are going to be living in interesting times…” She mused.

Below them, the bosuns just gave up, because the four winds had joined in the midships for throwing their decorum to the wind, their Qi still reverberating with the roar of the deer, the flames of passion burning in their soul.

She wondered just what Rou was feeling at the moment.

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You know, I kind of expected to be out for longer. I had a good fight, I was utterly exhausted, and I figured I’d wake up in a soft bed somewhere sore but satisfied.

Instead I woke up to one of the most horrific smells that had ever graced my nose in both lifetimes, and I used to have to clean the collected shit of Crimson Crucible City.

It burned, and every nerve in my body fired at once. Consciousness came back with a jolt, and I flailed ineffectually, every ache and pain slamming into my brain at once.

“WhagarFUCKshit—” I spat out, Bailu’s face entering my vision as she put away the cultivator grade smelling salts.

“Wakey-wakey captain!” she cheered while I flailed, my nose burning. I didn’t go anywhere because Seiyu was hugging me from behind. “Come on, it's better if you’re conscious for this!”

We were in a room, not the arena— but we were still in the stadium, judging by the dull roar I could hear.

“Bailu, what the hells?!” I demanded. Ningjing’s little avatar was bouncing around and trilling happily, while Big D was doing the same beside her while I felt kind of like I was going to throw up.

“Concentrate please, Aruji.” Seiyu’s soft voice came from behind. “You must assist me in this. Being awake now means you do not have to enter a healing sleep later.”

That's about when I noticed her cool, water aligned Qi moving through my meridians. The gentle touch soothed inflammation and pooling around my dantian, ready to be absorbed.

My cheeks heated up at the intimate sensations. The bare skin of Seiyu's upper chest pressed against my back, skin to skin contact required for this kind of ‘healing’. Her Qi flowed through my body, and I could literally feel the joy and pride she had in me for my victory.

And, well… they were both right.If I completed my “crash” I would be out for probably a week to recover. While it wouldn’t be bad for me… it was probably for the best if I didn’t have to sleep that long.

I accepted her Qi, the parts of it she had stripped of most of its potency so I could actually absorb it, instead of the power rampaging inside my body.

I leaned back into Seiyu’s embrace, and she leaned forwards to rest her head on my shoulder, her eyes closed. Bailu bent down, wrapping my legs in bandages and Spiritual Herbs, her movements swift and sure. I had massive fractures all through my bones, my left leg and arm were broken entirely, and I could feel the closing holes in my lung where my ribs had pierced… but I could also feel them sealing shut. The healing, with my active attention, started to speed up, closing wounds that should have taken years to heal, if they healed at all, in the matter of minutes.

Being a cultivator was really damn convenient.

“So I won, huh?” I asked, really drinking it in. The memory of the fight was still fresh in my mind, and I could feel my heart pump faster just thinking about it

I had won. I had fought, and won and it felt… amazing. Daoyi had been exactly the person I had been looking for. He had matched every blow, he had It had been epic.

“You did.” Bailu said, looking up into my eyes with pride. “You were amazing, Rou.” 

Her smile was as bright as the sun. Seiyu simply hummed with contentment, her Qi letting me know exactly how she felt.

Big D and Ningjing finally got tired of hopping around me and they scrambled up  into my lap, both their eyes shining.

It felt amazing.

“Thanks for pushing me to join.” I said after a moment, and my Storm Wings both grinned wider.

“Our pleasure, Senchou.” Seiyu said.

“Yup, yup! Anytime!  Now here, eat this, we want you looking good for the reward ceremony!” Bailu added, holding out a pill. 

I took it, and let it help with the healing. By the end of the ten minutes… I could walk under my own power again. I was far from back in action, and if I had to really fight I would probably just pass the hell out.

And, then, it was time for me to head back out into the arena; the victor was required for the tournament to end, after all.

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The cheers hit me like a physical force. It was a solid wall of noise that made my bones vibrate, by heart thundering in my chest.

“Tian-Zhe! Tian-Zhe! Tian-Zhe! Tian-Zhe!”

The people in the stands were roaring as one, howling out Minyan’s—my last name. It was overwhelming. It was so much more than I had banked on when I first joined the tournament. Everyone was chanting in unison. I could see so many people—but I couldn’t see Daoyi. It was a little disappointing, but the dude was probably as jacked up as I was. We’d meet up later, I was sure.

But the other thing was that I couldn’t see the Soaring Heaven’s Isle contingent, which did make me a bit worried. Their box was almost conspicuously empty.

I turned my eyes forward, to where I was going.

Forward, upon a lone figure standing on a dais in the middle of the stadium. It was a grand thing, wreathed in flames, and gilded with gold, and upon it stood the Tenth Princess, Yunxi.

I reached the distance the organizers had told me, and dropped to one knee, raising my hands in the gesture of respect and bowing deeply. The victor of the tournament was allowed to merely kneel, rather than go into a full kowtow, a great honour, I was assured.

The cheers went quiet, when the woman raised her hand.

“Tianzhe Rou. You may rise. And approach.” she commanded, her voice carrying throughout the arena, and I did, rising up to my full height, and stepping onto the dias with her—or rather on the platform slightly below her. I had to look slightly up to meet her eyes, standing as she was on the dias, and up close I could really see her eyes; the gold band around her pupil  bled into the red like the coming dawn—they were beautiful. I met her gaze with calmness I didn’t really feel… but whatever she saw had her nod.

“It is rare that the Capital sees such a performance; That it sees one transcend the gaps between realms and emerges victorious.” She began, addressing the crowd more than me. “But what was most noticeable to us was not the strength of your arm, nor the skill with which you battled. It was your honour and your virtue. Even in the final bout, with it all on the line, that virtue never wavered. It was a feat worthy of this stadium. Of this competition, and of our grand capital!”

The crowd roared again, cheering as her voice rose, punctuating the point. “But it is one thing to view such actions from the outside. It is another to hear one’s words on the matter. Tell us, Tianzhe Rou. The sons and daughters of the Phoenix will hear your thoughts on this tournament, and of your victory.”

I paused for a moment, thinking about what exactly I should say… before I just decided to wing it.

“It is only because my opponent acted with equal virtue that I was able to display such a victory, your majesty. Liang Daoyi has my utmost respect, and if my virtue is to be commended, so too should his.” I began, my voice carrying to everyone watching. “As for my thoughts upon this victory, and upon this tournament, I shall address every competitor who participated.”

I could feel the energy in the air, as the crowd hung on to my every word. The princess’s gaze upon me was equally intense. I turned from her to look at the crowd.

“Thank you for coming here, and thank you for being my opponents. It is my dearest wish that you all grow stronger. I want you all to surpass yourselves, to ascend with speed and vigour!. Whenever we cross paths within these hallowed arenas, I want you there, ready to steal the title of Victor from me!”

People’s jaws dropped open at my declaration, the entire arena freezing at my words. The cultivators in their boxes looked baffled. 

“They say ours is the path of heaven—so then we must best challenges worthy of that title! I wish for only the strongest rivals! The most dedicated foes! Fools talk of stepping stones, using others to make their path easier. It is a worthless thing to think. We use steel to sharpen steel! We use fire to temper our blades! That is what a tournament is! To find worthy rivals that can press you, time and time again! Fellows whom sharpen you, and whom you sharpen in turn! And should I lose, then I will rejoice! I shall roar the name of the victor from the stands, for they have given me what is most invaluable! Knowledge of where I am lacking! They will show me how far I have left to go!”

I pointed directly at the set of crystals that were streaming this whole thing across the city.

“So Come! I challenge you! I challenge all of you! Let the sparks we make in our clashes light the fires that bring us to the heavens!”

For a moment, there was silence. My eyes searched the crowd, finding those who I had fought, and those who had fought Daoyi. Some of them looked shocked. Others determined. The guy whose hammer I had carved into a deer was staring at me with both anger… and a kind of grudging respect.

And then the princess spoke.

“It is a blessing to our Empire, that it produces men like you.” She said. Her eyes were still locked on to me… and a small smile had found its way onto her face, past the mask of indifference she had been wearing. “When you are prepared, we shall travel to the Imperial Vaults together, so you may claim your prize. But for now… Sons and daughters of the Phoenix. What have you to say to your champion?”

The spell finally broke.

The crowd exploded.

The dais we were on rose into the air, and I stood atop it, the fires blazing all around me.

And then I found out where the Soaring Heaven's Isle girls were, because a full eight skyships did a flyby, moving over the stadium in formation. Petals rained down, horns and trumpets sounded, blasting in victory.

And… for the moment, I basked in it. Despite how much my legs still hurt. Despite how I was just a bit light headed. For the moment, for me, it was actually kind of peaceful.

Then the dias touched down… and the party began.

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Comments

WarStrider72

Thanks for the chapter boss!

Seaspike

Damn, i cried so much.

Andrew Carter

Dude do you even read before commenting?

RBAWintrow

1st sentence, Minyan is spelled incorrectly. And thank you for the chapter, it is, als always, a balm for the soul. Edit: Casualfarmer you have once again crafted a masterpiece. I am in literal tears.

Jacob

PRAISE THE HEAVENS! Great chap thanks a bunch!

Icarae

I think this might be the wrong chapter cause this is 29 but the last one was 27

WarStrider72

I can imagine Minyan doing a little ✌️ sign and bragging to her fellow Elders how "Her" son managed to triumph over all others by not being chained to the SHI

Icarae

Also because the fight with Liyang was mostly skipped given we didn't see the start of it

KyoDaDungeon!!

i guess now we wait the missing link

Tesla Coil

He who says “You challenge the heavens alone,” has never had a challenge worth the name

Ford Fiesta

Absolutely hell yes this is everything I wanted out of this chapter and I know Shen Yu will be absolutely LIVID at having missed that fight

KyoDaDungeon!!

Quick fellow catcher of things chapter 28 is on RR

AkiIokuaAG

Okay, they’re definitely “kidnapping” the Imperial Princess. That is the ONLY way SHI could be persuaded to “chase out” The Young Master. Hope you’re have a great break CF, thanks for everything you do.

Justus Saucedo

this was everything I needed. and confirmed that SHI is the best AU. Even if CF stops updating this one. I will be happy with this. PEAK writing thanks so much

Icarae

Thanks

KyoDaDungeon!!

its fixed false alarm NOBODY PANIC!! and judging from the comments i guess it was a select few who couldnt see 28

Andrew Carter

This was everything that I needed today another amazing chapter

Jackjargon

Amazing!! Loved this!! Minyan is still an amazingly adorable proud mama bird!! I love the renewed weaving of the deer and the bird peak lore

fruit dragon

Shen yu pov when!?!!!?!!??!!?

Andrew Denton

"That was her boy holding his own." Shen Yu is going to lose custody at this rate. 😁

Daniel S. Mountain

I do hope Shen Yu gets a recording of this tournament, because he absolutely needs to see his boy like this.

Aaron Cudd

LET THE EARTH ROAR IT'S CHALLENGE AND LET THE SKY ANSWER IT'S CALL!!

BuccoBruce

Thank you for giving us Minyan’s POV! Everything I hoped it would be

Moon Fellow

Sportsmanship and comradely is the best thing in the world. Thanks for this chapter. :)

V01D

I feel like Shen Yu’s Cultivation Style would synergize with “defeat is not failure”

Ike

This chapter was everything I could want from it - this story is so goddamn good

Monkeytoster

There was a mistake in the patreon collection. The previous chapter is just called AU 28 instead of SHI AU chapter 28 so it didn't get collected into the group.

BuccoBruce

SHI is the absolute peak of this genre imo. It has so much of everything condensed into 30 chapters perfectly

Max Malekzadeh

What I want for this is a POV of Elder Ge finding out about "Minyan's son" and dreading having to tell Shen Yu about how her son won a tournament then being so confused by Shen Yu's reaction

fruit dragon

I imagine him on a battlefield with a mountain of demon corpses beneath him watching the tournament recording shedding one single manly tear

Island Relics

I cannot describe how much I want this

John

Does make you wonder what happened to Shen Yu. I wonder how the soaring isles will respond to the bellow from the deer.

ethan lamkin

Had a stupid grin on my face through most of that. Dam good stuff.

ScarletIce

I wonder if the SHI are even going to bother with the fiction of Rou's banishment after this. Not only would it be even more silly for him to believe it, SHI should want to make it clear to everyone that he truly is a member of the sect.

SlaveToMyWhims

As our elders said: "To victor go the tiddies".

KyoDaDungeon!!

is that the Dueling Peaks shtick being used

KyoDaDungeon!!

beats Big D's and Tiggers tournament finals

landfill

Cinema. There’s no other word for it

LaOnThErUn_07

Bruh he lost custody a long time ago

Ian Burns

I love this AU so much. How do they say it in Kill Six Billion Demons? Royalty is a fire that spreads to others. Meanwhile, in the background, there are going to be POLITICS. Soaring Heavens Isle is going to find that the Elder of Heavenly Pillar is an asshole, that his son displays virtue he could never match, and we'll have to see what to do about that. Especially when she learns he tried to have her boy crippled...

Chimera80

Oh no… how badly will Daoyi’s father fuck this up when he receives the letter…?

Ian Burns

"It is possible to make no mistakes and still lose. That is not weakness, that is life."

Ian Burns

For reasons of politics alone! A historic triumph witnessed by millions performed by a member of their sect.

Ian Burns

"The undefeated warrior is necessarily poor."

Gafgarion

great chapter, really like this AU.

BuccoBruce

There needs to be artwork of Rou smiling, holding his fist in the air in triumph with Minyan’s necklace glinting in the sunlight

eloi Boco

Had to reread that twice just because steep in this masterpiece. Especially that pillar and art of crafting mountains. TYFTC

giann flroesca

This is exactly why I love this series and Casualfarmer's writing so much. Bro was spitting bars with that speech full of friendly competition and honor but I found myself tearing up. His writing somehow draws out the emotions so well and in so many ways. I was fcking happy crying reading this shit man.

Chimera80

Re: Elder Ge finding out, depends who he assumes is the father. The SHI Elders all immediately assumed it was Shen Yu… but they primarily knew Minyan and knew she’d never accept another man. Ge, on the other hand, primarily knows Shen Yu and knows he’d never break his oath…

Chimera80

A *wise* man would be more than “a bit” worried about the missing SHI contingent… Who knows what those overly-hyped-up idiots are plotting? (keeping in mind there are maybe five members of the Four Winds present, and the rest are very… *enthusiastic*… midships girls)

SamHawke

shouldnt he be out hunting demons with the army?

MasterKronus

I am not certain how the currently planned "chase the exile away" act is going to work, with all this. I could definitely see a chase away via the attention of being the young master after this though.

SamHawke

Ge would already know about rou, shen yu wouldve informed them of him and be bragging about him~

Mrdelta

Maybe weekends?

Charlibee

That's exactly what I was thinking.

Burkholt

I'm greedy I want more!

Chimera80

“The Deer bellowed. And the feathers of Soaring Heaven’s Isle answered” - while this does work, the ladies of SHI themselves (as opposed to aspects of their cultivation) haven’t really been referred to as “feathers” before. Maybe “fairies” fits better here, referring to the people themselves?

Orchamus

Shen Yu gonna be irked, his boy not gonna want a name change when he's done so much under his mother's name😂 Also HELLUVA SPEECH YOOOO!!!

Ormus Von Orbulon

I imagine he's going to be toweringly furious at the Emperor for making him miss this -- and, though he'll begrudgingly admit that his Boss had a point, just like in the main timeline, he's 10,000% going to be willing to go to catastrophic lengths to have his petty vengeance on his Lord, all the same. The Emperor, unlike in the main timeline, is, of course, going to be aware of Rou/Jin's existence this time, and he'll be actively setting up contingencies to head his greatest, most powerful, and most unruly Special Agent off at that metaphorical pass.

Ormus Von Orbulon

I imagine Shen Yu is going to be toweringly furious at the Emperor for making him miss this -- and, though he'll begrudgingly admit that his Boss had a point, just like in the main timeline, he's 10,000% going to be willing to go to catastrophic lengths to have his petty vengeance on his Lord, all the same. The Emperor, unlike in the main timeline, is, of course, going to be intensely aware of Rou/Jin's existence this time, and he'll be actively setting up contingencies to head his greatest, most powerful, and most unruly Special Agent off at that metaphorical pass... As for the concerning question of "Why" Shen Yu missed it, Minyan will no doubt find out, soon enough...

Johan

Tftc

Thomas Lawless

Shen Yu gonna have to marry her to get some custody back.

losthobo85

I would love to have art of Jin on that dais, surrounded in flame, with the skyships flying by.

Truedragon5374

If Shen Yu isn't watching this live at the army camp, then he is going to DESTROY that demon army when he finds out what he missed.

Isak Mark

This was beautiful, the bird responding to the elk bugle, the ice lady thawing at the sight of her son prospering, the hilarity of there being cultivator sniffing salts, the heartfelt moment with the storm wings, the victory speech. This is absolutely my favorite webnovel.

Chimera80

I’m not so sure. In the original timeline, Minyan didn’t know about Jin, when he had gone to the CSS. So it’s plausible that Ge wouldn’t know about Rou, who went to SHI.

Alex

Finally... been waiting for this. Can't wait for shen yu to hear about it

Rafiq Raiden

If Shen Yu wants more than weekends he's just gonna hafta marry Minyan like he should have ages ago

Anon

So can we do a poll for the return of the main timeline and maybe get a month delay on it and pay for a bit more of the SHI timeline? This is peak

Rafiq Raiden

I reread the whole AU less than a month ago, to prepare for new chapters. Now I gotta reread all the tournament chapters to get another punch for the epicness.

Ricardo Sanchez

Momma Minyan is never letting Gramps live this down

Chimera80

Emperor doesn’t know anything about the link between this boy and Shen Yu

tsadi a

It got added to the collection recently. It was mis-titled as just AU 28 when it was posted so wasn’t included in this collection

tsadi a

It just got added to the collection, but it was published. It was mis-titled as just AU 28 when it was posted so wasn’t included in this collection

tsadi a

It just got added to the collection, but it was published. It was mis-titled as just AU 28 when it was posted so wasn’t included in this collection

Clifton Thrasher

So I've been rereading and this chapter makes me realize it's gonna be really difficult to follow through on the chase them out of town orders

mojosilver82

Another outstanding chapter!

DecoySheep

Lost custody so bad the paternity test came back 100% Minyan.

DecoySheep

Pretty sure everyone is just going to play it off as an inside joke.

Robert Hardwick

Idk, when you consider the imagery of the women of SHI were under the aegis of what i assume was a bird god beast, calling them feathers makes more thematic sense then fairies to me

Chimera80

Sure, but “fairies of Soaring Heaven’s Isle” is an *established* standard name for them. People call them that, they call *themselves* that, they consider it a standard to live up to. The fairies were also a very real thing - they were the living children of the Bird and the Deer. They all died in the Demon Wars.

Chimera80

I’m… not so sure. The description of his cultivation in Elder But Younger Sister does describe it as continually requiring *victory*, not success.

Ike

There’s no reason to assume that the meeting between Shen Yu, Ge, and Ran on the mountain, where Shen Yu bragged about Rou and told them that he might be sending him their way at some point, would not have happened in this time line. It predated Shen Yu being called by the emperor, and was a scheduled meeting every 12 years, so presumably it happened here, too. They know about Rou

Joanna

I believe that is discussed once or twice in the main series as well, in Shen Yu’s POV chapters

Menoetes Writes

Victory for Tianzhe Rou!! Glory for the Soaring Heavens Isles!! The spirits of the deer and the phoenix–diminished but never vanquished–touch once again, sending a ripple of their ancient love, power, and unity through the entire sect. Tears. So many joyful tears. Minyan is going to be unbearably smug when she recounts “Her" boy’s accomplishments to Shen Yu next time they meet.

PrometheusDarkflame

… Goddamn Rou knows how to Aura farm here. Thanks for the chapter!

Galven Star

You're truly in the mold of Brandon Sanderson, taking a break from writing a masterpiece to write another masterpiece.

Drewbrewich

Please tell me we re getting more chapters.

Keliana Tayler

From a mom of two going through some rough postpartum, thank you for this chapter. Beware of Chicken and all the AUs are such a wonderful source of comfort and familiarity. This chapter made today brighter. Thank you

David Eddy

I thought Rou's fight and victory were pretty great but now I'm Minyan-level jazzed about everything :) Multiple POV's and somehow each one is my favourite = Casualfarmer. So good for so long!

Nicolas Symeou

Not to be a downer, (this AU is very well written) but if this was the main series I probably would not have kept up with it. It's very stereotypical of the genre, with the overpowered MC who is the sole focus of the entire universe, plot armor and powerups etc. It's good for an AU, but no matter how well written, it takes something original (like the main BOC) to make an interesting OP protagonist.

Angel

Couldn’t have said it better myself! 🥹🤩

Angel

Tianze-Shen Rou? Is that a thing? But for real, all the biggest feels in this chapter! And did Rou just wake up a mostly dead ancient super weapon of a ship?? Did I misinterpret that?

Chimera80

past the one hundred and eight-fold seals, nestled in the firing chamber => this should be “one-hundred-and-eight-fold seals”, otherwise it technically means “100 seals and one 8-fold seal”

Chimera80 (edited)

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2026-10-14 05:00 Shower thought: the Midships girls are actually closer to the original Cultivation of the Bird than the Four Winds and the command staff. The whole icy self-control and disdain for earthly matters was developed after the men of the Deer fell, in order to control their rage and -key point- survive without to balancing force of their calmer, more contemplative Brothers. This is partly why Jin has flourished so well - Bailu and Seiyuu are pretty lousy examples of the discipline they’re *supposed* to have as champions of the East Wind (they’re explicitly “mustangs” who arose from the Midships) I really, really love the imagery here of how the Isles reacted to Jin’s battle-cry. Reminds me a bit of The One Power in Robert Jordan’s “Wheel of Time” books - something that was sundered in half, with the male half nearly extinct, but always intended to work together
2026-08-21 10:46 Shower thought: the Midships girls are actually closer to the original Cultivation of the Bird than the Four Winds and the command staff. The whole icy self-control and disdain for earthly matters was developed after the men of the Deer fell, in order to control their rage and -key point- survive without the balancing force of their calmer, more contemplative Brothers. This is partly why Jin has flourished so well - Bailu and Seiyuu are pretty lousy examples of the discipline they’re *supposed* to have as champions of the East Wind (they’re explicitly “mustangs” who arose from the Midships) I really, really love the imagery here of how the Isles reacted to Jin’s battle-cry. Reminds me a bit of The One Power in Robert Jordan’s “Wheel of Time” books - something that was sundered in half, with the male half nearly extinct, but always intended to work together

Shower thought: the Midships girls are actually closer to the original Cultivation of the Bird than the Four Winds and the command staff. The whole icy self-control and disdain for earthly matters was developed after the men of the Deer fell, in order to control their rage and -key point- survive without the balancing force of their calmer, more contemplative Brothers. This is partly why Jin has flourished so well - Bailu and Seiyuu are pretty lousy examples of the discipline they’re *supposed* to have as champions of the East Wind (they’re explicitly “mustangs” who arose from the Midships) I really, really love the imagery here of how the Isles reacted to Jin’s battle-cry. Reminds me a bit of The One Power in Robert Jordan’s “Wheel of Time” books - something that was sundered in half, with the male half nearly extinct, but always intended to work together

Chimera80

The key point there is that he said he might be sending Rou their way. This links directly back to the “point of difference” where this timeline separated (him choosing to send Rou to SHI). I consider that a valid reason to postulate that the conversation might have changed.

Chimera80

It wasn’t that they couldn’t see it (it was published back in May), it was just that the relevant post hadn’t been included in the “collections” tab.

Chimera80

It wasn’t that they couldn’t see it (it was published back in May), it was just that the relevant post hadn’t been included in the “collections” tab.

Just A Dude

“So Come! I challenge you! I challenge all of you! Let the sparks we make in our clashes light the fires that bring us to the heavens!” Anyone else spontaneously hear Sorairo Days start blasting out of nowhere at this bit, or is it just me?

Rob Engranajes

Rou is Minyan's son. Rou is also Shen Yu's GRANDson. That conversation is going to be hilarious 😂

Often Irrelephant

It's so good, isn't it? I still have two adult autistic kids at home trying to finish college/vocational school. Way fewer hours then when they were little, but playing emotional support himan is still pretty draining - a lot of times BoC type cozy is my emotional limit. (OTOH, we got my Xianghua twin into it, so we can fan theory together :-) Post partum sucks - take care of yourself <3

Ike

Yeah, but the decision to send him someplace came because it was forced by the emperor calling in his favor, which occurred AFTER the meeting with Ran and Ge. It’s pretty clear that Shen Yu wouldn’t have sent Rou anywhere at the time or even soon after that convo, as his own PoVs repeatedly described annoyance at forcing him to go away at a critical time in Rou’s training

BigBro Bluesman

Ok what if and I mean what IF in the main story Jin, and Mai go through some crazy shit with the interdimensional demon invasion and something happens something small but it glimpses through the folds of reality letting the Jins all of them to see each other before everything rubberbands back to normal during whatever caused it. No they dont meet the just get a short glimpse of what the world would have been "if" something like that would be insane and meta idk if the great author would go for it

Late Night Decaf

I can easily imagine Rou going on the war path if he genuinely hurts Daoyi. That said, CF putting him in the Sky Realm suggests that it may not be direct. Best guess? Daoyi joins the crew while the two sects handle their issues themselves. That could be real fun.

thevolunteer

It’s the best AU… so far. Elder Younger Sister(Younger Elder?) might get to these same lofty heights, it’s gonna depend on where the story goes from where it is

Nick

I hope you decide to really build on this AU someday and we get a few books out of it. Even with only 29 chapters it already blows away other stories in the genre. It's honestly so hard to find a good cultivation story with a likeable main cast on top of not having some dumb stat based "system" that ruins it. One of the greatest things about your writing is the way you write characters so well. They feel like they are/could be real people. It makes it easy to get invested in them and the journeys they take.

jeffrey niski

Bruh. We need two CFs. I need this series and the OG to be written simultaneously

Often Irrelephant

I was wondering if he already dragged Daoyi back to "discipline" him. Hopefully the letter will put an end to that and get him on the ship.

Often Irrelephant

Hope to see Daoyi on crew, asap. As spouse said: "Bro, bro, bro your boat."

Often Irrelephant

I kinda feel like *this* is Little D's destiny. That he will be the one to journey (hilariously) and awake the remnants of the Deer's spirit. He has his father's heart for this - he's a quarter Canadian by volume, after all.

Late Night Decaf

I wonder if Shen Yu is going to return and notice the extra soul merged into Rou, given how confused Minyan is about him not realizing the level of Rou’s talent.

MP Maillette

The AUs are unedited and usually stay so

ekwood

Very good. My only criticism is Rou's speech was a little much; it was a bit on the nose. The brilliance of how the character is usually written, at least in my opinion, is how splendidly concise and direct he generally is when expressing his views outwardly. The brevity generally gives it more impact and a broader range of possible interpretation. Like "Is he a simpleton or a genius? Is he a brilliant visionary or just a nerd quoting pop culture? (Both?) I want to stress I don't see it as glaringly out of place or anything, he could easily just be caught up in full shounen mode and acting the part of a mouthy kid. Or perhaps just heavily concussed. Regardless: enjoyable read. Wouldn't have bothered mentioning something relatively minor if the quality wasn't already so high.

PaulRovinsky

Oh my. Do you think people might assume Shen Bu is Rou's father? Cause holy hell, would that piss off both Shen Yu and Minyan

BigBro Bluesman

He's going to see the trop lol he's going to see it and he's probably going to go alone with it because if he doesnt he knows something else even worse will happen lmao

Mark

I love SHI AU

colton

That was awesome. please keep going

Meridian Prime

You really need to know a genre to its core to successfully subvert it, and SHI is the ultimate proof that CF absolutely Knows Ball when it comes to xianxia. I'm so damn happy to see this back, honestly love this just as much as the main series!

Randomapprentice

I think if this was the main story line this would be the end of book 2 or 3 instead of just chapter 30ish. It's just condensed, so it feels less deserved. But I agree with your poi t in general.

Randomapprentice

Argh! So good, but I'm still dying to know what mission the princess has for him.

Cranky Otter

Normally I prefer to comment on existing text rather than speculate, but since this AU fic parties hard, will Rou even survive the epic celebration party? The tournament didn’t finish him off, but the Storm Wings on a tear just might 🤣🥳😜

Ormus Von Orbulon

Apparently, "108 hands"is roughly 36 feet, or 11 meters -- Which is a Gigantic Goddamn Polearm, even if you're only loading it into your MegaBallista. I wanna see what our Human Thunderhoof and his hilariously hairbrained, super-effective bastardization of Earthbending and physics has to do with an ancient, ancestral weapon of not mere --legend-- ...but _MYTH_

j&ePenwell

Not 1/3? There being two in Rou Jin + one Mei? Just asking mathematically aboot the canadian-ness, eh?

Reinhold Wuerzner

That was an absolutely epic way of saying "COME AT ME, BRO!"

Nomadtheus

I mean it's not a leap to guess, and he was already thinking it before when he mentioned how Jin pays back every insult and gift a thousand fold. Plus what he just did with beating a 2nd stage spiritual realm by just refusing to stay down. I mean is their a more Shen Yu thing than that?

DecoySheep

And talking SO MUCH SHIT about shen you. Until he puts a ring on it.

DecoySheep

I mean true defeat is abandonment. You can get knocked down, but you best get up again.

Randall Brynsvold

It's going to be an escort parade, a processional party, to the point where the SHI women reluctantly release them and let them go.

Ricardo Sanchez

I’ve reread the Momma Minyan POV part of the chapter like 5 times already. I love how she’s the most proud mother bird

Matthew Picard

Without a stasis field or a time-dilation secret realm, that is a physical impossibility!! Shen Bu died nearly 300 years ago, and Rou is 19 or 20 years old!

StrifeWithClouds

Does anyone else think that while boss is on holiday in september, he's tapping maple tree's in canada n playing hockey badly as he's in his own head creating more BOC?

Kirivina

Isekai Terry: Tropes of Doom (An Isekai Adventure Comedy) on RoyalRoad. Hilarious!

ABTelford

I’m hoping Daoyi’s father wakes up to the benefits of winning knowledge through Roy’s speech and lets Daoyi off without being a jerk about losing…or maybe he is such a jerk it prompts Daoyi to leave the sect and join Roy and crew? That would also be a win for the story. 😁