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Baatar watched as his words landed. Master Rou’s face was always one of amusement or fascinated interest, and he seemed to always have an aura of friendliness around him. He had sat among them without a second thought, ready to continue their conversation.

There was always going to be a risk to telling an outsider of the secret core of their beliefs. The Imperials heard their words, to Listen, for the Earth Speaks. They imagined something less literal.

But every sign pointed to the man before them; and most of the Elders were in agreement. Some were still adamant that the Herald must come from the Ravine, that they must be one of their people. The people who had kept the faith, who had listened to the Earth. That some outsider was the Herald was like drinking bitter medicine.

And yet, there was precedent. Was not Ancestor Tianlan an outsider? Was not Ancestor Xiaoshi? The two righteous ancestors who had joined Altan, fought against those that would kill the Ravine Folk, and adopted their customs?

It was a logic even the most reticent could not deny.

 So their course was set.

Master Rou was told of their prophecy, their eyes focused on the man before them.

Baatar and the rest of his kinsmen tensed as Master Rou froze… slight shock entered his eyes—and it was not the complete shock of a man who was told something world shaking. It was subtler. Muted. It was the look of shock that Baatar was more used to on his rivals and enemies. A shock that said “how did they figure this out?”

That, more than anything, was the final thing that should have removed all doubt from anyone watching.

And then his friendly smile faded. It was not anger, it was not hostility, but it was a more neutral expression. 

That simple change shifted everything. Master Rou went from warmth and welcome and returned to being a mountain once more. Where before was a man who children approached without fear, who would listen intently to mortals with a smile, now there was the man who slaughtered thousands of demons, routed the Shrouded Mountain Sect with a letter, and who was proclaimed Master by the Cloudy Sword Sect.

And all that without the man touching a single drop of his Qi.

There were several swallows.

“That is indeed a heavy subject to spring on a man after such a wonderful feast.” Master Rou said, and some of the tension faded as he added a joke. “Let us say I am hypothetically this Herald of the Earth. What does the Grand Ravine demand of this Herald. And what does the Herald demand of the Grand Ravine?”

His eyes were focused solely on Baatar. Both were pertinent questions; and thankfully, Baatar had answers.

“It is only said that he will come as a friend and put the land to right. That he will usher in a golden era of peace and brotherhood; where our people will live without fear, and walk all lands, not just the Grand Ravine; as they did in the time of Altan, Tianlan, and Xiaoshi.” Baatar said. “And we.. are to assist the Herald however we can in making this a reality.”

Master Rou took a breath as he considered their words.

“And who was the one who gave you this prophecy?”

“The Earth told it to us, in the days near forgotten to memory; when heaven and earth were upended and when all things broke. A golden spire, blazing with power and Qi rose from the ground. A nameless ancestor came upon it, and in his greed, he sought to consume its power. But when he began to… he saw. He saw the past, he saw the present, and he saw the future. He saw what would happen if he consumed the crystal, and he saw what would come again if he did not.”

Again, Master Rou looked in the direction of their most sacred and holy place… and then everyone felt it. Something vast beneath their feet had shifted its full attention. Master Rou looked to the assembly again, and there were gasps.

Master Rou’s eyes were normally the brightest, most vital green, flecked through with little dots of gold.

Now, those little flecks had grown. At first, they looked like jagged cracks, before the gold consumed the iris completely. The mountain of his Qi once more reminded them of its presence, spearing up and towering over the top of the ravine. 

Something was resonating. The Qi changed, becoming more discernible to them all… and revealed only the unbridled truth. 

The eager surge of gold felt like the pillar of amber every one of them had meditated beside. It was the exact same energy that suffused that sacred place. Its power swelled and grew, pushing toward their holy site—when Master Rou pressed his hand to the ground. “Calm down a sec, okay?” he muttered.

And just as quickly as the gold had come, it faded. Master Rou commanded the golden energy with the patient tone of a father gently rebuking an eager child. The power of the Earth, so vast and unfathomable, retreated back first into cracks, then little flecks captured by green life.

Master Rou closed his eyes, his shoulders hunching slightly, like he was considering something.

No. More like he was listening to something. A minute nod. A slight cock of his head.

The Earth was speaking to him, at this very moment. Everything was, without a sliver of doubt, true. Their ancestors, every man woman and child who had kept the faith, was, in this moment, absolutely vindicated.

No one dared to speak. To speak now and break the silence felt sacreligious. Baatar’s son and the previous sect master, Ganzorig, was sweating. Tarkhan looked like he wanted to throw himself down and prostrate himself. Sarnai’s eyes were wide and awed.

Master Rou opened his eyes. He considered them. And then he clearly came to a decision.

“Show us, please. We want to see this spire.” Master Rou, no, the Herald of the Earth spoke. His words were heavy, and his eyes were clear.

It was a blunt admission. He did not play any word games or try to hide it; nobody would have believed him if he did, but his strength would have enforced the lie.

He was respecting them enough to tell them the truth.

But there was one thing that stuck out.

“Us?” Baatar asked.

“You invoked her name earlier. Tianlan.” The revelation was almost too much. Great Ancestor Tianlan, who had deposed the Azure Emperor, who was one of the greatest friends to the Ravine… Master Rou could speak with her?! Was it her spirit? Was she tied to the earth after the great cataclysm? “She wants to see it.”

This had opened up ten thousand more questions than answers. But all could feel the earth below their feet shifting. The rumble, the sheer vital energy beneath them.

“We will guide the Herald of the Earth.” Baatar said.

And so it was.

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“Well… that went.” I mused to Tianlan, trying to inject some levity as we followed Baatar toward this spire… “Holy war is still up in the air, though.”

But Tianlan didn’t respond. Her Qi was bubbling and shifting, and I left her alone to her thoughts, save for the mental equivalent of a comforting hand on her shoulder.

I honestly wasn’t expecting the immediate excursion, and I thought we would at least rest, and give them some time to discuss the idea if it was so important to them… but instead we left immediately. Those who were not cultivators were carried as we travelled down increasingly winding side passages…. Closer and closer to the resonance.

“They had a piece of me… and they just left it be?” Tianlan said, her voice fragile.

There was a lot of emotion in her words; everyone she had loved had ripped pieces from her in those dark days; torn her apart while she was still alive, and completed in shattering her already broken mind.

In a lot of ways, what the cultivators had done to Tianlan after the breaking had completed what the demons had started. Maybe, if they had managed to set aside their differences, half mad as they were, Tianlan could have recovered back then.

But they didn’t. And she hadn’t.

To hear, that even after thousands of years of diminishing Qi an exposed part of her blood had been purposefully protected and preserved…

I could feel the joy. The gratefulness. But also the fear of what she might find. It was enough that she had asked me to give them her name.

At cultivators speed, it didn’t take that long for us to get there, though we soon had to slow down. There were multiple hidden passages, murder holes, and guards that had to be spoken to as we got deeper and deeper into the ravine, the walls closing over our head. For a while, we were underground.

And then we hit a barrier. It was old and weak, but I could feel the ancient power behind its construction, holding on just enough. It flared for a moment, and then seemed to recognise us, fading once more into the background.

We stepped through, and the ravine opened up again.

It opened into something beautiful.

Moonlight poured into the glade, illuminating it with pure silver light. Fireflies danced through the air, and soft grasses and moss cushioned our feet. Flags, faded by time, were held up by rope, and three statues stood, as if friends.

Two men and a woman. Their features had faded to time.

“Altan. Xiaoshi…” Tianlan whispered. I could feel her reaching out a hand, before she swallowed, and then turned her attention to the center of the glade.

The crystal jutted from the ground slightly at an angle. It was about a foot and a half taller than I was, and as thick around as a large tree trunk. It gave off a dull amber radiance, it too worn by time, but it still stood.

And still emitted Qi. Tianlan’s Qi. Unbowed, and still there, even after so long. I felt it brush my face, as we stepped into the glade. It brushed my face, and then paused.

Curiosity. Shock. Eagerness. Hope. It felt like Tianlan, so long ago, back when she was just a mass of emotion, rather than the person I now knew.

Tianlan’s own hands reached out… and the crystal started to glow. From amber to gold.

Which, naturally, is when we both got sucker-punched by the torrent of emotions and memories.

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I beg forgiveness for the cliffhanger.

Comments

Hamon A.D.

I need to sleep though.

Gg

You are forgiven

thevolunteer

I’m really not sure I forgive you.

Ford Fiesta

Less a cliffhanger and more “dangling us over a ravine’s edge” eh?

WarStrider72

Well, Jin and Tianlan both reached out towards the Prothean Beacon. I wonder what vision they're seeing? Hopefully not a vision of doom.

Buck

Going to be hard to grant forgiveness for a cliffhanger of this magnitude. 🙄

Will

The Cliff!!! It's too large.

Jackjargon

Noooo I was so happy now there is a cliff!! And a weekend one at that!!! Still very had we got to see how Jin was going to play the herald situation and so excited for what is to come!

Jennifer Leigh

You are an author of serialized novels. Cliffs should be your forte. This one is a doozy. 😉

Qjohn85

WTF!?!? To leave such a crazy cliffhanger should be illegal.

Robert Mullins

Jin: *arrives to clean shit up.* Ravine Elders: "Behold, great one the prophecy forespoke this moment." Jin: " What does this prophecy require of us?' Ravine Elders: "That we clean this shit up." Jin: "huh... ominous but convenient I suppose."

Danny

I've been worried that Jin and Tianlan were going to have to close off this wound and the people of the Ravine would not take that lying down. Now it feels like we're going to be able to come to an agreement that works for everyone.

Monik

Sucker punched by emotions is right. The cliff it is steep this chapter. Thank you for the chappy.

Guber

Curse you and your cliff hangers! 😠 Heh, puns! Because...you know....ravine?? Eh?

Seadrake

No forgiveness.... at least until the next chapter

Splutty

Maybe it should be unediloosed instead of uneditied?

Michael Beard

Awesome chapter Stupid cliff.... Now I'm just dangling here by my fingertips... waiting for Monday.

Joel Morgan-Bullock

Forgiveness will only be granted if you release the next chapter! Also fantastic I've been waited for this for so long and you did not disappoint

Ligeia

Don't worry about the cliffhanger, CF. You're very kind to us by not ending nearly every chapter with a positively agonizing cliffhanger the way some authors do! (I'm talking about you, Shirtaloon!) Your descriptions of the beautiful places in the Azure Hills are so evocative I can see them. Thank you for writing so expressively and with such amazing descriptions!

Johan

Tftc

Sean Ulrich

I will forgive the cliffhanger if the next chapter awesome

Valderan

You got till Monday! Monday! You hear me?!

Sean Ulrich

My first thought was “A new hand touches the beacon.”

Ike

The perfect cliffhanger spot tho

Galven Star

I expected nothing less than a cliffhanger.

Buddman22

Feels less a cliffhanger and more a promise of a delicious main course after a marvelous appetizer. 👏

Dale Beerling

Honestly kinda hope Tianlan actually greets some of these guys as herself now. Not the whole Ravine, just these Elders.

ScarletIce

You shall not be forgiven into you post the next chapter. :p

Zach Gartman

I bet that this prophecy involving the grand ravine tribe being allowed in all lands is because our resident farmer takes on apprentices and then negotiates with the emperor to heal all the lands.

Eugen Skladany

At least next week is not break week.

Caliburn0

I'm not masochistic enough to enjoy a cliffhanger like this.

Cindermoth

Oh this is gonna be good! Bittersweet as well probably

Sandpirate

I don't think you're sorry for that cliff hanger 🤣 Awesome chapter, stoked for the next one

Some guy

Cow down to this “daddy” and beg 10000 times for your cliffhanger misdeeds to the heavens (audience)

Will Iam

Yeah, no forgivness here. May you find stones in uncomfortable places until the resolution

Inky

Cliff hannnnggggeeerrr… great chapter!!

Trasen56

Honestly don't think it should switch PoVs, to me at least it would be better if this entire chapter was Baatar's pov. This is a grandoise moment in every narrative and I think switching to Jin's internal monologue kinda takes away from that.

Teh One & TrueTabi

Obviously you should change your handle to CliffFarmer

GlowCloud

Well that was just mean.

RBAWintrow

You dare leave it on a cliffhanger? You court praise! Cliffhangers are thematic for the Grand Ravine Sect though. So all is forgiven.

Seth

Goosebumps

Undead PettinZoo

You hear a woman's voice... Another hand has touched the beacon.....

CASTER

Rosymyne would not understand that statement lol

Chuck Haeberle

Imma need someone to explain that reference to me

Ligeia

Moo! Mooo! (Sorry, couldn't resist the typo.)

Keliana Tayler

It's a reference to meridia's beacon from Skyrim. The item can spawn basically anywhere and will trigger that voice line the moment it enters your inventory. And the voice is LOUD.

icesharkk

he, no get the fuck back here and finish the scene!

V01D

… this popped into my head: “I art thou, Thou art I”

Joanna

No apology needed. That is absolutely where the next chapter break should go. AAUUUGH when can it be Monday?!?!?!?!!?

Slasher12 .Slasher

It's alright CF. Just, if you do it too much I think I might explode but that's natural

Joanna

Ooh, that would be cool

AkiIokuaAG

This is nearly as bad as One Piece episode 1180. Kinda curious if this is going to be similar to the instance with the memory crystal and the Temple Dog, or if the memory rush is only for Jin and Tianlan. Tomorrow I will have completed my thirty sixth journey around the Sun. Thank you for the early gift.

ABTelford

Oh my gosh I LOVE this chapter! And oh my gosh, you ended it THERE?!? 🤪😆. Thanks for a golden chapter! (Pun intended) 😇

acg

...so we get to the spice provided golden path visions....huh....lisan al-grain indeed

Moon Winchester

You can beg for forgiveness, but you better give me that fucking chapter soon. I love you, please.

Moon Fellow

Dang it, I wanted to make that reference!

Ken Horne

Seriously, greatly written, loved it, can't wait for more. The emotional part of me left in a crystal is screaming profanities though.

FollyThePenguin

You better beg for forgiveness! At least show us Bataars reaction to this

Nathaniel Jacob moore

Ngl no forgiveness, im going to be grumpy and impatient all week now until that chapter drops xD

Hasenearl

I have a question. In v8c3 the Grand Ravine ancestor is called Atlan all throughout the chapter, and here it is now Altan. Which is the real one? Looking forward to the next chapter!

Regan

Happy for the gremlin to know some people always looked after her

John D Jones

Late Monday/Early Tuesday can't come soon enough.

Bunny

Tftc but you absolutely son of 3 father's XF

eloi Boco

Katow 100 times for this Affront and this granddaddy shall forgive you for the cliff hanger Edit: thanks for the chappies

Alice Blake

It's okay, the cliffhanger is a bastard son of three fathers, but you're all good, CF.

ZJJ

So did we just meet the land spirit of the Grand Ravine? She should be very powerful with all the Grand Ravine people believing so absolutely in her. They call her The Land... what will she call herself I wonder. Maybe she's Tianlan, Second of Her name, now that they know it's what big mama spirit is called.

Burgerpants

So much respect for the Ravine people! I hope they do get their golden era of peace and brotherhood

Benjamin Lawton

Only valid if Jin gets a nifty new anti-undead sword out of it.

Serian Angel

God the rivers this next chapter is going to make me cry.

Alex Ingraham

Lies! CF walks the evil Dao Path of The Cliffhanger and gleefully uses it upon us humble fans time and time again! *dramatic gesture of despair* Why CF, whyyy~? Why do you torment us so!? All we want is to read more of your storyyyyy... 😭😭😭 ... and the dramatic spirit has left me. Back to waiting. TYFTC.

seth4bucks

I knew the cliffhanger was coming, I could feel it as I kept scrolling and that wonderful kept creeping closer to a chapter length with so much left to cover. Amazing writing as always, but man I was hoping for a double chapter or something.

Muir

Given the state of the Ravine with a faded shard of Tianlan backing it, I'm extremely curious how connecting back to her main self is going to make it react.

KyoDaDungeon!!

This mother-... You'll be forgiven if the chapter isn't released as late as possible

Often Irrelephant (edited)

Comment edits

2026-10-19 12:00 As a *complete* aside, the new IKEA themed Kallax mod (yes - it’s a real thing) comes with Another Meridia’s Beacon that is just as loud.
2026-10-18 05:02 As a *complete* aside, the new Skyrim IKEA themed Kallax mod (yes - it’s a real thing) comes with Another Meridia’s Beacon that is just as loud.

As a *complete* aside, the new Skyrim IKEA themed Kallax mod (yes - it’s a real thing) comes with Another Meridia’s Beacon that is just as loud.

Often Irrelephant

Did we know that his eyes go all freaky gold? Because I don’t remember that. Also, I kind of half expect Mei and Chunky’s spidey sense to start tingling so they can go hold her spirit hand. Also, still hilarious they’re like, “Oh - Ancestor Tianlan is somehow still connected to Tianlan Shan?! Amazing!”

Momo

Your begging has borne no fruit, I demand the next chap.

Angel

Crying! My sappy heart can’t read this without crying. It’s incredible they’ve maintained such faith over what, 6,000 years? It’s never been super clear to me how long it’s been since her breaking. To have that faith vindicated after so long made me cry! Then imagining her emotions as she realized there was one group of people who decided not to rip and tear at her soul. 🥹😭

Sean Ulrich

He’s a farmer. Demon killing weed wacker

ZJJ

I'm willing to forgive the cliffhanger given the present I found on Audible: Beware of Chicken 6 release date is December 8 with the vocal stylings of Travis Baldree! Yes! Yes! Yes! While I'll have to wait longer for the audiobook than the next chapter, I waited much longer for book 5 and the Monday chapter now seems like a blink away by comparison. Thanks for the new upcoming book!!!

CUI13

I believe Altan is a typo

Sam

It might depend on if the Peace of Shennog - where a Shennog Cultivator gets things manipulated so people don't fuck with them- can only be done for a contractor, or if the Earth Spirit can choose to do the same for others. Because if Tianlan can, I would be entirely unsurprised if she puts in place something similar so the Ravine doesn't need to worry about getting attacked in future.

PickledTink

Make it a little sister!

Artur Vogt

This hurts... jesus how can you let us w8 even more????

Idan tal

Well, my grandmother just passed away so here I am looking for some good vibes from this story. Even when rereading it’s doing the job. Thanks for the great story CF, it’s helping people more than you know

Edward hollowell

I need a release time frame to ease my mind because i fell off this cliff into the ravine

Often Irrelephant

I'm sorry for your loss, but glad you've found the story and comment section. It's definitely a comfort for me when I hit can't even.

Melanie Me

It was said before that you cant walk the path of Shenong on purpose. Like other cultivator methods. It is an accident and you have to turn away from immortality forever. Plus I think there can only be one Contractor per Earth spirit. So no extras for Tianlan Shan.

Zach Gartman

Absolutely, but there has to be a way for him to explain the process and then set his apprentices loose to find other spirits.

Jon Dough

What a jerk!!! That's a rough cliffhanger. Hahahaha