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The walk back to where we would be staying for the night was silent. None of the Ravine folk seemed to want to break the quiet, and honestly, it suited me right now…because I was pretty fried.

I had managed to suck it up for Tall-lan’s sake, but god damn. That had hurt. I wanted to curl up and whimper for a while. Since arriving into this world, I had been beaten to death, hit with multiple lightning bolts, cut up, smashed though multiple trees and a mountain, been poisoned—yet half of what Tianlan had felt was probably the worst pain I’d ever been in.

I was managing to keep how I felt about the entire experience under wraps from Tall-Lan, but Tianlan knew. I could feel a mental touch, equivalent to a hand on my shoulder.

The feeling of gratitude was enough to turn the boil of my emotions into a dull simmer. I had promised my friend. I had followed through with it. Yeah it sucked… but the memory of the pain would fade.

Of course, I’d do it again without a second thought.

But I was still simmering, and right now I knew I was fixing to bite somebody’s head off. I had already been a bit snappish at the Ravine Folk earlier. Hells, I probably would have started smacking bitches if any of the Ravine Elders had pushed the issue, but luckily for them they were smart enough to actually listen.

Thank Tianlan, I suppose. No wonder she was so fond of these people, they actually had brains—or at least knew when a fight wasn’t going to go their way. 

Maybe it was Tianlan’s feelings infecting me. The memories of Altan were quite vivid. I would have liked to have met the guy. He was vivacious, full of life, and absolutely ride or die. The Ravine Folk had always been Tianlan’s friends. Whenever she had been sad, or feeling lonely, she had come here, to bask in the ravine, or to simply see her friend.

Tianlan trusted these people enough to let them know at least a bit about herself. We’d see how it all panned out in the future. But for the moment, playing the mysterious master and saying they were already on the right path seemed like the correct choice. I’d like to think I was getting better at acting. It was getting easier at least… and the general grumpiness I was feeling had probably helped a little. 

We got back to the grounds pretty quickly, and I was shown to our quarters for the night; A large yurt. Big D was on top of it. He raised a brow and I nodded at the rooster, indicating that I was fine. He hopped down to my shoulder. Rizzo popped out from under his coat, sniffing at me.

I bid the Ravine Elders good night, a bit more pointedly than I probably would have normally. Again, they got the hint, bowing and dispersing.

I let out a little sigh, and entered the yurt. I wasn’t too out of it to notice how nice it was. It wasn’t as grand as the Magisterial Palace in Grass Sea City, but it had something those cavernous rooms didn’t. A kind of warmth. The windows were open, letting the cool breeze of the ravine blow through the structure—and what a wonderful breeze it was, full of the smell of flowers and greenery. The walls were lined with rugs, showcasing the designs of the ravine. They were really nice. Thick and plush, and I would have to get a few of these. There was a stove and a chimney as well, both currently unlit, and the bed was large, with one of the stove’s pipes going under the bed so in winter, it would be warm.

I could see myself actually living in one of these—maybe I should make one, because this was practically glamping.

Meiling was standing in the center of the room. She had been reading a scroll, and looked up when I came in. Zhuye was already asleep. My wife stood without comment and marched up to me, her purple eyes searching mine.

“Are you alright?” Meiling asked, her voice quiet. Her fingers ghosted over my body, glowing a soft green. She was searching for aches and pains, but there were none. It was all in my head in the end.

“I’m good,” I replied, catching her fingers. “Are you?”

“I only caught a bit of it.” Meimei said, waving things off. “Though even that much was…bracing.”

I felt Tianlan’s wince, and Meimei gave her a soothing mental pat.

“Bed.” I declared, reaching down behind Mei’s legs and scooping her up. Meimei just smiled.

Zhuye stirred as I got into bed with my wife, clambering over to lay on top of me. Big D settled onto the pillow where my neck met my shoulder, his feathers warm and soft, while Rizzo disappeared into Meiling’s sleeve.

I let out a sigh. Family cuddles made everything better.

I fell asleep and didn’t dream.

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The morning had me feeling a lot better, and ready for the day ahead. It was really interesting seeing the ravine breakdown the yurts and the campgrounds. They were just so fast at it.

“Breaking camp swiftly is something everyone learns,” Baatar had informed me when I asked, and I got the implication. In case they needed to run and disappear into the side passages.

The Patriarch hadn’t changed after last night. He seemed to have taken my words to heart, acting exactly the same as he had, which was appreciated.

The others looked to be trying as well, but several of them made aborted bows when they saw me.

A work in progress.

Our breakfast was a kind of soup—meat, fat, and berries that grew in the Ravine. It was simple fare, but I had asked for what they would normally eat instead of a grand feast like last night. It was filling, and energizing.

It was good, and with the tea, we were soon ready for the first thing we were going to do today—Olsokh Ir practise.

I was actually excited I got to be Tarzan. The rope blade was surprisingly intuitive… and doubly so when I had Tall-lan in my head helping me through things. Though we did need a different name for her, Tall-lan was fine as a joke, but…something for the future.

I ended up kind of speeding through the beginning portions of the explanation, mostly because I was cheating.

“And then around the forearm like that,” Tall-Lan said, keeping it tight… but lose enough to slip my arm out just in case. Her voice was firm, but full of warmth. It was a little strange to have a second passenger, but she was enough like Tianlan. I didn't really notice it.

I let it rip, swinging the grappling hook-like tool to wrap around one of the tree’s branches, then kicking off, swinging to another horizontal tree. With a jerk of the rope, it loosened from the bind it had on the branch, and it allowed me to pull it back in while I landed. I couldn’t help the grin that came to my face.

“You’re a natural, Master Rou!” Tarkhan called.

I looked down from the top of the tree and smiled, sitting down for a moment to watch the others.. Rizzo had taken to things like a natural, and swiftly ascended to be beside me. Gou Ren and Xianghua came next, the two of them both surprisingly good at it, while Biyu was taking a recording of Yun Ren hanging upside down. Meimei missed her first throw and laughed while Sarnai helped correct her form. Big D was the furthest behind—mostly because he and Babe were still deciding on which kind of knife head he should use on the end of his rope.

Washy had appointed himself “lifeguard” in charge of catching anybody who fell. He was relying entirely on the bees to pay attention for him, because he was utterly consumed with whatever he had on the stove… and it wasn’t like any of us could actually get hurt by falling at this point.

Suyan was sitting with Zhuye, who was playing with a length of rope, looking at it curiously.

The people of the ravine who had stayed were all looking on with small smiles, and Baatar seemed particularly pleased, the Patriarch of the Grand Ravine seated on a rock.

The old man had three kids using him as a jungle gym, and he didn’t seem to care about the propriety of the matter, simply looking utterly at peace.

…they really did do things different in the Ravine. And they were making it really easy to like them. I turned from the others, and looked at the side of the ravine.

“Xiaoshi could make it to the top of the ravine in less than ten seconds.” Tall-Lan goaded.Tianlan and I laughed at the blatant challenge

So I took her up on it, my Olsokh Ir unlimbering. My eyes roved over the trees, planning a path. 

And then, I was Tarzan. Or Spiderman. But hopefully not George of the jungle, I don’t think the trees would survive me hitting them.

“Whooo!” I cheered.

“Not bad!” Tall Lan declared.

Tall-Lan’s more reserved personality was because she had been in shock. With the morning, and time to recover? She was definitely still Tianlan. 

Even after thousands of years of what was basically worship, her core was the same. She was a bit different. More… regal, I guess, and like I had joked last night she spoke with gravitas. But she was hardly reserved. She was actually kind of loud. She was less excitable than Tianlan, less animated, but just as relentless. 

Which honestly made sense, considering what the Ravine said was a proper woman.

“Lets go!” Tianlan cheered as I swung twice around a tree before launching myself nearly vertical.

Which thinking about it… might have been based off of Tianlan in the first place?

Everything kinda fit. Fierce, unafraid to speak her mind, fond of hunting and fishing and climbing. And above all, a defender of the home.

Had Tianlan, while she was incarnated, accidentally made an entire culture think that tomboys were the ideal woman?

That would actually be kind of hilarious.

Chuckling to myself, I pushed the thought from my mind, and instead focused, swinging up the ravine wall until I was at the top of it.

I was, naturally, slower than Xiaoshi and Altan. But it had been fun as hell. I crouched on a tree near the top, just taking it all in, and letting the breeze tousle my hair.

I let out a breath, and let the breeze flow through my hair.

“Ah… I’ve felt this a thousand times in my memories. But here… it feels so different,” Tall-Lan whispered.

“Its always different in person,” I agreed. I stood up from my crouch on the tree, and let out a breath. I allowed myself to tip backwards… and I fell.

The wind whistled past my ears, the horizontal trees flashed by me, with little tilts of my shoulders.

And at the last moment, my blade lashed out. It wound around a tree, and I swung around it, bleeding off momentum, before releasing it and landing at the bottom of the ravine once more. The rope uncoiled from my arm with ease, and I looped it into my belt and sheathed the blade in one motion that felt right.

I think I was going to enjoy myself for the rest of this visit.

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Jin, Jin, Jin, of the jungle, strong as he can be...

Comments

Andrew Denton

"Had Tianlan, while she was incarnated, accidentally made an entire culture think that tomboys were the ideal woman?" I had not thought of them as tomboys; I was too busy thinking of them as awesome.

WarStrider72

Jin, Jin, Jin of the Ravine, WATCH OUT FOR THAT TREE

Inky

Spider Jin.. spider Jin.. does what ever Tianlan does. Oooo, maybe we will get a cute spider man kiss.

Ike

Waaaaah, watch out for that tree!

Crimson wolf

(OOOOOOOHHH) Tree, look out for me!

Cheuk Hin Ho

Watch out for that tree! Ahhhhh!

CPU Pyro Heart

Well Tianlan make an entire culture fucking right, TOMBOYS ARE THE BEST frfr, she enlightened them as a good Goddess should

Daniel S. Mountain

Like New George, I rather doubt he looks anything like Brendan Fraser.

THEMIGHTYBOXHEAD

WATCH OUT FOR THAT TREE! no wait. WATCH OUT FOR THAT JIN! lol

T-Dawg 2099

"Had Tianlan, while she was incarnated, accidentally made an entire culture think that tomboys were the ideal woman?" Absolutely based

Dwayne Parker

“I crouched on a tree near the top, just taking it all in, and letting the breeze tousle my hair. I let out a breath, and let the breeze flow through my hair” This reads awkwardly. Maybe rephrase this a bit?

CUI13

WATCH OUT TREE FOR THAT JIN!

Mikah B

Tomboys with long hair are the best

Chimera80

I mean, Yun Ren is already upside-down…

Inky

He is going to be smothered in kisses. Hehheheeh

BlueMage_VT

"Watch out for that tree!" 😂 Thank you for the chapter! I'm curious how Ba Be will even use one.

V01D

Xulian should connect some ropes to her blades; she can even weave with them! Perhaps ropes made from Xinghua’s place; that would be a facinating combination, a merge of cultures (given they view Gou Ren as a Cousin)

Often Irrelephant

Wait till Washy brings back java java (buzz buzz buzz, for those who've seen the movie).

lockx

An alternative viewpoint of the Ravine witnessing him doing something that turns out even they can't do so smoothly would be hilarious

Bunny

Tftc

H

All this rope. It’s a shame The Grand Magistrate didn’t come with them 😉

Sardeed

Tomboy Supremacy!

Alex

Mostly uneditied. ngl, I chuckled.

Ligeia

I was kind of hoping he'd run into Sid Sloth at the top of the ravine...but more seriously, it really sounds like Jin was having a fun day!

BargleNawdleZouss

I'm shocked that there haven't been any botanical treasures spotted by Meiling, so far.

ekwood

Well, that's probably another spirit for the court sorted. A very senior one, technically.

Angel

Which is what makes YOU awesome! 👏

Kaladin

Is either Tianlan able to incarnate? Also they still need to fix the dragon veins here right?

Brad

Biyu definitely went for a Spider-Man kiss when Yun was upside down.

Johan

Tftc

RJKY

Gou Ren the Spider-Monkey.

StarkRG

Tianlan said she didn't want to form a body since it would allow her to make too many personal connections. Tall-lan might, but my guess would be that she either can't or doesn't want to for similar reasons.

D-Finn

Tftc. As nice as these chapters are I hope we get some intermittent Mom of Grass chapters soon.

Chuck Haeberle

Man we need Pi Pa and Chun Ke out here so we can see Spider Pigs!

ABTelford

This was a fun, relaxing chapter! I especially liked that you didn’t skip how hard the experience was on Jin. Skipping the hard emotional after effects is what makes lots of adventure stories shallow. This has depth. 😇❤️

ABTelford

Alt name for the Tall-Lan if she becomes a permanent spin off. 😁. Tah-zan (or some similar Chinese Or Mongolian equivalent. Hehe.)

Jennifer Leigh

Don't worry. I'm sure Meiling will get some nice souvenirs for her teacher. 😉 After all, Jin is too pure to know about that.

ABTelford

Thanks for a Saturday chapter! I always miss reading new chapters on weekends so this was a real treat!

Philip Hunt-Bull

Tree, tree, tree of the jungle, WATCHOUT FOR THAT JIN

Cindermoth

Jin absolutely isn't. He just hasn't caught on his teacher is as well

CUI13

I know it says mostly uneditied, but is is Altan or Atlan? Cuz I fully thought Altan was a typo when it surfaced a chapter or 2 ago, but now I'm not sure.

Shweta Narayan

Jin, Jin, Jin of the jungle, vaporized that tree!

Isak Mark

The last book was sort of terrible, this one is just not enjoyable.

jord

We should probably congratulate the people of the ravine for being one of the very few cultures that are objectively correct

Slasher12 .Slasher

Alright fellow CF fans we gotta come up with a name for Tall Lan. I vote Princess Gremlin or atleast that translation in Ravine-speak

Hasenearl

Nah, Jin knows, he gifted them some special rope that they like to use ;)

Often Irrelephant

💯 Random 3 day old question, but what fiber are they using for the rugs? I know horse meat has been mentioned, but I can't imagine spinning that into a wearable fiber. Sheep 🐑 are traditional, but cashmere comes from goats 🐐- do they maintain flocks at higher altitudes? Do we have fiber sloths? Gigantic angora rabbits? Rugs take a massive amount of fiber - a knitter wants to know 🤭