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So... I must report another shameful retcon. Demesne chapter 250 has been edited to include some new material that I thought was better placed there. It doesn't really change the chapter, but it... well, it makes things in later chapters flow better.  Again, I'm very sorry for this.

EDIT: So... I screwed up some chapters and used the wrong word. I went back to edit them, and it should be noticable, but if you feel I used a certain word in a certain way before... that's why. My Shameful Retcon count has increased again...

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Sparifankerl

Thanks for the heads up. I just reread the chapter and couldn’t find anything obviously new and am too lazy to compare it to the old version. But I have the feeling that we’re just a few chapters away from a dragon and that it’ll come at the worst moment for Lori and the malcontents.

Justin Case

What was added? I didn't notice it on reread.

SCM2814

Just the little part about Shana brining up her aunt is an authority and moving the family means she needs to be replaced.

Justin Case

This is getting out of hand, now there are two of them! The only word I can think of that you might have adjusted is "meanings"? I think it used to be "tamings" for deadspeakers?

SCM2814

Yeah. For some reason, I kept mistakenly using the latter sometimes. It’s a related verb in-story, but not the right word, ya know?

Justin Case

I thought tamings made sense for deadspeakers since it is a word more closely associated with life.