Update on the June rendered piece story!
- Yeah sure that sounds fun! 9
- Nah, I'd rather not. 0
Alright, I got a few paragraphs out, looking at the piece again I'm not entirely sure if this is the kind of art work that would fit a writing poll, considering the fact that a lot of the actions are predetermined (of course our catboy is going to be sliding footballs in next, then the baseballs...) but I'm still not entirely settled.
I was thinking that, since I want the situation of this piece to be his roommate intruding by accident, why not play into the theme of him wanting to show off his sloppy hole a little bit, or off the theme of the roommate catching him before they're noticed? Some interesting writing could be done with that, and it would give something that you all could poll and make suggestions on. I'll leave a poll on this post as to whether that'd be wanted or if I should just, try to work out some more lines and wrap the story up myself.
ALSO!!! I am STILL trying to figure out a name for him (hence me not mentioning a name so far in the story), so please feel free to comment name suggestions if you have them!
If you have any other thoughts on this beyond a simple "yay" or "nay" then feel free to comment em too. Thanks guys for all the support you give me, I appreciate that a lot.
Cheers!