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Disintegrity 54 hd (Patreon)

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2020-08-31 23:29:01
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2026-06
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https://sta.sh/21papryzrmha

Nothing new to see here, I believe this page was remade not too long ago... So I got nothing special to say about it !

In other news, I have still a bunch of commission to knock down that'll keep me from posting comics for a while. There's a catch, not that it'll necessarily interest you. So, there's three I have sketched and have to color and ink, there's one I sketched and am waiting on the client's words on whether I can go on and there's one that's barely sketched at all.

The catch is that two of these are comics pages ! So technically, I would post them here, unless the client tells me not to. 

But anyway, you've been updated, we good, now I have to pose this Disintegrity oage everywhere.

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Eldkatten

In my opinion the old version, where the "surprise gush" is at the end of the page, is a key point in the story. While Larsen is tight and nervous and unsure, his body just reacts, revealing Larsen's passion for Zee, though his mind is still not ready to admit to that. Larsen's reaction in the next page - curling up, crying, passionately hugging Zee - shows, in my opinion, that Larsen is mentally catching up with what his body has just stated clearly. That becomes even more severe through the fact that Zee didn't do a good (blow) job at all. Actually I found that cute in the old version, Zee being unsure what to do and just fiddling around. And it makes it unfair that Zee laughed at Larsen on page 48, when Larsen admits that he doesn't know what to do when trying to blow Zee. The order of things and what I understood as the climax of the page (pun definitly intended) has changed now in the new version, masking the significance (in my opinion) of that sudden, unintended and revealing gush. I'm not sure about what to do with it yet. The new version is clearly better than the old one by means of artistic value, visual clearness and style. I might miss the details in evidence of the state of mind and emotion especially of Larsen of the old version, though. (And I'm happy about getting a second chance to tell about those thoughts of mine here, because I missed it when the original remade page 54 was posted.)