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Rickart

Also, people are talking a lot about the horniness, but unironically I think this chapter and the previous ones about the Painter do a lot to effectively establish the Primals as antagonists. It's to the point where I actually hope you work them into the main story as opponents for our heroes.

Rickart

Out of curiosity, how would Drianna have stacked up here? Would she have been immune to the Musician since she technically has no soul?

Tanya Wormald

The funny thing about having no soul is, the less of one you have, the less you get to decide what you do with it, and wether others get to have it. Also, canonically, Drianna's soul is slowly recovering.