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AAAAA

Gotta love Kel, the ultimate goo-ner.

Roland Taranis

I think we're beginning to cook 😋 Last chapter, I wasn't sold on Mars getting offed like she did. Felt like it was a case of taking a character with potential and icing it for trivial reasons. But the new situation has an enormous potential 😁 There could be a complete interrogation from Marsli about her identity, since she had no ego before the absorption, but she's got a slime physiology nonetheless. I think her blending in by learning to mimic “human” skin would be great 👍 Doctor Kel is also a nice surprise. I'm naturally weak to these kind of characters, intelligent but lacking the base of common sense. And Daeva is also really cool as an unabashed and straightforward pervert. Eager to see what's next !