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Chapter 106

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Z G

Reading the latest chapters with the new cast, I kind of prefer the characters and their interactions as well as the way the world is explored without having to worry or wait for the NTR and corruption aspects we have seen in the story already. It seems a bit of a letdown on behalf of the story and character potential if it's inevitable that the Goblins will eventually corrupt or destroy the heroes. We have already seen that there is dysfunction among the heroes, from the countries they are supposed to represent to their warped minds and personalities when they were turned into heroes. I don't really see how they can stand a chance when the enemy seems to have the world/fate bending over (lol) backwards so that morally upright women and even men are corrupted into shadows of their original selves.

Z G

No problem, I don't want to sound like I'm nagging you for writing what you want or what other readers may want, but I also felt compelled to comment on the direction of the plot and the characters in it. You're a good writer, so I feel it would be a shame for the new cast to be shortchanged simply to fill a quota or complete a foregone narrative plot.

ewffwed

would it be possible to do a vote to see if the heroes succeed in their quest or not, and if they do specific outcomes?

CS

Ngl, I feel the opposite. I get the idea that one might want to throw in a plot twist or a subversion after such a long tale, but if the story ends with a new group of heroes, introduced nearly a hundred chapters in, as the ones who turn everything on it’s head, I’d feel a bit put out. Like the original hero gets mindbroken, a society is put to heel, a goddess is tamed, but the new guys win? Feels unsatisfactory to me.

AAAAA

I mean it just feels kinda hard to get invested if the outcome is just going to be the same every time for these characters. Having an actual possibility for a character to not get steamrolled could be nice. The Goddess stuff happening early did kinda make it seem like they cant lose now.

CS

I definitely get that, but the title of the story isn’t ‘Hero Lover’, right? Isn’t it kind of a given who the winner of the story will be? I think the enjoyable part is the journey to see it all unfold. It’s like watching an episode of a murder mystery, you already know SOMEBODY is going to die, the question lies in the method and execution. I’m not saying it can’t be varied, just that it would kind of undermine all the previous point of the story if we switched streams now.

AAAAA

Sure and I get that. I think the reason why people want some variety is because Goblin Lover takes up a large portion of the content now. Goblin enjoyers have been feasting this year lol. I kinda miss antagonists like Malik where he was strong but he had limitations.

CS

Fair enough, I suppose. It just feels like people are asking for a different story than the one they signed up for. And Malik was definitely interesting, but the idea of a hero’s power and position being usurped to the point that it literally alters the balance of the whole world is interesting and keeps me invested. Like he did start with limitations, but he gradually got stronger, almost like a dark mirror of a typical hero’s journey.

ewffwed

honestly I prefer the orcs to the goblins.

ewffwed

who said the heroes can't win. there are other gods out there, and at least 1 much stronger goddess. not saying they won't end up partially corrupted, just saying I think if tvwintergreen allows for it there is a chance that the goblins as a whole get subjugated, with at least one of the heroes making it out on the other side intact. (maybe that one male hero ends up getting the big end of the stick if collared since he seems less of a prude than the first hero).