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NTR Quest - Odyssey 13 - Time Apart

  • Insist (Find Jeane & Teuta Before Leaving) 18
  • Leave with Djir 12
  • 2023-09-29
  • 30 votes
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You pulled away from Fiona as the Aniyub that Djir was with on the balcony passed behind her with a tray held low. Very close behind her. It felt like he was looking to see what you did specifically and as you pulled away and stepped back towards Djir he diverted course and slipped around to Djir's side of things with a wide berth. You set that aside and stared at your Sister. Her shocked expression said it all.
“We need time apart.” The music was still playing but the crowd around you both was silent for the most part. It was a long silence before Fiona's face turned completely into a sneer.

“No!” She reached for you again but you pulled away, closer to the Gnoll.

“You can't do this! It's the WRONG choice!” She screamed. The music stopped and more began looking.
“You ALWAYS make the wrong choice, Fin and it always leads to-” she stopped herself and held her head as if she had a migraine.
“Listen to me.” She calmed her tone.
“This is not right, none of it is. You can't go with him, he's the villain. You're heading towards a-”

“A 'Bad End' Fiona?” You rolled your eyes and gazed at her in disbelief.
“Bad ends, main characters, stories... These aren't REAL. This is real life. A Hero is something people call you when you become strong enough. A choice is something we do without thinking every second of every day and a Bad End... Well those are just unfortunate events. There's no 'main characters' here.” You ranted at her in a low tone. It was the boiling up of so many issues you felt with her throughout your lives. She saw the two of you and to a lesser extent your mother as 'main characters' and should succeed but her actions had become self-fulfilling in nature. You motioned around to the various faces in the crowd. Jeane, Teuta... was missing, and Cyyani and even Djir.
“None of these people are 'side-characters' in our story. They're just people.”

“Fin...” She began to tear up and step towards you.
“I'm sorry, I can fix it. Haven't you felt them? The-”

“Enough.” You stepped back, bumping into Djir. The Gnoll did not seem to mind. He rested a comforting hand on your shoulder. He did not have to pull or hold tight because he felt he had you. You looked up.
“You wont wage war on Aniyub so long I am visiting with you, correct?”

Djir sighed. “It's to my disadvantage to slow down, but for as long as you are with me consider the truce extended.” He offered. It was to his benefit that he spoke in such reasonable tones that stoked empathy. For Fiona it was slightly too late for her soft, pleading words to reach you after how demanding and forceful she had been up until this point.

You looked to her. “See?”

“See what? He wants to use you.” She reasoned.

“If you believe that 'WE' are 'main characters' then why don't you trust MY ability to stay out of trouble.”

“You are saying that while getting yourself into trouble, Fin.”

“See? You don't respect me at all! You only agree when it lines up with what you want! What are you going to do if I don't come back with you, really?” You paused and considered whether you should say what you were about to.
“Are you going to kill me? Someone else?”

She frowned and glanced around at the many faces. “Don't say that... I would never hurt you.”

“Me.” You said to her knowingly.

She closed her eyes and inhaled deeply. “Fine. You win. It seems you need to experience the effect that your choices have on yourself and others.” She opened her eyes.
“I am going to try and trust you here.” She opened her arms. You felt it was not a clawing gesture so you let yourself slip into the embrace and even hugged her back. She whispered into your ear. “Negotiate with our Kingdom and our Family in mind. Do not give more than is owed and do not let him suck you into his influence.”

“I wont.” You promised. She released you and turned. Looking back she added as she left towards the boat.
“Your entourage stays with you. Whatever comes of that is in your hands, not mine.” With that she was gone.

Djir rubbed your shoulders. “I'm so proud of you for standing up for yourself. You made the right choice, Fin.”

“Oh? I kind of feel like I alienated her a bit... And myself.”

“You've both been together for so long, haven't you?” Djir asked. You nodded.
“You need to trust yourself more. What you did was sound. Keeping my Nation at bay with such a simple move... It was correct. She was holding herself back from making such a decision because of her attachment to you.”

“It was right?” You searched for a fault in the logic and could not. Aniyub was at a slight disadvantage already and the will for the entire expedition to fight a hard fight versus the easy one they had with Aniyufar was going to be a difficult sell and if they were sold, their forces were not build for crossing the terrain. The expedition was not the immediate tie-breaker that they thought it could be. Not least because things were not a tie. Not even close.
“But... Why should I listen to our enemies advice.”

“Because I'm not your enemy. I am not Aniyufar's enemy, either. My civilization has brought standards to this continent. Freedom.”

“Freedom in conquest?” You uttered skeptically.

“Just ask my good friend.” Djir motioned towards the Aniyub you saw pass behind Fiona as you pulled away. He had done away with his serving tray. The Jackal was tall with short purple hair and colorful, loose robes that were almost see-through in spots. He bowed.

“My name is Amun... You actually know my Sister Cyyani, I believe.”

“You're her brother?”

He smiled and offered a short nod. “I was present when Djir conquered the better half of Aniyufar. I was young and quite a bit like you. I was tied to my Sister.” He furrowed his brow.
“Like a slave, almost. But it was not just her it was all of our society that had shackled me. When Djir conquered these cities he introduced the ability for men to come to equal footing with the women. I was skeptical but I saw the changes that the Gnoll Republic enacted and began to understand.”

“Understand what?”

Amun looked up warmly. “That he had our best interest at heart. I am not alone. Make no mistake, if you tried to 'liberate' these cities you would meet resistance not just from the Gnolls but from those Aniyub who enjoy being freed from our society.”

“So Gnolls didn't just replace woman at the top for you?” You questioned intuitively. Amun's long ears twitched and his brow lifted.

“We'll have plenty of time to talk politics, Fin.” Djir interjected.

“No, please, answer the question Brother.” Cyyani appeared in front of you. There was a good distance between she and Amun and it seemed intentional.
“Are you enjoying your new master? Does he feed you treats and cuddle with you at night?” She shrugged.
“I am so sorry that I could not endear your feminine urges.”

“If you must know...” Amun began slowly. You looked to him and waited for a deflection. Instead he nodded and proudly stated.
“I did trade Masters. I have joined with Djir and I've done it willingly.”

“So you think.” Cyyani teased.

“So. It. Is!” he insisted, narrowing his eyes at her, then turned to you.
“I have... Made pledges to Djir that mirror that which exist in Aniyufar between men and women but that was my choice and believe me, men and even girls are far better off under Djir than under an Aniyub Rule. I would even humor that they may be better under you or your sister before I would ever trust an Aniyub Queen again.”

“Well, at least he's honest.” She waved her hand flippantly.
“A word, Hero? Do you need to ask 'your' master?”

You looked up. Djir lifted his bushy brow. “You're free to go wherever you like. Don't look to me for permission.” He released his grip on your shoulder and let you go as he said that. He turned to Amun as you left with Cyyani to stand by the water.

“I don't understand.” You said in a low tone.
“He is reasonable and your brother doesn't seem to be lying.”

She smiled smugly. “Maybe they are both honest. If they were perfectly honest would it change the fact that my dear brother passed behind your dear sister with a dagger beneath a serving tray?”

“W-what?” You blinked.
“Why didn't you say anything? That would have changed things if it were true.” You wondered if she was lying to stir you up. You would not put it past her, but still it felt like she too was being honest. Did Amun plan to strike Fiona in the back if you responded differently?

She pulled you into a hug and caressed your head gently. She spoke soothingly into your ear. “Poor boy, in over your head... You stand to move from one manipulator to another. Machinations beyond your control and in the midst of it all I'm the one who gets everything I want.”

“What do you mean?” You whispered back fearfully.

“You and Fiona are separated. The unstoppable force that the two of you represented... Gone. For now.” She inhaled as if breathing in what she just said.
“To top it off, for as long as you are here our dear Djir is slowing his conquest. His armies are halted if he is being truthful and I believe he is. My Queen... She will be preparing her armies. My forces but more importantly, your forces. Eventually if a fight breaks out it will be your people dying with my people to rescue my cities and all I had to do was 'lose' gracefully.”

“Why are you telling me this?”

She pulled away so she could stare into your eyes. “It wouldn't be fun if Djir simply 'groomed' you into his service as he did my Amun. I had to give you something to think about.”

You gulped and looked down, stunned. “Di-did I make the wrong choice.”

“At some point.” She sat down and pulled you down next to her. Djir and Amun were in sight. You saw the Massive Gnoll bend down while the Aniyub leaned up and kissed him on the maw.
“Far... Far down the line when you refused me. If I'm to estimate it...” She stared at you.
“That is where it went wrong for you. You should have allowed me to make decisions for you, not her.” Cyyani shrugged. You thought it was quite a self-serving estimation, but maybe it was true? You were racked with doubt.
“In terms of minutes ago you possibly saved Fiona's life. Possibly yours... Your groups... You saved Aniyufar from an immediate march by Djir that could have ended us if handled poorly.”

You stared at Djir in confusing. “If he could win then why doesn't he?”

“I'm sure he will tell you this... The  self-indulgent bastard. His strategy... The rules that Djir lives by are not to chase opportunities to win. It is to remove all avenues of success for his opponents.”

“How does killing one or both of us do that...” You muttered.
“If that's true then it's outside his usual strategy.”

“His.” She smirked.
“But not his.” She eyed Amun pointedly.
“Poor boy... Watch.”

You gulped and observed. After Djir had finished allowing affection from the Aniyub male, he reached down while rising up to his full height. Amun looked up fearfully and bowed his head. Spoke a few words.
“'I'm so sorry.'” Cyyani said. Her words matched the way Amun's mouth moved.
“'I just thought... No, no of course you are right I was out of line to even attempt such a thing.'”

“'I did not think it would force your hand, I saw it as a-'” He knelt down.  Cyyani looked to you again and smirked.
“He was eager to prove himself if you did not follow Djir's design.”

“What's that? What's Djir's design?”

“It's right in front of you...” She shrugged.

You glanced back. The bent over, kneeling figure of Amun. So eager to please Djir. It was him. It did not feel coerced and it felt like Amun's beliefs aligned with Djir's so well. But perhaps that was it, you thought. It was that which was the result of the design.
“I'm not going to end up like that.” You insisted.
“I am going to look out for our interests and keep my head about me.”

“Of course you will.” She teased, leaning over to pinch your cheek.

“What are the odds of Djir, Amun and his people against Me, You, Jeane and Teuta?” You asked. It was an important question. From where you sat you saw the light of Fiona's boat just a speck on the horizon  .

“I can't beat Amun. You probably could tie Djir up in combat by yourself and the Priestess and Aurar? They would be overwhelmed in a battle.”

“So it sounds like all of us versus Djir means we could win.”

“Maybe?”

“Wait... Did you say you couldn't beat your Brother?”

“I couldn't. He's stronger than me. He is a man and has trained as a man his whole life. I am a Queen who trains her skills and her body second. I do still bear the responsibility of childbirth and all that comes with that. Our women are not commonly warriors or fighters.”

“What happened to female superiority? How can you keep control over a nation of male warriors if the woman are still simply mothers?” You asked quizzically.

“If the only thing that mattered was a contest of strength then who would be in charge of your society? You are stronger than your kings back home as Fiona described, so why are you not kings?”

“Well-” You paused.
“I-I don't know. I need to clear my head before we can have this discussion.”

She smirked triumphantly. “Fine. Take your time.”

You sighed. “I take it... You want to reiterate that you are my best chance of 'survival' here and that your offer still stands as my best choice?”

“It is, and I am, but I'm not giving it to you.” You looked to her in shock as she said that.
“W-what?”

“I'm afraid your only choice right now is to play along with what the Gnoll wants and not even I can step between you and him.”

You stared her down skeptically. “What do you call what you're doing now?”

“I call it pulling you away so he can discipline and dress down Amun out of earshot. Go ahead and try to get away from him when he WANTs you to be with him.” As she said that the Gnoll approached with Amun at his side. The Aniyub male looked a bit down, but had a measured pose and expression. He ignored Cyyani's prying gaze.

“Fin. I'd like to show you to where you'll be staying for now. We'll be staying here but in the future if you permit it I would love to show you Garm, our home city.”

You nodded slowly, staring up into the wide grinning maw of the Gnoll. It was so strange to have something so bestial also present such civilized airs.
“I'd love to, eventually. Will it be okay if I talk to my companions before we leave the party, though?”

“They'll be taken care of. The reason I'm asking is because I would like to spend more time with you talking. You have such interesting things to say so I'd like to 'probe' you a bit...” Djir offered. You glanced to the side subtly and saw Cyyani wink at you.

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Comments

LancelotDeLuLac

Based to outright tell him that he’s just a puppet on a string and it’s up to whoever he chooses to let manipulate him.

Roland Taranis

Time to rise to the occasion ! We're in the snake's den now, so let's keep our wits about it and navigate through the maze of fog. Now that we made a promise with Fiona on equal terms, we will stand by it. Let's learn all we can from the very best, see through the honeyed half-truths while keeping those we care about out of arm's way. And there's no rush, we will have ample time to talk later ...

WhiteGrayFox

Cyyani is a super cool character, she gives Trickster vibe, and she is very composed. It makes sense that she is a Matriarch of her people. I wonder what would happen to Finn if he took her up on her guidance.

WhiteGrayFox

It seems I overestimated Heros and underestimated Gnolls, but whether they could take down Dijir and Amun if the both worked together is up in the air I think. But since you won it is on you what happens to Hero and his people in this Gnolls den, let’s hope we don’t lose anyone.

Roland Taranis

Straight from the witch's mouth... She isn't wrong that it has been the case until now, so let's prove her wrong for the future.

Roland Taranis

I must say I wouldn't have pictured "puppy" Fin to match Djir... We're going to be tight roping without safety net, so yeah, let's keep our eyes open and abide by our promise with Fiona.

Roland Taranis

Cool ? Undoubtedly. She wasn't the Queen for nothing. Trustworthy ? Absolutely not. Another snake to learn from, so we may beat her at her own game down the line.

LancelotDeLuLac

Idk man our character is braindead. Just look at him this chapter, he’s literally being spoonfod the truth while watching it action and still seems so muddleheaded and dumb

LancelotDeLuLac

I really enjoy seeing our character one up manipulators who want to hurt us, but the fall scenes are INSANE and the collective love them so good luck lol

Sootythunder

I wonder how the ripples of other timelines are affecting teuta here, she did become a living Onahole to gnolls in NTRquest…..I’m just reminded of a Bible black fanfic where one of the heroines had all of the memories of all of the routes slammed into her at once (including all of the bad ends where she becomes a brainwashed member of the sex cult indulging in drugs and sex, as well as the timelines she got raped into insanity, and it caused her to instantly mind break and rush towards the main villians side begging the villian to take control of her

WhiteGrayFox

Everybody is trustworthy it just depends on your goal’s I say she doesn’t want us to fall to Dijir so we can trust her in that regard.

Roland Taranis

I think so too on that specific regard. Let's just be aware that she has one truckload of an agenda, and just be skeptical enough to discern her ulterior motives. I just hope we won't simply be stuck between the anvil and the hammer. Right after managing to gain independence that would piss me off.

Roland Taranis

He's a diamond in the rough. He hasn't been using his brain for awhile now so give him time to clean the cobwebs. And when you live in someone's shadow for so long, you don't magically learn to stand on your own overnight.

Roland Taranis

There is a fine line that shouldn't be crossed inside all of this. I sure ain't opposed to some "non standard behavior" like it was the case with Heilan, but I'm still seething about what happened to Yeong...

Roland Taranis

Not a bad angle to approach Teuta's behavior in my opinion. Because right now there is no justification to her extremely insensitive actions, which make me care absolutely nothing about her.

WhiteGrayFox

Her agenda may have something to do with getting back control over her own country, it’s something to keep in mind although it’s hard for me not to sympathise with her.

WhiteGrayFox

What’s more funny that Teuta will get lots of Gnoll dick and it’s all Fin fault, he wanted to have open relationship where “his” women only fuck other women and where he gets to fuck all the women, it may end where Hero gets to be fucked by Dijir while witnessing total degeneration of his GF

WhiteGrayFox

She is a nymphomaniac that has her addiction reinforcement by faith and religion, and a free pass from her lover, I say you are being very uncharitable towards her when it’s Fin fault for being unable to set boundaries.

Roland Taranis

I too can sympathize, as long as she doesn't cast Fin into the frying pan in order to achieve her goal...

Roland Taranis

After re-reading, she explicitly said of her own accord that she would indulge in the group only. I quote : Fin, Jeane, Cyanni, Fiona & Marrien. So she cannot abide by a promise. Or didn't even realize she made one and even worse didn't even care. It's mostly the fact that she didn't see fit to even talk to Fin in deeper detail before "going in the box" or even some mildly apologetic behavior afterwards that irks me. I can't care about a character like that unless there is some deepening of her behavior. We can lose her to Djir or anyone else if it means we get to keep the rest safe as far as I'm concerned.

Roland Taranis

As long as it's limited to Teuta, I'm in =)

WhiteGrayFox

Yes there was a miscommunication between them but when she was setting up a stall to become the ships glory hole dame I think that was the right moment for Fin to bring up the problem with it, if this is too much, Fin literally can’t have a relationship, he needs to be a pet/slave to someone, this is all on Fin he could stop it.

Roland Taranis

True, there was a sort of miscommunication. Teuta spoke about enjoying the group and Fin went "you do you"... Not very decisive, I'll admit. And also true, Fin didn't have the balls to tell her is discomfort when he found out (and the box was already filthy, so it wasn't even before the first "customer"...). But 2 big things pisses me off in all of this. -The character of Teuta cannot even comprehend Fin's values. Her telling him after a full day in the box that she choose to go too him after she's done was in her eyes, a full love confession. The strongest declaration of love she is able to do. She cannot even comprehend that love is different to Fin. She should be able to understand in my eyes, being a priestess and all, but she doesn't seem to want to make the effort, so that just make her a self centered nymphomaniac. So no empathy from her, no sympathy from me. -Who groomed Fin to be the indecisive man he has been until now ? Us, through our choices. I'm beginning to be... annoyed by the Vox Populi. I fell like most people barely want the stories to evolve in a good way, they want a fix for their kinks, all consequences be damned. Worse, Winter will manage to salvage a good story out of the shattered remnants. So no repercussions beyond mutilating good characters... Honestly, I have been thoroughly broken by what happens to Yeong at 2/3rd of Runner. I've been angry and depressed, and I'm just barely beginning to process all of this, and resuming reading Runner/Ranger is a distant thought for now... If people derail the other current stories the same way, I do not know if I'll be able to continue on. I can see a way for Teuta to regain some sympathy from me. She needs to make the conscious effort of trying to understand Fin and his discomfort. She is unlikely to do it on her own since Fin folded when she came to him after the box. No problem ? No solution. So the status quo needs to be shaken. Preferably it would be at the hands of Fin, but it will take time for him to become decisive enough to bring that up again. Maybe Jeane ? But it would need her & Fin to properly talk of the subject. Cyanni is out of the picture since Teuta wants her to discipline her. Until any of this happens, I don't care about Teuta in the slightest, and she can be the sacrificial lamb as far as I'm concerned. If it makes Fin into a better man, all the better.

Sootythunder

Me personally I’m kind of ambivalent to Teuta, I would however LOVE to see how Jeanne would react if she somehow saw the other timelines and saw how first she seemingly always enters some kind of relationship with Fin, either wife/mistress and second through this relationship fin DRAMATICALLY changes what kind of person she is.

Sootythunder

I mean there is some existentialistic panic that could set in “Am I fated or something to be with this guy in all these timelines and loose agency of what kind of person I am”

WhiteGrayFox

I personally read it as if vox populi did not matter, I know about the vote but I put everything that happens on characters in the story, it’s much more fun that way. I would not say that vox populi wants only their kinks satisfied, an example would be having Sam that was pretty popular in OG stories, dominate Aniubians and his family, but people decided to axe him. Does Finn understand what Fiona is? She did explain to him that her Goddes wants her to be the best Slut, and then he was uhhhh ok? Also btw, Finn was never gonna fuck only Teuta, he was out there getting sloppy seconds after Sam, I don’t buy it that Finn is allowed to fuck everyone but Teuta shall stay chaste, especially when Finn does not care to voice his opinions. I think he should learn that he is not the only one to fuck whenever he gets horny.

WhiteGrayFox

Yeah it was “a” situation with Yeong but when you look at it from bird view, what happened to him was acquisition of Orc fetish, and change of Sex, I don’t think that was the worst that could happen to him in this universe.

Roland Taranis

@Sootythunder I like that idea, not to the degree you suggest though. Jeane & the Hero quite organically 'hit it off" in the main timeline. No big change on her part was involved. She liked him, he liked her back. I've read Academy a bit fast (it was the 1st NTVerse story I read) and I don't exactly remember how they came together. I think I remember her being quite enamored with the "Dark Lord" vibe and complied out of her own free will. So I think she never really lost agency on herself, or relinquished it herself. Kinda like what Fin did for Fiona until now... But sure, as academically inclined that she is, she would find that strange and maybe explore the idea...

Roland Taranis

@WhiteGrayFox You responded at the same time as me, so I didn't see before sending ^^' I don't reproach Teuta fooling with others, and yeah, Fin did lose the moral high ground by fucking Innad's mother. What rubs me the wrong way is that for an open relationship to work, especially one where both parties really love each other, it needs absolute honesty and openness. And proper care about your partner's feelings. I can admit I'm biased towards Fin. Both have been really clumsy about how to handle it. But right now, you don't need foresight to tell that this relationship is going to fail hard or worse, be stuck in a way that leaves Fin dissatisfied. So I'm already distancing myself. Point is, to begin salvaging the situation comes a challenge of the status quo. The first chance we get, I'll be at the front arguing to have "the talk" with Teuta. And if she miraculously decides to initiate it herself, she could instantly gain a huge amount of points from me. Empathy begets sympathy. The Yeong situation did get to me more than it should have. But I was quite invested in the character, and the second he discovered a very relatable and unpredictable reaction that made him vulnerable, everyone voted to kick him while he's down. And made all the worst decisions a few times in a row. The injustice of it all made my blood boil to the point I was borderline physically unwell. Honestly, I would have preferred if he had simply died instead. And I wouldn't be arguing here if I could simply ignore the Vox Populi. You remember what I said when arguing for Djir ? If you do not make decisions for yourself someone will take them for you and all you can do is shoulder the consequences ? To live a life with no regrets I think it is very important to stick to that motto, and it is exactly what was robbed from me concerning Yeong. So if I can manage to stir a few votes towards something I consider to be "reasonable", you can be sure I'll be here.

WhiteGrayFox

Context of Yeong losing is that Winter did a 10part independent story about Sebek, and he was very popular, so this is why Yeong got axed most likely people were fans of Sebek so Yeong got Meta out of his own story. I know that taking control over your fate is important in this meta setting I just have no faith in Finn. About Teuta going south, you could make an argument that her being inoculated into Dicks may actually help her against a big dick antagonist, I can imagine that Teuta if more chaste could fall for any dick that would appear just like a drug addict in recovery having his drugs dangling in front of him. There is no way to keep women of this universe safe, except maybe to make them like Fiona or Cyyani and even then anything could happen a damm goblin hypnotist level 120 could appear and destroy whole party.

Roland Taranis

As much as it pains me, you're quite right my friend T_T This won't prevent me from complaining about the fickleness of us all. Since I was quite distraught these last few days, I asked Winter if there was obligatory losses ahead. Winter :"I'm always going to create a path for Fin to make it through optimally. Unless we hit a bad spot where there are no good options, he always has a chance. There is currently no Obligatory loss and you guys have the choice to give him more or less agency." Here is the thing, my friend. Fin isn't some deadbeat that is fated to misery. He and the other protags are ultra-fluid beings that responds exponentially to our inputs, for better or worse. So we mustn't let up and lose hope, we CAN navigate through this in an acceptable manner. As long as we don't purposefully chose the wrong answer, I can live with that.