Arcane short fanfic process (Patreon)

I don't know if you heard of it, but recently one of Arcane's script writers shared a tweet with a concept for a scene. I really liked it, so I decided to write a short illustrated fanfic. And as it happened before, I come here to ask for suggestions  for the illustrations I'm going to include. Here you have some sketches I've already done.

The plan is to include 5 illustrations plus a an extra drawing as cover, so feel free to send ideas my way!

You can read the fic in the PDF attached in the link below (it is short, only 4-5 pages long). I'd also be very grateful if you let me know about any typos you may see if you read it or suggestions to improve it.

Looking forward to reading your ideas!

Thank you for your help

P.S: I'm trying new things and I started sketching digitally recently. Also, designing some backgrounds. Let's see how it turns out XD

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