looking for some advice (Patreon)

hi!! so i’m working on the carboniferous period and i want some fresh eyes to get some advice from. i’m trying to figure out the order of how to present the information. i numbered it in the order that it’s currently sitting in in the outline. i feel fine about it, like it makes sense to me but my brain feels muddy looking at it lol. i am most uncertain about the placement of the sharks. also, the “modern significance” portion is a collab, so i figured it would be good to have context going in to their segment. let me know what you think, and thank you in advance for your help!!