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Raid on the Dark Queen (Patreon)

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2026-01-25 11:50:22
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2026-09-07 18:16:09
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A band of adventurers seek out the much-feared Dark Queen, a giant woman who has caused a serious scare. But how scary is she, really...?

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almost929

The comedy in this one is on point. I think one of my favorite little moments was the cleric and monk sharing a fistbump after the experience.

Femdom Fanatics

Much appreciated, hope it lived up to expectations. I feel like I'm flying a bit blind with giantess stories. It's outside of the comfort zone which isn't actually a bad thing, but I am a little uncertain how well they're turning out

almost929

Totally understandable. I suppose dipping your toes in anything new would feel like that, but I genuinely do think this story and the last one are a great first step. And things will probably feel like they click more if/when you do more giantess stories. I can certainly say I’m satisfied. Like I said, enjoyed seeing your brand of quirky comedy throughout this, and the ways you described the dark queen made her sound both sexy and adorkable. The chemistry between her and the bard was sweet too, so much so that Im lowkey thinking of ordering a sequel someday so that they get more time together. Outside of that, though, the real “Star” of this story is seeing the party bungle and fail to defeat her hot body and clumsiness, which you provided in spades. All in all, good stuff. If you don’t mind me asking, though, is there anything in particular about writing these giantess stories that makes you feel uncertain? Or is it more a vague feeling of unease over trying something new (which is highly relatable, btw)?

Femdom Fanatics

Very glad to hear~ The main thing is just how the giantess interacts physically with someone so much smaller. There’s a sense of choreography with these, even the ones that aren’t fight focused, that I’m accustomed to having this innate sense of, and that experience kinda doesn’t translate here. For example, in a regular story, if I wanna have a lady hip bump a dude, she can just do it. Just has to be close enough and I can set that up any way I want, and she can do it over and over or follow up with something else really easily. But when the size difference is so wild, that same move requires a lot of setup. Here they kinda had to go out of their way way to set themselves up for it, and then after getting hip checked they just go flying, as they reasonably should.

Femdom Fanatics

Doing Patreon comments on mobile is very annoying, always find myself posting early by accident… but basically that’s the gist, it seems like it just takes more thought in general to get from A to B. It’s not intuitive to me, at least not yet

almost929

Ah, yep that makes sense. And in this particular case there’s the extra factor of the giantess being more passive this time around (like gentle, sure, but also literally a passive character). So the tinies have to do more to propel the choreography and story in this case, which means there’s even more to think about and contrive to make the same shenanigans happen. Basically it seems like a more roundabout path. But yeah, I’m sure that’s something that’ll become more intuitive with experience, or maybe by reading any giantess stories by other authors that catch your eye. In any case, I’m still plenty excited for more to come (Yeah, I get that about the Patreon comment thing. That’s why I personally have gotten into the roundabout habit of writing my full comments on discord or Google Docs and then just copy/pasting them to Patreon).