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A night in Titan Tower sees Raven's demons take over in a whole new way, and she's got her eyes set on Robin...

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almost929

As always, I love it when you add a hefty dose of breast and/or butt smothering in your stories, but there was something about the way that you describe Robin getting teased and smothered by her breasts that was especially enticing this time around, which really added to the succubus angle. The way she used her levitation powers to add to the smother was a great touch too. Definitely my favorite part.

Femdom Fanatics

This was an interesting one because I was given what looked like a nice outline to work with but only realized shortly before I started writing, how little I was actually asked to do. I added a couple embellishments but for the most part, I took the approach here of just reeeeaally drawing out what was requested. As such it has an unusually slow pace for me, but I think it worked out.

almost929

Yeah. I think the slow burn not only helped add emphasis to the seduction and Raven's curves vividly described throughout, and it had the added benefit of complimenting Robin's strength of will. Given the story, it's unsurprising that he'd give in eventually, at least for the most part, but it still says a lot about him that he was considering his possesed friend's well-being and state of mind until the very end. It's similar to my reaction to the Goku story: Robin might not be the first character I think of when it comes to femdom, but you did his strength of will and compassion enough justice (heh) that it all felt natural and accessible to read, despite my pickiness. Plus, succubus Raven's attitude was just so damn hot. Adding bold to her dialogue was a nice touch too. 

Femdom Fanatics

Yeah it was part of the commission, but as someone who's genuinely big into the source material, I was happy to be able to maintain him as a character, both in integrity and in that he was actually pretty crafty under pressure. Incidentally, it was originally fashioned as a genuine demon but I liked playing the idea that it was potentially more of a manifestation of her desires. That was based on that one episode where she wouldn't acknowledge being scared by a horror film and it ended up creating a bunch of shadowy monsters, turning the tower haunted. So my thought was, what if repressing her sexual feelings could turn her into this?

almost929

Oh 100%. Robin’s characterization was already solid, but the way Raven was handled—particularly the detail about her emotion-fueled powers interacting with her sexual repression—was perfect. Her using her powers to project Robin’s thoughts and further tease him was clever too. When I first glanced at the story description, I was reminded of that S1 episode where they went into her mind and met her emotion clones, who eventually unite to deal with the emotion that was rampaging the most. So I lowkey assumed this story would veer into that territory (with her ‘arousal clone’ going on a rampage this time). But your idea/reference makes way more sense and is much less roundabout. If this ever happens to get a sequel, though, I suppose the emotion clones could come in handy for Raven’s self-discovery, so she can finally do it on her terms, as the ending seems to indicate she wants. Speaking of, The ending scene where all the Titans were shooting the breeze at breakfast felt like scene from the show too, especially everyone getting caught off-guard by something Starfire said.