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Chapter 10 - Out of the Frying Pan (Patreon)

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2021-12-09 22:38:08
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Let me know what you think, as always. 


Comments

Sammot

Can I imagine crock woman as bald with no ears and slits for a nose? Gretch is pretty open if she doesn't see the problem with that.

Anonymous

A couple of spelling errors: "Are you working for the Tromians?" Tromians -> Tormians. "It didn't' look like any stone I'd ever seen on Earth." didn't' -> didn't

NathanPierce
>>73425379

That pretty much sums it up lol. Except... somehow.... attractive? Maybe. Going to be a rough challenge for an artist if you guys ever pick her to get drawn lol.

Lictor Magnus

I enjoyed it. Govern the wide variety of Randy denizens the dungeon is going to have at some point I wouldn’t be surprised if they opened a brothel on one side for those that just want to have a good time 😅

Daniel Sifrit

Do a search for "trom" before you hit "submit" on the final doc. LOL

NathanPierce

Pretty sure I got all the typos. If anyone finds more, please let me know.

Craxuan

Question. The MC threatened Grelda saying that he could ask the dungeon to snuff her out like a candle if he wanted to. However, I thought not being able to communicate with a dungeon - at least not in the way the MC was doing - is the norm in this world, so shouldn't she have thought that he was bullshitting out of his ass?

NathanPierce
>>73438031

The next line he admitted (internally) he was full of shit lol. Grelda wouldn't have any way of knowing if he could talk to the dungeon though. He actually kind of can, through Ceria. Hell, the dungeon may even be willing to do it if it got a good deal lol.

Vermontsc6

Sorry but i honestly just devour your chapters so fast i don't even thing about grammer or spell check.... Also MORE!

NathanPierce
>>73442230

Lol, checking for errors isn't required. I'm writing as fast as I can. 11 should be up by the weekend and 12 by Monday if all goes to plan