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In other news, I spent some extra money on a couple of cheaper artists to do some Succu-Gretch concept art.  Will probably still have to get one of our two really good artists to redo it, but here's hoping. 

This doesn't count against the winner of the poll getting art from one of the two great artists that we've already established next month.  Elyria was in the lead, last time I checked. 

Image for loosely what I'm describing. I'll get artwork made eventually.

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Dave

I think what you described is closer to a "katar" or a Roman "scissor" than a "caestus" (essentially boxing glove/ brass knuckle combo). Either that or I misinterpreted

NathanPierce

I did a lot of research, apparently the exact weapon I'm looking for only exists in Sparticus and Conan movies. Every Katar picture I found was a more open concept with little support and no defense bits. The caestus was a Roman battle gauntlet sometimes affixed with spikes or long blades. Since neither is the exact weapon, a case could be made for either and I just like the word Caestus more lol

Duskland

I was expecting Elyria to pop into the accessory slot. Something like Hop-to-it boots for a haste effect or something. It’s interesting that Andric can specify slot and rarity of new bonds though.

Dave

Lol, no biggie, you can feel free to call it anything you want seeing as it's your story. I just had a hard time picturing it based on the description and name not lining up in my head lol. (Fwiw, you did an excellent job describing what's in that picture) For the sake of my imagination: the weapons Elyria has are kind of like a Roman gladiator's scissor weapon right? Something like this: https://deadliestwarrior.fandom.com/wiki/Scissor

Calimus

I was expecting double daggers or knives (Hes always loosing his daggers and needing new ones), and for her to be an assassin type with black fur. With her beings super stealthy and quick.. But I suppose that fits Court a lot better, all but the dagger part at least....

Anonymous

Those weapons are sick.

NathanPierce

That's it. Lepun faesteel fist blades. Takes all the guesswork out of it and still sounds cool.

Craxuan

I'm a sinful person. The first thing I thought after seeing the weapon is, "Is that made of paper?"

NathanPierce

I really appreciate these kinds of probing questions, all of you. It let's me know what needs further explanation and what is detracting from the flow of the story. I really appreciate it.

Sammot

Well didn't see it coming that litteraly her whole body got disintegrated to be able to become a summon. I do love Elyria tho, shes a very cute character!

Dave

He really needs to start training in the arena with axerager more...... js. He can't practice "full contact" outside the arena, and he also can't really practice using his summons to their full capabilities outside the arena.

Vermontsc6

Just to let you know your writing gets better and better each chapter you do. Keep it up bro im loving the story.

Alex R

Tick asked, looking skeptical.   -> [Tic] asked, looking skeptical.