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“Where did he get a core?”

There was no preamble as the Blackstone matriarch appeared within the crystalline confines of the communication orb Tala was stood in front of.

Truth be told, that didn’t surprise the Blackstone heir.

Given just how many Instructors, students and other assorted ‘sources’ sent reports to the duchess, the notion that one of them had managed to get to a communication orb and relay the day’s events before Tala herself could wasn’t too surprising.

With that said, apparently even she didn’t know where Tala’s fiancé had apparently sourced this ‘mystery core’ from either.

“I don’t know, mother.” Tala struggled to keep hold of her emotions as she spoke. “His family perhaps?”

Her mother shook her head, the thick scar that cut across her chin flexing in conjunction with the deep scowl that slid across her otherwise fair features. “The Ashfields have exactly one airship, the Indomitable. And as far as my sources can tell, it’s still flight capable, so unless the Ashfields have found some way to make a ship fly without a mithril core, we can safely assume that your wayward fiancée didn’t source his core from there.”

Tala frowned. “That does not preclude the possibility of him sourcing said core from some ‘hidden vault’ on the Ashfield estate.”

Certainly, there were laws against countships owning more than a single mithril core, but she knew for a fact that most ‘low houses’ paid little more than lip service to them. To the extent that it was a fairly common joke that the chances of a house ‘stumbling upon a lost core’ directly correlated to just how depleted their coffers became.

Or the status of their airship.

A state of affairs that the Crown was willing to let lie fallow just so long as the houses in question ensured they kept said reserves circumspect. For as common as the joke was, the fact was that few low houses genuinely retained more than one core. More to the point, said rule existed more to limit the amount of airships a low house could field – and thus use to threaten their liege lords.

An airship was many things, but subtle was not one of them. Any countship attempting to construct a fresh hull so as to make use of a hypothetical second mithril core would quickly find any attempts at secrecy futile.

Likewise, any attempts at sourcing a ‘second hand hull’ off the open market would be stymied by the Crown’s iron grip on that particular market.

“Possible, but unlikely,” Eleanor Blackstone shook her head. “Assuming they had such an asset, they would have revealed it by now to better capitalize on future opportunities.”

 Tala creased her brow for a second, before she cottoned onto what her mother was both saying – and not saying where unfriendly ears might hear.

If the Ashfields had any cores beyond the one used to power the Indomitable, they’d have unveiled them at the onset of their joint conspiracy with House Blackstone to seize the Summerfield ducal seat.

House Blackstone could have in turn constructed a hull in the intervening years on behalf of the Ashfield countship. Sure, it would have needed to fly the Blackstone colours so as to avoid drawing the ire of the Summerfields or the Crown, but once the Ashfields moved to press their ducal claim, said ship could have revealed its true allegiances.

Admittedly, such an endeavor would require Janet Ashfield extend her nominal allies some degree of trust that they wouldn’t just… steal said core, but given both families were embroiled in a conspiracy to commit high treason, that was hardly worth mentioning.

No, Tala’s mother was correct; if the Ashfields did have a core ‘spare’ they would have unveiled it long ago.

“Of course, mother.” Tala said, bowing to her wisdom. “A rival then?”

The Crown were the most obvious candidates for such a move, though even as she had the thought, she found it rang false in her mind.

“To what end?” Eleanor pointed out. “Driving a wedge between a ducal house and an otherwise inconsequential countship? Over some ore and wheat?”

Because outwardly that was all her engagement was. The seal on a trade deal.

…Not the lynchpin on a continent spanning conspiracy.

Eleanor continued. “Even then, assuming some third party saw… more to this arrangement than there truly is, the risk is enormous.”

Tala nodded. At the levels her family operated at, the loss of a single core was hardly the end of the world – but it was hardly insignificant either.

The loss of the Overseer last summer had hurt – and not just because it meant that the damn ‘free orcs’ now had access to three cores and their respective airships.

Even if they’re more likely to melt both down to build more damnable shards, Tala thought.

Which was just typical of the mangey beasts. Unwilling to engage in a straight fight like real women, they’d sooner continue to engage in their damnable ambush swarm tactics.

Only now they’ll have even more shards to supplement their damned flying lizards.

The only balm to the situation was that the partially finished Eternal Dawn would even the playing field on that front.

The thought of the world’s first dedicated Shard carrier finally taking to the skies filled her with an almost giddy sensation.

Let’s see how the greenskins enjoy being the ones getting swarmed for a change, she thought.

She was jolted from her thoughts as her mother continued. “Unless you think the man stands a chance against you in the arena?”

 It was all Tala could do not to scoff. “No. It’ll be a slaughter.”

In the crystalline features of the orb, her mother cocked an eyebrow, neither agreeing nor disagreeing. It was an expression Tala was well familiar with as she knew the woman wanted her heir to explain her reasoning.

“He’s talented,” Tala admitted. “To the extent that he’s winning more often than not against second year teams these days.”

Indeed, in retrospect his sudden drive to improve made some sense – even if it irritated her.

Once upon a time she’d thought it a drive simply for self-improvement after a lifetime of lackadaisical rebelliousness. One hopefully brought about by the academy providing him a reality check.

Instead, she now realized that this was yet another example of his rebellious nature, albeit, a bit more directed and focused.

“Being able to triumph over teams with four times his experience speaks to a little more than just talent,” Eleanor said. “That requires effort. Focus.”

“Luck,” Tala grunted. “Or at least the illusion of it. His team is good. Damned good. Even the orc.”

Especially the orc, her mind unhelpfully supplied.

“Hmm,” Eleanor nodded. “It seems that our attempts to garner your fiancé some prestige have backfired in that regard.”

Tala nodded regretfully. In retrospect they should have pushed harder for him to be placed onto a Blackstone vassal team from the outset.

“A mistake, but a reasonable one,” Tala opined. “His mother said that pushing too hard would only make him dig in more. Perhaps deliberately seek to embarrass me by… acting out. A few bribes to place him onto a talented team while giving him the illusion of freedom was a decent compromise.”

“At the time.”

Tala nodded. “At the time. And while it’s unfortunate that he’s used said opportunity to form an unexpectedly dangerous weapon against us, it won’t be enough.”

The gulf in personal combat ability between a third year team and a second year team wasn’t quite as wide as that of a first year team and a second, but said gulf did exist.

And her team wasn’t just any third year team.

Certainly, some compromises on personal ability had been made in the name of political considerations, but all of them were talented in their own right.

“Well, if you’re sure of your success I’ll leave it at that.” Eleanor said dismissively. “Instead we’ll focus on who attempted to throw a hammer into our compressor with this clumsy attack.”

Tala nodded. “Do we have any suspects beyond the obvious?”

Her mother’s features went studiously blank and it was all the young woman could do not to flinch.

“I would have thought you’d have more idea than myself.” The Blackstone matriarch said slowly. “After all, he is your fiancée. Surely you have more people watching him than myself.”

Cursing herself for not showing enough initiative, Tala nodded even as she attempted to reframe her earlier laxness. “I do, which is why I asked, as I have little idea myself given how few acquaintances he has beyond his immediate teammates. And his house Instructor.”

Admittedly, even without her betrothed’s tales, she’d have known about the latter relationship given the ongoing rumours that the pair were sleeping together.

Something that might have annoyed her more if it weren’t for the fact that similar rumours existed for just about every man in the academy who spent more than five seconds behind closed doors with a woman.

Hell, a man who spent more than five seconds alone with a dusty bookcase risked giving rise to rumors that he was sleeping with it.

…Of course, that didn’t preclude said rumors about her fiancée and the dark elf being true.

They’d hardly be the first to cross that line after all.

Though even Tala could admit that it would be out of character for Instructor Griffith. The woman had a stick up her ass large enough to be used as a flotation device if needed.

The thought annoyed her, but that was all.

She wasn’t marrying William out of love after all. She was marrying him because, without a marriage contract, the Blackstone alliance with the Ashfields was dead in the water.

At least in a legal sense – and that was what they needed.

The veneer of legitimacy.

Without it, the Blackstones had no legal reason to interfere in the Ashfield bid for the Summerfield dukedom.

To that end, the notion that her fiancé was fucking another woman was hardly worth mentioning. Hell, even in a normal arrangement, such things were expected of men – though they were expected to be kept circumspect.

Like her own… liaisons on the side.

She was the heir to House Blackstone after all. Where other women needed to beg and wheedle amidst a press of a hundred other suitors to draw a man’s eye, she simply needed to lie back and wait for them to throw themselves at her.

Social climbers one and all, hoping to snag the position of Lord Blackstone, but they were useful in their own way.

In some ways she was actually a little thankful for her fiancés disinterest. It made those seeking to replace him try all the harder to earn her favour.

 They’d never get it of course, but she enjoyed their… spirited attempts all the same.

“Fortunately for you my daughter, my sources are in agreement with your own,” Eleanor grunted reluctantly.

Personally, Tala didn’t find that too surprising given that she was reasonably sure most of her sources were her mother’s as well.

“With that said,” the older Blackstone continued. “Said sources agree that the woman seemed as surprised as everyone else when your boy unveiled his core. Which would be a little peculiar if she were the source.”

“She could be acting.”

“Perhaps.” Eleanor nodded. “But my source with her benefactors suggest our most likely candidates were as surprised by this move as we are.”

Tala was a little surprised by the rather oblique reference to her mother’s spy in the palace – the identity of which not even Tala knew. What she did know was that they tended to be uncannily accurate – which suggested they were highly positioned.

“So it’s unlikely to be them?” Tala frowned.

“At this point it would be wise to consider other avenues for how your boy acquired this core,” Eleanor said.

What other avenues were there though? What other power could afford this kind… of almost random swipe at them?

“I… don’t…. who?” Tala said finally.

Eleanor’s frown deepened, her scar flexing. “Think girl. What recent event might have given rise to an opportunity for an otherwise powerless young man to attain a mithril core without anyone – even his family, us, and the crown – finding out about it until now?

Recent events… the only thing she could think of was…

She paled. “No, you can’t be serious…”

Her mother looked little happier, though she bore it better. “Discount the impossible my daughter, and if the incredibly unlikely remains the only possible answer…”

Tala couldn’t believe it.

Wouldn’t believe it.

“You can’t mean to tell me you think Willaim Ashfield somehow…”

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“…Killed Al’Hundra?”

“Yes.”

It was actually amusing how little Griffith reacted to his admittance.

Perhaps she’d simply become numb to being surprised after dragging him to her office – Mithril Core with him.

His team however had been sent back to their dorm. Under protest. And with an escort.

Though how much of that was out of protectiveness and how much was out of a desire to see him answer a hundred and one questions remained to be seen.

After all, he’d promised answers after his climactic confrontation with his fiancée.

And his team naturally had a lot of questions themselves. Though it spoke well of them that they’d been willing to accompany him to the dining hall before they got them.

He could only imagine the intervening hour – in which he’d been locked in Griffith’s office alone – had only heightened his teammates’ desires for answers.

As had Griffith’s, given that she’d asked her question within moments of striding into the room, having finished with whatever it was she’d spent the intervening time doing.

Personally, he’d have bet it was a tie between placing a protective detail on this room and his team, while also giving reports to her superiors.

To that end, the fact that she’d left the door open when she burst in was a little surprising.

“How?” Griffith asked.

“I’d rather not say,” he said, leaning back into the chair he’d been rather forcefully shoved into.

Griffith was not amused. “This is no time for jokes, cadet! If what you say is true and you genuinely do have the means to kill a kraken in deep water…”

It could change the balance of power across the continent. Ignoring Al’Hundra’s nest, there were other minor nests scattered about the place, each containing cores of their own.

To that end, he didn’t smirk this time. “Which is why I’m not joking. I’d genuinely rather not say.”

Griffith slumped tiredly onto her desk, before leaning over to belatedly close the door. “That won’t matter. People – powerful people – have already put together your most likely source for that core. They aren’t going to just accept you saying ‘no’.”

“At which point the hot pokers and pliers come out?” he asked, determinedly nonplussed.

Something that couldn’t be said Griffith as she winced. “As much as I hate to say it, that’s not an unlikely outcome.”

William smirked. “Well, they might want to hold off. Given the last two hours, I imagine my name is a rather hot topic right now, and people might notice if I disappeared off into some torture chamber for the next few… forevers.”

Griffith cocked her head, clearly slightly put off by his nonchalance. “You’re holding onto techniques that might be vital to the survival of the kingdom at large.”

He shrugged. “Yep, and while that might unofficially be a fairly decent reason to torture me into confessing them, it’s not strictly… legal is it.”

Again, Griffith winced.

“To that end, would the Blackstones accept that? The fiancée of their heir getting dragged off in the night? Somehow, I doubt they’d take that lying down. Hell, I don’t think they could afford to. It’d make them look… weak.” He paused. “And that’s ignoring that they’ll also be interested in what’s in my noggin.”

Griffith opened her mouth to speak, but he cut her off.

“Hell, beyond that, if things did get violent, the fact that the crown abducted a young man from the academy – where just about everyone’s children go - might make people who might otherwise be leaning south twitch a little more north.” He smiled. “So no, I don’t think anyone will be taking me anywhere to ask me anything without a lot of people getting very upset.”

Admittedly, there was the chance of someone deciding to risk it all by doing something foolish – but he had one final ace up his sleeve if that happened.

“I…” Griffith started to say, clearly lost for words as her eyes darted to the other end of the room… for some reason?

Though it didn’t take long for that reason to reveal itself.

Quite literally.

“Enough,” a woman said as she literally appeared from thin air.

Or rather, the shadows seemed to… untangle themselves to reveal the Queen of Lindholm.

He knew it was her. He’d seen her portraits.

With that said, he’d be the first to admit they didn’t quite do the woman justice. For one thing, they utterly failed to convey the sheer… MILF appeal the woman exuded in the flesh.

Pitch black high elven eyes creased with amusement, lips upturned into a slight smile. The crown on her head gleamed amidst a halo of platinum gold hair that came down to perfectly frame her angelic features.

Of course, that wasn’t why he wanted to call her a MILF. Gorgeous ethereal features were pretty much the par for the course where elves were concerned.

No, the reason for the MILF comparison came in how her fur-lined black dress hugged her figure. A figure that showed that if nothing else, the Lindholm royal family had some human in their bloodline.

Elves tended to be svelte rather than curvy.

Queen Yelena Lindholm was curvy.

Very curvy, William thought even as both he and Griffith shot up to bow.

“Your majesty, what an unexpected pleasure,” he said just a moment before his Instructor could, ignoring the not so subtle glare she sent his way from her own bowed position.

And he wasn’t lying. On either account. It was nice to know his little stunt had gotten the attention he wanted.

Plus, elf MILF.

“At ease,” the woman said, voice tinkling, as she sat behind the desk.

Unable to resist, William couldn’t help but speak even as he pulled up his chair. “Fancy spell.”

And he wasn’t lying about that either. He wasn’t aware Fae magic allowed for invisibility. He’d certainly attempted it on at least one occasion. Along with a lot of other things. Alas, Fae magic seemed irrevocably tied to simple elemental or alchemical manipulation rather than more esoteric phenomena.

Certainly, he’d had little to no luck bending light – which was the only way he could think of to attain invisibility like he’d just seen.

Apparently, someone within the royal family had seen more success.

…Though the fact that that wasn’t common knowledge – and that she’d just revealed it to him – was a little alarming.

“As precocious as I’ve heard,” Queen Yelena said, a motherly smile on her features as she observed him from across the desk.

Meanwhile, Griffith’s glare redoubled.

“I’m flattered you’ve heard of me,” Willaim said, a little surprised even if he fought to hide it.

Mostly he was trying to get a gauge on the woman’s personality.

“It’s hard not to, what with the way Griffith goes on about you.” Her smile faded as she leaned forward. “Of course, that was in a private capacity. I was more than a little surprised when your name started showing up on my desk in an official capacity.”

Despite himself, William’s eyes flitted toward a flushed looking Griffith. He hadn’t been aware she knew the queen personally? How had that come about?

“Your desk?” He returned his attention to the monarch – and now that he thought about it, wasn’t it a little strange she’d come here alone? Even with that ‘invisibility’ spell?

Though in retrospect, he now knew why Griffith chose to leave the door open when she’d walked in. Indeed, that knowledge was why he wasn’t currently trying to guess between invisibility and teleportation.

He continued. “I wasn’t aware my little innovation would draw that much attention.”

The woman raised an eyebrow, her motherly demeanour fading for a moment. “A potentially lethal spell that can punch through armor at three times the range of any other spell? Make no mistake, that’s very much something of interest to the crown, especially with the threat of war looming.”

Griffith’s gaze shot to the woman at those words, though William chuckled. “I must admit, I wasn’t expecting you to just come out and say it. Sure, everyone knows it’s coming, but no one seems willing to say it aloud.”

“Well, I’m sorry that you don’t have a monopoly on audacity, William.” Once more a twinkle of amusement appeared in the woman’s eyes. “Turnabout is fair play after all.”

“Well, I can’t argue that.” He shrugged, wondering for just a moment just how real the personality of the woman across from him was, and how much was an attempt to ingratiate herself with a man who’d swiftly become a national asset. “Though even then, I’m surprised to see you of all people here.”

That was certainly audacious. Especially on such short notice. And alone.

“You shouldn’t be. My family has always preferred to be ‘hands on’. Comes from originally being Military Governors.”

“And yet you’re the first royal I’m meeting? Even after my Spell-Bolt piqued your interest.”

“Oh that?” She waved a hand dismissively. “One might say that was an unfortunate side effect of the family being too hands on. Indeed, there’s been something of a small civil war within the palace over which of my daughters would get to take charge of implementing your idea. They’re all quite interested.”

That was… unexpected. He’d thought that his innovation was considered too ‘small beans’ for even a cousin to be sent out.

Instead, it had been effectively deadlocked at the highest levels.

“Unfortunately,” the Queen continued. “Recent events required me to take unilateral action. Fortunately the Palace isn’t so far away.”

She leaned in to whisper conspiratory at that last part.

“Still,” he asked. “No guards?

This time, when the woman smiled, it seemed to show a lot more teeth.

“Oh, I wouldn’t say that.”

She clicked her fingers and where once the office had contained but three people, there were now seven.

One on each side of the Queen.

One behind both William and Griffith.

Indeed, William felt the hairs on the back of his neck rise as he realized that if they’d intended to harm him, he’d never have seen them coming.

“My mistake,” he said, trying to appear unphased. “It heartens me to know our Queen is so well protected.”

“And the well wishes of a loyal subject always warm my heart,” the woman responded. “Though that does make me wonder why said subject seems so… reluctant to share his latest and most brilliant innovation with said queen?”

She leaned forward, and there was no mistaking the hunger in her eyes.

“Why, a spell that allowed an Academy student to kill a kraken? I could think of all sorts of uses for that?”

William simply smiled back. “I imagine you could. I also imagine that a lot of other people could too.”

He ignored the tensing of the guardswoman behind him.

“Those other people aren’t your queen,” the elf in front of him said slowly.

“No, I suppose they aren’t,” he acknowledged. “But in the interest of being candid, I think we can both agree that that might change in the coming years.”

It was almost amusing how synchronised the palace guards were as their hands all moved to the hilts of their swords in unison – with only the upraised turn of their queen’s hands stopping the drawing of their blades.

“Dangerous words,” the Queen said.

He shrugged, before repeating her earlier words back to her. “What can I say? I’m precocious.”

He also thought it was more dangerous to have the woman across from him forget that a counterweight to her authority existed.

“I suppose you are.” She paused, as a thought occurred. “Still, given, as you said, that your fiancée might be sitting in my seat one day, you seem quite eager to get in her bad books.”

She eyed him.

“Why?”

Finally, they were getting around to the part of the meeting he cared about.

His motivations.

“Well, that’s easy. I don’t like slavery. To that end, I’m giving you the first and best opportunity to ‘wow’ me into giving my idea to you.”

If Griffith had the ability to shoot lasers from her eyes, William was pretty sure he’d be dead a thousand times over.

Yelena though?

The Queen laughed.

Deep and hearty enough that by the end she was wiping tears from her eyes.

“Precocious indeed,” she finally said. “You know, I think my daughter would like you.”

“Which one?”

“Any and all of them,” she said, deadly serious once more.

The ‘wowing’ had begun.

And it was a strong opening bid.

Comments

cyrgon

🤩

Blue Fishcake

Sorry about the delays ya'll, I don't know what it was about this chapter, but I just couldn't get it to flow like I wanted.

cyrgon

Is there something you’re not telling us Blue? > Blackfield Ashfield + Blackstone?

mike wade

Time to charm your fucking ass off William. This bitch is one tough customer.

Nicholas Crowley

"Certainly, some compromises on personal ability had been made in the name of political considerations, but all of them were talented in their own right." <---- things said momens before disaster

cyrgon

Joking of course—but the first few mentions of Tala’s house might need a quick fix

Michael Spriggs

It flows amazingly now, so your work paid off!

DMR1

You knocked it out of the park!

BubblyGhost

Anti slavery hot milf elf queen? New best wife sighted in bound.

Brian Roger

Damn, Queen Yelena sure is starting off strong in this little bout of diplomacy.

Vaderxyz

I know this series is called Sexy Steampunk Babes, but until now it's only felt like there was one Babe. And yah Elf Milf.

BubblyGhost

Also damn, I feel like if he gives them the secret to actual bombs he might be dooming this world in a sense to the current path of Earth's weaponry. Can't say that's too much of a terrible thing but man, certainly would lead to a path of untold death and destruction.

Nicholas Crowley

Also did Yelena just offer all of her kids as Williams harem? Because damn that's actually a crazy offer of that's what happened.

Luke Payne

Well, it turned out good, so no worries there, other than, you know, me checking my inbox ever ten minuets to see if there was the chapter, but I do that anyway because I want to see if a lot of stories update lol

Larynx Punchworthy

Me: Wow this is a good chapter. My Brain: ELF MILF ELF MILF

Luke Payne

"So, what can you offer me?" "A harem of sexy elf babes." "Sold."

RottenTangerine

It almost feels worth it to bring up his knowledge of another world. Like, the level of information he has and has access to. At this point he has firmly put himself on the queens side and may as well have more bargaining power.

Kevin Neely

But our boy is aiming higher. MILFSSSSSSSS.

Laenthis Tranchesoleil

Brilliant chapter ! Love the queen and William's boldness with her, I can't wait to see more of their interactions. She's already offering a lot and he hasn't even revealed that what he can give her goes much, much farther than the spell-bolt and the way he killed Al'hundra... Maybe he ought to ask for her hand instead, he has, after all, a taste for more mature women... Will you take a small break before heading toward book two or can we expect to see the first chapter next week (no pressure intended, rest as much as needed we shall wait, but I am curious) ? I can barely wait, I'd honestly buy a full story on hard cover if I could !

Ember

Honestly I agree with this, and he has the ability to prove it too with his abilities as a craftsman. Also I'm shocked I didn't realise this earlier but William has the ability to make muskets, and he hasn't yet, which suggests to me he's keeping that trick up his sleeve until he either desperately needs it (say him and the queen are loosing the war) or he has his own house.

Baron Von Mott

"For one thing, they utterly failed to convey the sheer… MILF appeal the woman exuded in the flesh." Oh no... Here we go again... 😂

Baron Von Mott

No worries, Blue. The surprising and entertaining direction this one went in was worth the wait! 👍

Wotün, the Butterlord

How does one convince William to their side? Offer one: Bury him in Elven princesses. ...Critical hit; it's super-effective! Also, damn these cliffhangers!

Indexo's Vault

Why settle for her daughter(s) when he can sim for the whole family lmao

cyrgon

> “You can’t mean to tell me you think Willaim Ashfield somehow…” Minor spelling mistake: William

H F

So is the next chapter still on for Friday?

Blue Fishcake

I'm trying to keep to the schedule :D I'm hoping to take a small break between book one and two.

Atom

And the counter-offer would be..."why not include yourself?" LOL

Noldere

More like not very effective, considering his inclinations.

Andrew

Thank you!

Found&Lost

She clicked her fingers and where once the office had contained but three people, there were now seven. Two to each side of the Queen. One behind both William and Griffith. That's 9: Queen, Will, dark elf milf, guard behind each will and Griffith and TWO on EACH SIDE of the queen?

aj0413

…well, incompetence is certainly never a character flaw of our dear authors antagonists, but wow Tala’s mom caught on fucking fast

Found&Lost

Ironically, industry would in a way help? We finally have relative peace (no major wars for decades even if small and medium ones are everywhere) that came about from the mutual industrial slaughter of the world wars. They took the "glory" out of wars.

MaybeASquid

If he reveals that, it won't be until after he has his own house I suspect. I don't think he'll tell the queen unless he's directly joining the royal house

The Uub

I was half expecting Williams lip to curl at the mention of "girls" when here, in this very room, he has two women, which are more to his taste.

Andrew Lechner

To be fair, they are elves, so it's not unlikely that they are already old or at least midlife by human standards.

Kaywye

Daaaaaammnnn. He's treading a very fine line. Step too far either way, and he will be screwed. And not in a good way. Every time I read a chapter, I become more impressed. Awesome world building, awesome politics, awesome characters, awesome pacing. It pushes me to raise the bar on all of the other stories I read, and the others don't stack up favorably. Well done.

The Uub

Though on second thought, one shouldn't spit on an offer to become the next Prince.

Lord Dave

It may either be my grammar or my math which is off but I think there was a miss count. "... there were now seven. Two to each side of the Queen. One behind both William and Griffith." With TWO TO EACH SIDE it would be a total of it would be four guards by the Queen bringing the total people in the room to nine.

Lanze

ahhh I was absolutely rooting for Tala's mom assigning her to "woo" William back into the fold, but how on earth could she compete with the QUEEN?!?

Jonathan Gibbons

Ah, there is perhaps a missing but important comma: Two, to each side of the Queen." - but definitely needs a tweak to come out at 7, and perhaps something like "Two, one to each side of the Queen".

Wotün, the Butterlord

Plus, if they've got their mother's genes, they're likely both older and look the part

Borisoff72

The Queen is willing to dilute her family's elemental invisibility magic by having half human heirs? Also, there is another way to get invisibility, by acting on the perception of any witness rather than bending light itself. It seems easier is all and was the method of The Shadow, a character from a very good 1940a radio serial and a very bad 1990s movie.

Buster_Bro

Ah I knew it! People in the story are smart enough to realize he killed it! Though I do love that the queen is willing to sell Will a daughter for his loyalty as a starting bid that’s hilarious. I wonder how long until Will starts to see the bad side even with him having both major factions wanting him safe and on their side.

Galven Star

Well he did say something about oceans of blood, I think.

Galven Star

Makes sense, Will had to be daring in this chapter, but not too much, it's a razors edge you had to walk.

Jacob

Not only that, but given the nobility's taboos against human+elf mixed marriages alluded to earlier, the queen certainly already decided that it's also worth the guaranteed political backlash as well.

White Neko Knight

The Queen is terrifying. She might honestly be one of the most capable characters you've written. I'm excited for the coming industrial revolution, and how they're going to hide it from the rest of the Queendom.

Dancingrage

Famous last words, those. Selecting for politics over talent is gonna cost her the game in a multitude of ways.

vetro 26

You definitely got it in the end though

Dancingrage

And the daughters have a steep hill to climb to match what she has going on. Her reaction to finding out Will's a cougar chaser and MILF hunter is going to be priceless.

Dancingrage

College girl who isn't THAT interested, versus confident, stacked Elf MILF and her hopefully equally stacked daughters

Dovahpriest

From the description, sounds like she isn’t “pure elf” either, so I doubt William’s inclusion will have much effect.

Dovahpriest

I’m pretty sure Griffith is one of the queen’s daughters, or at least closely related. A countess gets to abandon her lands, be an instructor wearing the colors of House Royal, ask palace guards to deliver a letter and has regular conversations with the queen? Also, the daughters are vying over who gets to handle the bolt bow project so I would wager they’re adults.

allsampah

Why bang a princess when you can bang the queen herself?

MarakEvans

Curvy. Elf... MILF. *Thonking Emoji* Would one of her daughters happen to be sired by... a Dark Elf?

MarakEvans

Yes, I'm sure William would love to enjoy the company of a woman who has actually lived longer than he has.

MarakEvans

They aren't going to be able to hide industrialization. They just need to run harder and widen their lead on the competition.

MarakEvans

Would love a backstory with lots of antics from the Queen.

MarakEvans

So... can the queen sick all of her daughters on this boy? Also spoiler question: Where would the venue for skyship combat be?

Buster_Bro

I doubt that unless Will can give her something way more promising. Like if he started building cars or the like as well as bringing about guns and gasoline powered things. He’s good but he ain’t worth more than maybe two daughters. And if Will and possibly the Queen gets their way over the ocean.

Thenais

Will probably settle with Griffith as a spouse and a new house

MarakEvans

Come on, Blue. The Queen's delivery of the "I also have surprises" was cinematic as fuck. The lean-in for dramatic effect was spicy. In that moment, William definitely had his guard lowered. Surely the queen noticed something at the time. Seeding the things William noticed when entering the room was a great touch. 1. The fact that the door didn't close like Griffith *usually* would. Has William been in her office besides what we have read so far? Did Griffith set up this meeting or was she volun-told? 2. Griffith looking in the direction of the Invisible Guest. 3. The casual revelation of a secret spell. 4. The Curvy Elf Milf... ay yo... "she's got some human in her." Super thanks for the chapter. Much love.

MarakEvans

One could say... It leads to political... stallin'. *laughs in history nerd... at own joke*

MarakEvans

I think she knows... I think someone already told her. I... Queen NTRs Griffith? I think I need to stop. I need help.

MarakEvans

Also ironically, wars tend to boost industrial output. WHICH INCLUDES IRON!!! *shows self out*

MarakEvans

Saving a secret new technique isn't a cliche... It's a strategy. To waste it on something you could have done without, might mean facing a powerful enemy you then can't surprise. ... Or something like that.

MarakEvans

Will be happy when you've rested up and come back refreshed for book two.

MarakEvans

The Butterlord makes an interesting argument. Hmm.

MarakEvans

If we go down the full family harem route, I think Blue is going to write way more. With respect to each member of the family, geometrically more.

MarakEvans

Lol. Nah, Will A I'M is a perfectly serviceable name.

MarakEvans

Will the plan survive first contact with Friday? Find out next week! On Patreon!

MarakEvans

Tala's mom also has her coconspirator to make assumptions off of. The spy in the royal palace is a nice seed too.

MarakEvans

@Dovahpriest Drem Yol Lok. Krosis, keep this rrat on the down low. Don't wanna spoil any surprises Blue has.

Matt Bradock

Well, that's... one way to secure a critical asset. The best way. Loyalty always trumps fear. Reward is always a better motivator than punishment. The Queen seems scary competent. I get a feeling that the Blackstones are in for a shock.

MarakEvans

In light of William's preferences, hopefully also well aged.

mike wade

She’s a queen who’s trying ( and partly succeeding) to abolish slavery, a multi billion industry whose output entire dynasties are built on. If she was anything short of hyper competent, she would be dead by now.

Gjim

Hes going to be Prince William now ,lol, well probably. You always keep me guessing Blue Fishcake, which I like. Though I half expect Tala to lose her cool during the duel and unleash an huber trauma burst spell before William potentially wins. See you next time.

The Uub

Chances are that Griffith was one of the queens friends at the academy, at least that's my guess. Someone close enough to be a friend yet not close enough to be in her retinue, or future sister-wife.

DMR1

Nah, they might straight up kill him thinking that one of the beings he made a contract with has done something whacked.

DMR1

Between guns and "conservatively" 20+ cores from multiple wrecks, those items alone are promising. And he can cook :)

DMR1

The political implications of this are also hilarious. Blackstone might decide that Ashfield just played them. Even if not, he just handed his mom an alliance that makes the idea of treason seem like a poor life strategy along with (though not public with) securing another house's loyalty via mithril core bribe. These events alone might kick off several "police actions" and maybe a cold war as the slavers realize they are about to get fucked.

Trilobyte9364

The orcs have dragon riders possibly? Make for one hell of a boarding party

MASC

I think he might make Airplanes that use combustion engines. Makes a factory with a production line for them. He can then use the shards mitral to make jet aircraft that far exceed all previous shards since will tends to combine magic with his creations so far

MASC

I think William’s going to introduce aeroplanes with combustion engines as his next step in the future and make a factory with a production line. In Blue’s previous one shot that this story is built from he hinted at it as a way to get his independence. Plus I can imagine William using the shard mithril to create the next generation shard that is pretty much a jet fighter.

DMR1

This joke caused me to starve, but at least it wasn't because of Real Communism

DMR1

He might actually skip certain evolutions because of the whole "pollution" thing he is no doubt familiar with. The advantage of starting with foreknowledge means he can carefully choose which technologies to bring in without causing too much environmental chaos.

MASC

I can imagine him doing that with steam by using the mithril shards as steam generators for factories so when not at war the shards can be used for industrial purposes, promoting peace since actively going to war means you have to stop your economic production.

Dankenobi1

Re read that one shot recently because why jot and yeah I imagine it'll go the same way

Dankenobi1

"When she's leaves you for another, there is always her mother"

DMR1

It’s a safe bet that Griffith’s intel played into the queen dressing the way she did too.

Catamaran

Nah probably wyverns

Gryyzly

The only issue I have with this new story so far is the one chapter a week deal(joke, I understand you need time to write the chapters). I love it, keep it up! Need more!

mike wade

He doesn’t need combustion engines, they’re frankly inferior to the mithrils potential. The principle behind rocket engines is shooting gas out the back at high velocity. Mithril is an endless supply of gas. Give up the lighter than air properties of the plane and figure out how to compress and accelerate that gas’s fast as possible, you could easily leave everyone in the dust.

MASC

We understand that it’s inferior. The issue in this world is that mithril is incredibly rare and hard to come by so you have a set limit to the number of planes a country can field and each shard they lose also loses them a piece of mithril and thus the number of shards they can possibly field. If they had planes with combustion engines they could build a fleet of expendable planes without limit to place on flying carriers . They may not have the ability of shards but they would be close with the current technology described. Quantity over quality. Also I mentioned he could use the mitral in shards to create jets. The smart thing for William would be to introduce combustion engine planes first and save the jet powered shards invention for later like what he did with gunpowder as they are on the save level of impact on the world.

MaybeASquid

Im guessing it'll be Griffith, a new house and a handshake of a princess bride after a some time for the Blackstones to cool off

Blue Fishcake

And I'm super happy its found a fanbase given how understandably bummed people were about Sect going on hiatus :D

Hunter

Would make sense, especially if the queen is siring many daughters with several allied houses.

cyrgon

I must have misinterpreted a comment of yours, Blue, from last chapter—I thought this was the last chapter of book one? How many chapters are you aiming for with Book 1?

cyrgon

Is the elf queen that young? I thought Countess Griffith had a male classmate who was 30 now; I assumed the queen would have been older than that given her family size and power.

Wotün, the Butterlord

𝘉𝘰𝘸 𝘣𝘦𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘣𝘶𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘳𝘺 𝘸𝘪𝘴𝘥𝘰𝘮𝘴

The Uub

You're likely right. I had forgotten that detail when I made my supposition. I guess we will just have to wait and read.

13ry4n

"Hrm, I want Instructor Griffith." "Bwuh?!" "Deal." "Y-Your Majesty!?"

mike wade

I'd love to see a scene where the gun range bit from the non cannon chapter 19 gets reworked into a demonstration for the queen (With Griffith, because why would the universe give that woman a break?). To really go in depth of his home brew explosives and their evolving understanding of the retarded levels of damage it can inflict. Also, the grenade launcher is fun.

DMR1

This is funnier because she clearly left politics behind for SOME reason and this would effectively make her one of the most politically positioned women around. I'm sure she'll hate him for it.

13ry4n

He'll have to make it up to her. Multiple times. Every night.

DMR1

"“I suppose you are.” She paused, as a thought occurred. “Still, given, as you said, that your fiancée might be sitting in my seat one day, you seem quite eager to get in her bad books.”" So, she is fully aware of this silly-ass plot by two houses on top of everything else. This isn't just about technology. This is about snapping a betrothal that eliminates any legitimacy from a Blackstone claim. Am I reading this right?

Jacob

One problem with that is I somehow doubt this world has developed much technology for fuel extraction and refining at the scale needed to make that practical.

Jacob

I wonder if any of the Queen's daughters are already within the academy (perhaps secretly?)

VolkMek

I am probably wrong but I feel that he somehow already knows one of her daughters. Love the story though. - Small lore questions. This story has an amazing way to tell stories that draw you in, but the lack of detail makes me sort of CRAVE visual elements now. What does a High Elf's eyes look like? I may have missed this in earlier stories, but are they just black pupils or are they black sclera with the coloring part of the eye in the center or something like that? What does an Airship look like? Is it a traditional boat carried by an air bag? Is it closer to one of our Dirigibles? Is it something like the Girl Genius comics where it looks like a Zepplin but the ship runs throughout the interior of the balloon and the balloon itself is a metal hull? Is it more like Last Exile Airships (Personally my favorite option)?

Blue Fishcake

She knows the Blackstones have the will and power to threaten her throne. Not the ‘Summerfield plot’ though :D

No

I think that's just a general reference to the fact that House Blackstone is the head of the anti-crown/pro slavery faction. That plot in particular is still seemingly secret, but most people can see that civil war/an attempted coup is on the horizon.

DMR1

*Record Screech* hol' up. Chapter 9: "William smiled humourlessly. “Well, that and I imagine my house wants the support of the Blackstone fleet should they make a bid for our province’s ducal seat at some point in the future. Old lady Summerfield still doesn’t have an heir, so a succession crisis is likely inevitable when she finally croaks.”" Are these not direct "Daughters?" Or am I missing a whole tier of political chicanery here in an insomniac re-read?

Small Town Games

A strong opening bid indeed. I can't imagine anyone matching it.

Oreo-belt25

This is the queen. Royal family. Top dog. The summerfields are a ducal house. Blackstone(ducal) abd Ashfield(lesser nobility) are conspiring to get Ashfield to take the dukedom from Summerfield, at which point tge two dukedoms would fight the royals.

Jeremy Grundy

Poor William, with the reveal of the invisibility spell he has to assume he is being watched 24/7 now.

Dancingrage

If it wasn't known who slew Al'Hundra, it is by the end of that call between Tala and her mom. That's not including the fact that a lot of more intelligent people are going to get the news from their kids, put two and two together, and realize that the Kraken Slayer isn't just a joke title anymore. That alone promises to have certain implications beyond the apparent: House Ashfield has a man, who is apparently able to kill god-kraken, and he despises Blackstone for their slavery, willing to bet a goddamn mithril core just to get the hell away from them. While the backroom dealing between Will and Yelena is talking about how things could be shifting away from Royal hands, the smart ones outside are probably sensing a shift in the wind as a result of this. The bolt-bow is still hidden, waiting for time to be brought out. The death of a god-beast? The procurement of a core? Everyone outside of those worthies are likley consulting the stars, tea leaves, or the gods to try to find out what's going on, not realizing that it all resides in the hands of one man.

DownhillRabbit6.1

Honestly the intelligence, intuition, and investigative drive of all involved parties is refreshing. Ain't got shit on Grandpa Will though! Teach 'em what for young Old Man!!!

mike wade

Probably for the best. He's the queens golden goose. It's better to sacrifice privacy than be assassinated

mike wade

Or given a chance for that matter. The queen would never allow anyone the chance.

Laenthis Tranchesoleil

Well, now we have TWO amazing series to await eagerly instead of one. I see this as an absolute win ! Your releases are probably THE cultural highlights of my weeks, and I follow of a lot of weekly stuff like mangas and anime.

ChaosAndBunnies

Every time I see William making deals like this, I can't help but think the 'Merchant of Death' nickname would fit him far better than it ever did Nobel or Bout. It's not often that people sell off ideas that irreversibly change the face of warfare, let alone multiple times.

R

It's Griffith. Griffith or one of the elven teammates

Gabriel

Whats the difference between a shard’s mithril core and the mithril core of an airship? Are they the same?

mike wade

Size. Mithril shards are generally broken down airship cores.

Katz

There probably are ways to detect invisibility. Depending on how the invisibility contract works, but a contract of his own to detect infrared or ultraviolet EM is probably not that hard...probably the hardest would be to explain to the fae what the EM spectrum is, and why do you want so detect a wider band.

No

Three, House New Haven has been brought up as another duchy identified with the slaver/insurrectionist cause.

Dankenobi1

Whose to say he ain't gonna get offered the chance to make more princesses?

Dankenobi1

No plan survives first contact with the enemy (beta readers) you should know this

Dankenobi1

All he needs to do is "invent" the combustion engine, from there he can make anything really, propellers for shards so they don't rely on magic etc

Dankenobi1

It's not unheard of for engines to work off of crude oil, infact there are many engines that are specifically still made to do so even today, originally it was to aid the working class such as farmers so they could afford a cheaper but less efficient fuel. All they need to do is find an oil well which shouldn't be too hard since most in this worlds would be untapped, along with this titration and extraction of different levels of fuel such as petrol and methanol is surprisingly really simple

Dankenobi1

As a great politician once said 'love is blind"

Dankenobi1

I second this, as much as I'm loving the read, it's hard to get invested in the world when you don't know the details when it comes to ascetic especially with the ships, is it diesel punk airships (they certainly have access to metal), is it steam punk, are they a copy paste of captain hooks ship of Peter pan?

H F

(Sniffs) We still looking good for a tomorrow release? (scratches agitatedly)

Dankenobi1

Can't imagine that's too hard, there's animals that see with EM all over (mainly fish), and for infrared he could just ask for the same vision snakes have for example.

fezman81

I take no news as good news, he always tells us at least the day before if there's gonna be a delay.

Blue Fishcake

Alas, knock on effect of last week is messing with this week. I need an extra day. Thanks for your patience as ever. Any of you poor bastards who've been with me for a while know how the last few chapters of my books tend to be.

The Fire Piper

Aw sad. Well, the wait is always worth it.

Small Town Games

He wants to put a little more human in that bloodline, if you get what I mean. Ok, Im done

H F

Cmon man just a paragraph you know I’m good for it

mike wade

It’s ok, We already set our calendars for Saturday/ possibly Sunday. You are VERY predictable in this regard. But good product far outweighs and forgives any other issues.

fezman81

Devastating comedic timing 10/10 I have a henhouse's worth of egg on my face.

Drunk Pop-Tart

You got any more of them paragraphs?

John

when's the last time we had a friday release hahaha

MarakEvans

I'd buy you a drink for the troubles, but we ain't drinking buddies like that. :p

Jacob

I'm assuming the queen has already caught on as to why he wants to be able to use the spell bolt on the floats. She might be just as motivated to break Williams betrothal to the Blackstones as he is now.

MarakEvans

I JUST SAW A NOTIFICATION PING *pavlovian salivation*

mike wade

Holy shit, Talas mother is demanding. The Suttle reprimand for not immediately offering up suspects shows how razor sharp Tala needs to be to meet her mothers expectations.

Trevayne

I am greatly enjoying the story, but have noticed that I never get any notifications that a new chapter is available. I am getting them for most of the other patreons I am following. Is this an author choice or are my setting screwed up?