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Please don't hate Eli too much, he's an edgy teenage boy in an existential crisis who has no filter and likes to think after he speaks. 😂

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Tifany Shirley

I feel the character development! I love!

Callum

Well Eli that no good to think after you speak because look how bad you fucked up.

toblerone231

Noooooooo why must you hurt us this way 😭😭😭

Jaxous

He may be an edgy teen with no filter....but he's still a little shit.😡😡

Ahleena

Oh no! Eli REEEEALLY should have thought about things before speaking like that. I wonder if he's mad about something else and he's using his brother as a punching bag for his own shortcomings 🤔

Mia Stirling

Now I'm going to be on edge until the next one comes out. 😭😭 The precious beans, I love them so .

Blondie

ELI NOOOOO. Poor Jas. Kai will fix it.

tif

Noooooooooooo. They were about to dance and Kai was about to maybe say something, now everyone is upset 😭

LunaSukii

God I love this story. Great job, Author!

Mysti

Ahhh my poor babies! So intense! Eli has such pretty eyes though...

medchan

I, too, struggle with not thinking before I speak. But my fuck ups usually consist of me saying something completely inappropriate and forgetting their are kids present. 😅

Ash

Damn. Kai is hella pissed and has ever right to be. XD

Katelynn Back

Ah little brother needs to learn to be a slightly better person. Maybe cause he’s so young he’s so rash and brazen? All of them are so pretty though either way 🥰

Rozanthie

What's going on in that head of yours, Eli? That wasn't the reaction you were expecting, was it? Looks like that big brother of yours has changed a bit and you didn't realise. And maybe he's not wrong, but I think Jasper feels bad enough about his past without having his annoying little brother point out his flaws in front of someone he actually cares about now. Not that Kai will care. I always love how Kai can say so much without having to say anything. Scared the crap it if Elias with just a look. Also, loving the color palette on this chapter. It's so moody and pretty.

KingJJ

I can and will scream this bus stop down XD

Anna Anderson

Brother or not, I would have hit him. And all 4 of my younger brothers know that. There are just certain lines you don't cross, family or not. And it looks like little brother needs to be knocked off his high horse 😒🤷‍♀️

Aniela Settle

Can I punch a child? Because I’d like to punch a child right now. Idk what happened between them but goodness someone needs therapy.

Ada Bless

Kids can be such attention grabbing lil craps. Some will say anything to get a rouse out of people.

chiicreates

Oh duuuuude. I was ready to YEET this little boy back into non-existence. Got me gasping out loud on this here bus I’m riding at the moment lol

PhoenixFyre

What the hell is wrong with that younger brother. It's almost like he enjoyed hurting and embarrassing Jasper.

StorydragonZee

Oh no poor Jasper. Aww look how protective Kai is. Little brother doesn’t stand a chance

Saia

Well, super Eli. You just broke Jasper and made Kai want to fling you into the sun. There are better ways of getting his brother's attention. I hope he sees that now. Kai will fix it! Kai will heal the hurt!

Nope Nope

Thank Goodness Jacob came a stopped Eli from saying or doing anymore damage right now. He also reinforced that point that he had screwed up and had done damage so that Eli couldn’t fail to grasp that point.

Sarah Pollock

Oh honey. This scene is just heartbreaking. Poor Jasper, and Eli just spouting off and getting carried away...that’s your brother, child. Don’t be so hateful. Oh my heart.

Sydney

I’ve had enough teenage brothers to know this is exactly what teenage brothers do and they make you wanna smack em so hard but also you know they’re just lashing out for their own reasons. Hope Eli can get himself figured out before he does some serious damage to their relationship.

Daniela Padilla

Well.. he seems to take after his mother 😶 There definitely seems to be a deeper problem between these two brothers. Can’t wait to see what that is! I’m enjoying your comics so much! Can’t wait for the next one! 😆

Elizabeth

You know when you keep opening the fridge hoping for food to magically appear. I kept swiping on the last page like a new page was suddenly going to appear cauSE DAMN WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY HEART. Elias clearly needs to be locked in a room with our boy to work on his feeeeeeelings. No punching allowed.

EJ

Kai’s gonna cut a bitch

TheyIs

You didn’t mean to what, Elias? Call your brother a whore? Because that’s what you did.