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Finally, the end of the chapter...!!

And #MUTED has officially surpassed the 300 pages mark!! 🍾

These last pages almost made me lose my mind, I realised some problems with pacing and dialogue so I ended up adding more panels which screwed with my page order and layout and basically threw my entire schedule off course completely LOL;;;;

This is what I get for sloppy planning and past kan assuming that future kan will surely find an easy solution for all plot- and writing problems :'3 I have learned my lesson.

I hope you enjoy this episode and that it makes sense to you, in the way they both voiced their feelings and I also hope that looking at the panels themselves helps tell the story a bit better. 💙

I really tried my best and part of me is really happy with how this entire chapter turned out, but the other part of me has spent way too many months looking at these pages and reading the script, that I feel I can't judge my work clearly anymore XD

Chapter 7 is going to be.......  a ride, so I hope you look forward to that..!! More on my plans for that chapter soon in a separate post :))

THANK YOU MY DEARIES and good night 💚

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Comments

Katelynn Back

Love every single moment 💜 thank you!

Emmie

I cannot love these two more than I do now!!! Thank you so much for the update!!!

Oriana Campbell

Imma have to get use to seeing Kai actually moving his lips😄💜

Cherry

This is so so so beautiful can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!

Maia (SullieBee)

Ugh I love this series sooo much!!!! And Kai definitely seems different. But it’s a good different💕💕

tif

I love how relaxed and....confident Kai seems? I love these two boys so much.

Phantomfox98

This story is so beautiful. The plot is well written, the art is amazing, the dialogue is honest and real. Never doubt yourself you are doing AMAZING!!! And I may have exploded hearts reading these past few updates...😍

Louisa

I love this so freaking much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

StorydragonZee

Love it. Love it. Love it!!!!! Absolutely beautiful 💖

Insaumniac

This conversation felt so good and organic 😊 We love healthy, supportive relationship vibes!!!

Cj Taylor

💙💙💙💙Kan your gonna make me cry tears of joy

Aven Wolfsong

He looks a lot freer. Less anxious about his old issues that drug him down. They are perfect for each other.

Walter

These guys are so gosh darn cute! Kai just feels like a different person indeed, super relaxed and at ease! Still has the CUTEST thumbs up I bet :D

Aubrey

^^ All of this! Kai looks like he comfortable in his own skin and it is beautiful!

Justina Addice

Kai is such a cute bean I can't get over it😍

Prophe100

Kan!! 💜 With every new update you make me fall in love with these boys more and more. They’re just so adorable 💖

Sarah Hall

It's like Kai became comfortable with himself once her realized that he loved Jas - and that Jas needs him just as much as Kai needs Jas. So lovely! ❤

DP

All those panels where the open blue sky is visible make it feel like something expansive and full of light is opening up in Kai, too — the clouds have parted and he seems less “veiled” by worry or self-doubt... And the flowers also suggest opening up and blossoming and new growth... The love for Jasper has shifted something and now he can “live alongside the people he loves” like he said he wanted to before he chose to go to therapy. Yay for the sweet and brave Kai! 💗

Makenna Rudolph

I know it may be harder on you, but I love the new setup, I think it makes the story flow really naturally! I also love the backgrounds in these last two updates. Thanks for the awesome chapter ☺️💕

Ahleena

That is so sweet that Kai is able to speak because of the support from his sister and his wanting to help Jasper. I reread the beginning and it is great to see how much they have grown since their first meeting.

Sappho

This is so soft and sweet 🥰🥰 and I love Jasper's bedhead 😁

PhoenixFyre

OMG! They are so perfect for each other.

Inuki

One word: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I love the fact they're honest with each other and they just talk things out. You know...like real people? Real mature people? And again, the colors play such a role in making this conversation soft and gentle. Good work! I LOVE IT!