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A Girl Named Sue pg18 WIP (Patreon)

Published:
2018-11-16 09:22:42
Edited:
2018-11-16 09:30:19
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2026-06
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Just wanted to let everyone know how much I appreciated the comments on the last page, I'm going to take everyone's advice into account for when I make the ink pass with these pages. :)

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Zockereinstein

One of my favourites... of course :). Really love it. Maybe the stretching would be a bit more effective if you rotated the view a little so the toes would be a bit more visible, because you will create a better reference of the stretching foot. Another comment, generally speaking, is that I miss a view from behind just before the stretching starts, but adding the new panel would be a completely mess :P. What do you think?

wereworld

Hmm maybe replace the panel 2 perhaps? I'll keep these in mind Zock thanks :)

Agent00Soul

Curious to see how you illustrate her vocal changes. I'm thinking we got a preview in the bottom three panels.

Nils

Wow. She is looking really good now. Much more like a beast before your redraw. The old one was good this is brilliant. I do love how you keep her head mostly human so that we see her terror about what is happening. Shall we assume that the final draw has more to do with the beast of biology 101 than the first chapter?

Kerlem

There seems to be more hair on the back side of her ankle in the first shot of the third large panel than there is in the second shot. Other than that nitpick, it's coming along great!

Kerlem

I'm suspecting that she might wind up on all fours in this one.

Nils

Thats what I meant that beast was on all fors, so maybe this time also, would look great i think.

wereworld

Yep! Something I'm trying to incorporate in these changes :)

wereworld

All part if the plan ;) I'm saving her final form till a later chapter...trust me, it'll be fantastic :D

Nils

Oh no worries. I have no doubt. Your technique has improved steadily. Your passion ... not 😀 all your drawings look like you give everything. So I am just impatient but very hopeful. Keep going. I want to be able to brag that I had been reading and supporting you before it was cool.

wereworld

nice catch Tim, I'll be sure to iron out the details in the final pass ;)