Tsundere Melf Concept (Patreon)

A friend has been selling me on the idea of a tsundere melf, and I gotta say, I'm purchasing into it. Spent a few hours going over the idea and putting it down on paper. What do y'all think?

I think expressing the tsundere portion might be pretty hard outside of writing, but is the one trope I seem to find myself drawn to often.