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Hey there Sweethearts and Welcome to the Rabid-Comic PLANNING COMMITTEE MEETING!!

It's once again time to peer into your minds and see what you might want to have in store for our mighty heroes.

Under this post we're gonna take a look at the comic winning comic pitch and brainstorm some ideas for how the comic might go! Any visuals you might want to see, plot twists, punchlines, character motivations etc!

Let's get to it!

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Hyper Haywire

(Hyper Expansion, Hyper breasts/butt, Hyper dick, cumflation)

In the distant future, everyone is a hyper-fur who wears special collars that let them dial-in how hyper they want their body to be. Of course, as one couple discovers, the collars tend to go haywire when you’re experiencing intense sexual arousal.

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Oh my! I could see this being a sorta Spiritual Sequel to the Hyper Plague. A city filled with hyperfurs and then a pair of lovers getting hot and heavy within it! ^^

Aside from the basic premise there are lots of ways we can go with this. We haven't decided on the species or  the bodily configurations of the couple. We also don't know which ways they become hyper as well.

I could see one being a big muscle buck in some way, very macho and manly with the other being very hyperly feminine with an hourglass macro figure. Getting hot and heavy as they grow hyper and macro all over a cityscape - But let me know your thoughts and ideas!

What visuals or aesthetic ideas you might have for the two principal characters! How do they dress, style their hair etc.

Where and how would you like to see the two get hot and heavy? What sorts of scenes take place, how do they interact together, how does the story progress? Where do they end up and what happens along the way?

Take a look at the prompt and let me know what you would be hoping to see from this sequence! 

I ALWAYS love hearing your opinions. And PLEASE don't be afraid to "SECOND" somebody else's opinions as well. That also lets me know what the audience likes to see ^^ <3 <3<3

Comments

Ombre Khymyr

The collars are most likely a usual thing in this world, just this latest "generation" of product ships with the aforementioned flaw of not being able to handle intense arousal. Company can't get the recall out fast enough before everything devolves into a growth fest, when it starts causing previous-gen collars to fail by proxy.

SILENGE

Didn't think that macro would be an option for this one, but what is macro if not full body hyper.

Jakey boy

I have an idea of how the story can go: maybe it starts off as a tinder-style date where you have a young guy and maybe they’re meeting one hot milf of a lady (in case you're in a thick mama bear kind of mood), and maybe at the start of the date the guy who has two collars gives one to the lady and they wear it like the new iPhone or something like a popular trendy thing. and at first they use it casually for fun, thinking it would be sexy to use it a little bit. Both of them use it, so they grow a bit (not too much, more like soccer-sized junks or beach ball-sized boobs). then they star the date with the slightly exaggerated figures (there at a carnival on a dock, think of a Santa Monica in Los Angeles environment but more importantly, carnival vibes). And as they are having fun, they play that one carnival game (the one with the water gun and target) and, in romantic cliche, squirt each other, making them wet, but also Dun Dun Duuuuun, which makes the collar slowly go haywire, making them grow without influence. (Maybe it's a slow process where it’s little and you don’t notice it yet, or maybe you're having too much fun to notice, or maybe you're a little tipsy after a couple of drinks and are too drunk to notice). but right before they do the "devils tango," they are much larger and too horny to care, and then before the climax of the "devils tango," they grow one last time and end with them either still growing or passed out in sexual ecstasy with one as a cum-filled blob. Optional:Maybe if you want a goof at the end, you can pan out to a TV screen and reveal it was a commercial the whole time. If you don’t want to draw extra characters reacting to the commercial, have it in like a TV storefront (the ones that have a bunch of TVs playing behind glass) and have them run to buy a collar like it’s the new iPhone.

MisterAcorns

I definitely want to see some floating cars and hologram technology as background elements. Maybe the hyper growth causes one of them to bump into a bunch of hover cars? I'm also kind of married to the idea that the technical explanation for the size control tech going haywire is the rush of hormones you experience when you're sexually aroused causing them to short out and make you grow out of control.

Sashi Williams

Speaking for myself, I rather like this idea.. it keeps their bodies in the "hyper" sized, but not too huge.. I love hyper sized but (* again this is just "ME"... ) not so big that they'll fill and spill over some city blocks.. I love the size of " ok.. we're in the room and even tho the room is a LITTLE cramped.. we're still able to hump each other's brains out.. The male not being too muscular even after the collars short out.. *BASKETBALL sized balls and a length down one leg to 'match".. (( again, this is just "me".. I truly never liked the grotesque over muscled where you can't even see the fur's head their upper body and such are so massive.. )) And the female being, as you suggested.. Beachballs for breasts and a sexy curvy body and rump.. the kind that any male (( and a lot of females and herms) would trip over themselves to get a chance to be with.. And I applaud the TWIST ending.. being that it's a commercial that "ends" with one of the two < possibly the male ... who could be nicely made but SLIGHTLY shy" > as he's considering going into the store and just happens to get coaxed inside by the much more sexy female fur who is simply going in and looks him and his package over and gives him that sultry ".. come on.. follow me " kinda look...

Rabid Cowolf

That was my thinking of it as well! ^^. Just huge expansive bigness leading into hyper growth all over

Rabid Cowolf

Oooohhhh hehehe I like the idea of it being a problem because they were early adopters of the technology....and maybe there was some planned obselence at play X3c

Rabid Cowolf

Oooooh I didn't consider it would be a blind date, I assumed they'd be a long time couple but it COULD be totallt feesible that they are just starting out and that's why they're so adventurous.

Rabid Cowolf

I also do really enjoy the carnival dock idea like the Santa Monica Pier. It would certainly be a good excuse to get a lot of audience members in the way of their growth X3c

Rabid Cowolf

I will definitely keep your tastes in mind as they grow and swell. Maybe them going macro as well as hyper could be a good way to keep the proportions SLIGHTLY under control (though I admit the "haywire" in Hyper Haywire does imply to me some SUPER and UNCONTROLLABLE GROWTH)

Rabid Cowolf

We'll aim for tight and well toned as opposed to overly muscled ^^

Rabid Cowolf

Definitely can keep that aspect of the short circuit being related to their HYPER ARROUSED HORMONES . And the future-world aspect could be fun to explore also!

HotSoda

Is this a scenario where everyone's true size is hidden, or does the device just allow them to change size?? I think compression tech is fun. I also like the idea of a followup to Hyper Plague, where people found a way to contain their size. I think it would be fun if the characters didn't realize how big their un-compressed size had gotten until the device malfunctions and their true size comes out.

Rabid Cowolf

I definitely belive it will be the case where the collars are hiding their true sizes. I absolutely agree with the fun realization that even THEY didn't realize how big their true sizes were by this point ^^

Eyestalk64

Personally I'd prefer it not to go in a macro direction, since that wasn't one of the listed kink tags. As far as the plot itself.... If you remember back to the end of "Pumping Profits", with our horny deertaur scientist lady getting massively cumflated by the jackalope janitor? On the final page of that, there were a ton of other hyper furs around that laboratory... So, what if that laboratory is located in this Hyper Town? Maybe our horny deertaur scientist lady has shrunk back down and is looking to get cumflated all over again, because she just can't get enough of it. Maybe the jackalope janitor, struggling with his new endowment, keeps getting jumped by other hyper busty hyper horny ladies who want a piece of that hyper-insertion cumflation action (much to his embarrassment), reminiscent of that "Mating Season" comic from a while back.

Rahiros

I know hyper is the main fixation of this piece, but I think it would be fun if there was perhaps some muscle or fat compression/expansion in the background too. Just for variety! I also understand that can be a real pain in the ass to draw as a background thing, so feel free to also completely ignore this suggestion lmao Also, I kind of agree that, while macro themes are always fun, it also shouldn't be too predominant in the comic? definitely some scaling should happen, but I think the main focus should be the hourglass/hyper/inflation/muscle themes that were stated in the original vote description. Also, it's your art, so feel free to also ignore this and draw whatever makes you happy! You're not gonna lose me as a patron either way lol

Drakkece

Obviously subjective opinions in play here, but here are my thoughts: --Setting-- I am hella biased but I think a cyberpunk setting could be really fun here - hover vehicles, full body leather/latex suits, AR visors, hologram ad screens, etc. I get a 'big furries in a big city' kind of vibe, with infrastructure built for the potential mega-hypers. Plus I think some hyper-furry targeted ads could be really fun, like anti-grav bras and ball-bras, industrial milker pumps, supersized dildos, etc. A reference to the holo-girl from Blade Runner 2049 could be fun! --Plot-- I think it could be fun to have a mini panel dedicated to show off how this tech works - like the collars could be controlling nanobots in their bodies that stimulate growth and such, possibly also utilizing compression tech. I like the idea that they grow out of control because they break their collars in their throes of passion. I can imagine the classic 'break my choker' sorta deal (maybe mutual blowjob if it's M/H or H/H), or in a lusty haze they dial their collars too hard and break the knobs off. Or just their lovemaking is so intense it sends their nanobots into overdrive and the collar lose control. It could also potentially end with a reveal that it's all a virtual reality deal with them outgrowing a comically kinky universe (boob-suns, etc), but when they leave VR they find their own real-life hyperness ominously kick-starting into overdrive. --Sizes-- PERSONALLY, I'd love for this pair to really go extreme with sizes. At least city-smothering I'd say. They can use their AR visors to still see and talk to each other, even when lost in their own giga hyperness. In terms of hyperness, I'm feeling full package. Girl grows insanely hourglass with giga massive tits, ass, and pussy while the guy has balls and dick for days along with his own impressively plump, massive rear. It *could* potentially get a little exotic too with multi testes growing in the guy's balls and maybe some other hyper features depending on the species (i.e. hyper and multi tails for kitsune, or giant antlers for a buck, etc) --Characters-- I'm still voting for a cyberpunk aesthetic, so like half-shaved parted hair and stuff like that. I'm not too picky otherwise so pretty flexible in terms of species and stuff. It could be fun if they're both exotic 'aug' junkies, so they could be something crazy like the girl a neo foxdragon (maybe kitsune + Japanese dragon?) and the guy a saurvine or something (dino+buck). Of course I might be getting overly ambitious here haha. --Along-The-Way-- If their growth isn't syncronous then it could be fun to do some altering smothering, like the girl planting her giant butt on the guy or the guy getting a dual boobfuck+hotdogging smothering his colossal member on top of the girl. Some playful smothering of the populace could also be fun, like onlookers suddenly finding themselves smothered under tits, balls, ass, etc. Hover camera crews could gather to film the duo, turning them into overnight ultaporn stars.

Rabid Cowolf

Definitely like the idea of calling back to other previous comics as they grow over the landscape! I'll try to keep it to a steady mix of super hyper cumflation like that!

Rabid Cowolf

Oh yeah I definitely agree that the background should be filled with mega-furs of ALL varieties. Some big wobbly hyper compressed fatties would be good too!

Rabid Cowolf

Ooooohhhh Drakkace! Thank you sooo soo much for the lengthy and well written out ideas. I will DEFINITELY use your suggestions in some of the ads and background detailing of the comic. A cyberpunk waterfront could be extremely fun to draw out.

Rabid Cowolf

And I DEFINITELY enjoy the idea of the asynchronous growths and periodic smotherings. I will DEFINITELY also go for the hyper hourglass / muscle hyper buck city smothering angle

Drakkece

Yesss - and you're welcome! I'm very excited for this one!

orze

super late but ill add anyways just for the meme xD i didnt see hyper muscle from in u a LOOOONG while! maybe everything going crazy including the dude going meatball muscle be nice? seen u do it twice and u do amazing job! ofcourse hyper junk on him as welll and hyper hourglas for her maybe some cuminfaltion? what im saying is lets go all out on this 1 xD

Latrios (Coen van Haaster)

I think I like the idea of a collar malfunction causing true sizes to steadily come out, especially if seeing such things causes others to undergo such malfunctions themselves simply because they see this shit going down. Perhaps out of unrealised jealousy or simply sheer convenience. A similar or alternate take on that could be that they tend to avoid their true size because it also means some form of mutation or kaiju-esque transformation. Obviously nothing disgusting, but something just a bit freakier, like those Halloween Comics from years past. And while not in the listed tags, I'd be lying if I said I didn't like the idea of someone hiding their size with the collars, only for the malfunction to reveal a whole lot of suppressed multi. Arms, heads and necks, boobs, maybe even full boobtaurs... I wouldn't mind my dear Jess becoming a huge boobtaur, now that I think about it X3