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https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/97/Mother-of-Learning

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/21220/mother-of-learning/chapter/344062/97-illusory

A new chapter is here! Sorry I'm late... again... and that I don't have any new worldbuilding... again...

Anyway here is some fanart of the angel that appeared in the previous chapter. I already added it into the fanart page on my wordpress but I don't know how many people saw it so I figured I would also put it here.

Enjoy.

Comments

Heireau

spider date!!!! spider daughter!!!!!

Andrew

Thank you!

Adurna

Novelty!! :D

wanderer117

Loved it. The end of the chapter especially brought a smile to my face. I noticed a few typos [Tree dragon mages…] he lamented should be [Three dragon mages…] he lamented When I say I can get Oganj and his group work with me, should be When I say I can get Oganj and his group to work with me, If the primordial is released and lays waste to out surroundings, Should be If the primordial is released and lays waste to our surroundings, Even if the truth holds, we still must Should be Even if the truce holds, we still must

JDG

This chapter was incredibly bittersweet; I'm scared of what Zorian and the group stand to lose in this conflict.

Domagoj Kurmaic

Thanks. Also, it's not your fault but I hate it how patreon (and other sites) makes copying text from comments on their site a real pain in the ass. Formatting is completely lost, so even if the original commenter placed it in neat groups and paragraphs like you did, when I copy-pase it into an editing folder it ends up condensed into a one giant, unwieldy paragraph. Anyway. Just complaining for the sake of complaining...

Anonymous

A very interesting chapter, I look forward to seeing the next few chapters and it's really interesting to see the climax built up to. So far it looks like your foreshadowing Zorian faking his death in some way shape or form and making all the others erase their memories of the time loop. If Zorian does end up faking his death, hopefully he does it in a epic way or through saving Zach's life. In order to make Zach less questioning.

wanderer117

Really? I thought this chapter put an end to the possibility that Zorian could convince all the involved parties to erase their memories. Quatach-Ichl especially. I think it's more likely that Zorian is looking for way to make Zack think they all died / had their memories erased. That's what he is testing with Spear of Resolve in the last section.

wanderer117

I find it depends on the browser / what you are copying into. When I copy my post into MS Word the formatting is lost. When I copy it into notepad the formatting is simplified but retained. As a reference I use Chrome as my browser.

Domagoj Kurmaic

I did notice that. Also, patreon sends me every comment to my e-mail, and I can copy the comment from that and retain the text structure. So patreon is far from the worst offender there, I guess. On some sites, *nothing* works.

Adrien Matricon (edited)

Comment edits

2026-11-01 18:00 Thanks for the chapter! Here are some typos I spotted: How can I be sure you won’t just take advantage of the truce of build up your forces and dishonor it a few days later? => [to] build up how to covey it to others => [convey] Don’t tell me actually think => [you] actually think a bunch of people that escape from the time loop into the real world => [escaped]
2019-03-23 21:31 Thanks for the chapter! Here are some typos I spotted: How can I be sure you won’t just take advantage of the truce of build up your forces and dishonor it a few days later? => [to] build up how to covey it to others => [convey] Don’t tell me actually think => [you] actually think a bunch of people that escape from the time loop into the real world => [escaped]

Thanks for the chapter! Here are some typos I spotted: How can I be sure you won’t just take advantage of the truce of build up your forces and dishonor it a few days later? => [to] build up how to covey it to others => [convey] Don’t tell me actually think => [you] actually think a bunch of people that escape from the time loop into the real world => [escaped]