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Saturn Seven: Chapter 58 (Patreon)

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2023-06-03 08:23:13
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Thank you for your ongoing support! I really hope you enjoy reading this one as much as I have enjoyed writing it. 

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Shoe_seat

Chapter Title: Girls just wanna have fun lol. You always seem to find just the right point in a story to switch to a new POV. The barbers were great characters. Rudger and Oakbeard. You're doing great at keeping the different factions / nationalities distinct while still having unique characters in each. Janna's development into more and more of a dominant personality is going well too. She was trying to be a pure goody two shoes for a while, but now she seems content to give people who placate her only a merciful death. I like how it even extends to Laura and Christina now too. She isn't really attracted to them, but is fine with doing sex stuff with them when they are serving her needs. Very interested to see how this love triangle arc is going to end. Steve's likelihood of not getting broken physically or mentally is at at all time low. If he's lost as the innocent angel for Janna though I feel like she'll go totally over the edge.

squashed123
>>110032049

Thank you so much! But don't forget Janna is a hypocrite who likes to flip-flop. Laura caught onto this already. It's okay when Janna wants to play rough, but when she doesn't, all of a sudden it's a big moral problem. Her character is really fun to write.

Shoe_seat

Any chapters coming soon? I eagerly await the big reveals!

squashed123
>>111745171

Sorry, my laptop shorted out but I was finally able to get a replacement. Soon as I've got everything set up I will publish more chapters. Apparently, no data has been lost. Apologies for the delay.