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A/N: The final chapter of Arc 4! You know how Axel thought everything would be fine at the end of last chapter? Well everything is not fine! I repeat, everything is NOT fine!

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aoXN1zU8HpsFeqqF5T-Idmw-BmBq2M3syJ9xptJJOWA/edit?tab=t.0

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auraofcalm

Yay more folks to commit suicide by Axel. :p

Sammy the Shark

Dany: I am the storm! I am the flame! Axel: hmmm you know….i like it spicy 🥵

Corn The Man

It's often said, that in moments of desperate, do not try to see the future. For you will only see what you want to see.

Rolando Estrada

Would be VERY funny if she gets the so called "dragon dreams" while burning and sees that both her AND Axel are being used by their 'patrons' . Axel was made to burn for 7 days/nights instead of the normal, while Daenerys got her son/hubby killed xD

bfoolforty

This better not be that whole "If you give the hero a lightsaber, you have to give the villain a death star" trope, because I hate that.

Volodya

Man, Milisandre is bad at math, every time she feels like she’s forged a weapon that will bring Axel low she get’s told it’s not enough. At some point there’ll be nothing else she can sacrifice. The entire ramble felt like something Lord Faarquad would say.

Suika Nine

Melisandre knew Axel burned for 7 days and nights, yet is still choosing to fight him with fire. She and Rhollor are fucking terrible at type match ups.

Wasirdar

*snorts* Axel could take her. XD

Lord Sesshomaru

Melisandre: prepares Daenerys with magical rites to make her "stronger." Axel: "Laughs in Viltrumite." No matter how much the Gods of Planetos make their "Heralds" stronger, always bet on Kaido ehm... I mean, Axel 😬. It'll be interesting to see this Axel vs. Daenerys Saga, but please, Cam, don't let Axel fuck Melisandre 😭. I mean, she dissected a fucking baby. If I were Axel, I'd puke just thinking about it. I only feel sorry for Daenerys, who's been used all this time and it's definitely the worst timeline for her. 💔

KingDracula

Yeah, giving Axell interesting opponents like the Kraken is one thing, but turning Dany into a demigod is far beyond the power of what Melisandre should be able to do

Boyo

They are going to depopulate all of Essos only to still lose to an idiot that can fly and is fireproof.

Munsu

*shakes head tiredly* Fucking fanatics, man. Fucking fanatics....

pavbpabv

Melisandre's face when Axel simply flies and rides the same dragon as Dany xd.

TheSinful

She'll sacrifice herself without ever knowing

TheSinful

If you give the villain magic dragons, it don't matter for shit against the dude who 1v1'd a kraken the size of a small city

redhawktiger

Considering how badly Melisandre reads her visions at times....i get the feeling Dany is going to find out her role in things....lol

redhawktiger

That would actually be very amusing to see lol

gigamans

"He burned for 7 days and night in wildfire, so let's burn him, it'll work" uh huh...

Sith2go

Kinda sucks for Melisandre that both Axel and the White Walkers can just shrug off dragon fire.

Ofunu

She seems to be headed for insanity faster than in canon. Never stick it in crazy. Well...he already stuck it in Cersei, so I guess the advice is a bit late. But after how that ended I hope he learnt the lesson.

Suika Nine

Imagine the Mother comes to have some fun times with Axel and then, in the morning afterglow, casually drops the fact Melisandre sacrificed a baby for power to Axel.

Chainsword83

....WOW. Melisandre really can't help but fuck everything up, can she? I look forward to her Finding Out after all of her Fucking Around with Dany.

Chainsword83

IDK, right now Dany seems like a victim under the influence of the Red God. Smacking said god down should help snap her out of the crazy.

Chainsword83

"In a fight, right?" ...... "IN A FIGHT, RIGHT?"

Sith2go

"7 Days is the limit! We just have to go even further beyond and he will surely die!" Melisandre imparting her divine wisdom on her protege.

Ofunu

Not if/when she learns that the one person she trusted was the one who caused the death of the ones she loved the most. Melisandre thinking exactly that for us to read seems like foreshadowing that it will happen. Besides, smacking the god might just cause her to break even further rather than bring her back, since she seems to be clinging to his influence to avoid falling into despair. If anything at this point because of everything that has happened to her and the actions she has taken in response it's almost guaranteed that she will fall into madness eventually. It's just a matter of time.

Potato

Damn shes gonna get absolutely destroyed 🤣

DarkthShadow

Calling it now, this will end with Dany bouncing on Axel's sword, we all know it XD.

Para

Nice to get a look at what's been happening over the sea. Been wondering how Jorah kicked the bucket and Melisandre being behind it makes fair sense. Are her visions purely visual or is there a general intent attached to them? Asking because the idea that R'holler has been trying to show her not to mess with Axel and she's taken the warnings as 'I must deal with this' hilarious. Pretty curious on how Dany views things at the moment and if she's any inklings as to how much Melisandre is using her 🤔 Girls gone from being used as a tool by her brother to being a tool in someone else prophecy's 😬

pavbpabv

She just thinks those visions are coming from her god. I remember Arya also having visions of Robb's, Renly's, etc.'s deaths, except she didn't invent a ritual sacrificing people to make them believe she was responsible (like Stannis).

Alun Lewis (edited)

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2026-09-05 03:00 Sweet Jeebus....Dany has been really fucked over by this point, and not in the fun way! Viserys getting sacrificed isn't a loss, but Drogo and their son still dying to empower her so she can fulfill Melissandre's so-called plans from R'hlllor? All because the supposed Lord of Light doesn't like the fact Axel exists and is capable of supplanting him as a deity due his Viltrumite biology and fire invulnerability? I really hope that there's a way to unbrainwash Dany and allow her to put her family back into the mix of ruling Westeros.
2025-08-09 05:34 Sweet Jeebus....Dany has been really fucked over by this point, and not in the fun way! Viserys getting sacrificed isn't a loss, but Drogo and their son still dying to empower her so she can fulfill Melissandre's so-called plans from R'hllor? All because the supposed Lord of Light doesn't like the fact Axel exists and is capable of supplanting him as a deity due his Viltrumite biology and fire invulnerability? I really hope that there's a way to unbrainwash Dany and allow her to put her family back into the mix of ruling Westeros.

Sweet Jeebus....Dany has been really fucked over by this point, and not in the fun way! Viserys getting sacrificed isn't a loss, but Drogo and their son still dying to empower her so she can fulfill Melissandre's so-called plans from R'hllor? All because the supposed Lord of Light doesn't like the fact Axel exists and is capable of supplanting him as a deity due his Viltrumite biology and fire invulnerability? I really hope that there's a way to unbrainwash Dany and allow her to put her family back into the mix of ruling Westeros.

Loki's Brand

Nah, there's the normal kind of crazy-hot (which should already be avoided under most circumstances), then there's turning yourself into a flaming abomination through blood rituals and the power of a fire god that - if the hints in the books are correct - is probably literally Satan/Lucifer. She's basically half fire-demon now, and dead crazy on top of it. Better to just put her (and through her, the whole Targaryen Dynasty) into the dirt and go back to his harem.

Chainsword83

More like: NO! NO! NO! Me-damnit woman, how are you this bad at understanding what I'm trying to tell you?! I'M SAYING DON'T FUCK AROUND WITH THIS FUCKER!!!

Chainsword83

That generally IS the accepted solution to almost all problems in Cam's stories. :)

Mykel Herndon

“Let’s burn him harder..surely that will work..” uh huh Axel fist go punchy punchy.

Mykel Herndon

“Fight fire with fire right…RIGHT???”

Chainsword83

A good point, BUT, on the OTHER OTHER HAND, you know, the Smut Hand, an empowered Dany would probably be able to take ALL Axel can dish out in the bedroom, i.e. someone who could keep up with him sexually and actually handle him being rough. And when Dany finds out that it's MELISANDRE, not Axel Baratheon, who's been messing with her... Well. I believe that deep down, Dany is still that girl who just wants a home and family.

Chainsword83

"Rides the dragon in the traditional sense, right?" ........ "IN THE TRADITIONAL SENSE, RIGHT???"

Chainsword83

Pretty sure Cam has stated that Axel won't be sticking it in Melisandre.

Chainsword83

That's the problem; as the old saying goes, "when all you have is a hammer, everything starts looking like a nail". Or in this case, "when all you have is fire, everything starts looking like kindling".

Para

I get that, my question is about what the visions are actually like. Beyond her getting a slideshow of events. Is there some kind of context to them, subtitles or a feeling of 'I need to go do this about what I'm seeing'. The source of them we've already been told from her perspective.

Sirca Mori

Finally a worthy opponent. OUR BATTLE SHALL BE LEGENDARY

Cerberus09

I'm expecting a few battles between axel and dany but eventually I'm thinking that they will combine forces to defeat the frost demons in the north. And have lots of happy time maybe with dany ruling essos? Also, Axel's mother DID say she would eventually come back to check on him, maybe she'll bring a present?

Surge1301

I can’t wait for that wrinkly bitch to get drop kicked into outer space.