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A/N: Axel feels a certain sort of way about everything he just learned.

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WKNdHiK3hUPKUyBQf41NHSPeim5sSOUNkKVLDygTyzc/edit?tab=t.0

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Cerberus09

I still think axel sinking all her ships within sight of dorne would be better? But I guess Axel is a battle junkie at this point. Can't wait until he goes north and arm wrestles a giant!

SquiddlyWinks

“..and I’m gonna punch a DRAGON in its FACE Ari it’s gonna be SO COOL!”

pavbpabv

I hope he at least kills one or two of Dany's dragons.

Lord Sesshomaru

"And at the end of the day, Axel had no choice but to twiddle his thumbs and count the tiles in the room." 😫 I'd also add the Escobar Waiting meme and we'd have a perfect representation of Axel's state 😂 Poor man, he has the strength of a planet and all he can do is wait 🤷🏻‍♂️. (No good, Viltrumites don't like to wait 😬)

Uncle Snoo

Yeah! Should be fine, except there's a certain Red Priestess with a literal God as her spy master.

Ofunu

"He had truly felt… unassailable." Now you're just being facetious.

Sith2go

Axel just implemented the Westerosi FBI and CIA.

Chainsword83

Good, the himbo is finally wising up. Now, how is Melisandre going to fuck up this plan that Tyene has concocted? I am currently in genuine fear for Davos and his family, as they are on Dragonstone and Dragonstone is the natural place for Dany to want to go. On the other hand... Davos: "Begging yer pardon yer Grace, but if you have trouble with a simple man like me speaking his mind, how in the Seven's name are you any different than this tyrant you've imagined Axel Baratheon to be in your head? Also, I'd be mighty obliged to you ifffin you didn't let this woman sacrifice my family; that's why we fought as long as we did after all if you don't mind me saying so, we've heard how you deal with those what surrender."

Y. B. A.

Doran "Perpetual Schemer" Martell: Our new king is too powerful both physically and politically, so let's try to get Daenerys' dragons to kill him... And as repayment for Dorne's support, she'll make Trystane her Prince-Consort. What a brilliant plan!

Wafflenator

Not the right place but I couldn't not say this. Please note that TheKindOne and DCFanfic are currently stealing from our favorite author and report them! They are both on patrion and straight copy pasting

Ofunu

Sadly, in order to report plagiarism you need to do it from the post they copied. So I would have to fork out at least one month of subscription to be able to report them. Without subscribing I can report them only for discrepancies about their subscription plans, and I don't think Patreon will care that much about that.

Wafflenator

Does not authentic behavior then misrepresenting not count as a plagiarism report?

Eric Lachance

I wonder if Melisandre will spot the trap and if it will prevent them from biting...

redhawktiger

Not many thoughts on this chapter beyond, Nice!

Ofunu

I'm not sure, but the actual plagiarism option just threw me a message saying I needed to report the stolen content directly. I might try that way, but also keep in mind that reporting it as plagiarism will cause them to check both the thieves accounts as well as Cambrian, and that might cause more problems for Cam if they determine the content does not comply with their guidelines. I don't know if it's worth the risk of causing trouble for Cam.

Theo Rocha

That... Is certainly a plan to be sure. I mean, he could just take a weekend to fly into the house of every disbelieving noble while carrying a mountain to make them understand his power without risking his people and kingdoms being caught in the crossfire, and he could just sink all of Daenerys ships in an afternoon to make it impossible for her to take a whole army to Westeros, giving him time to deal with the trouble at North, but... Yeah, sure, let your enemies build up their forces, I'm sure it will work out great dude, lmao.

VaticToxic

You can report from the post even if it's locked / hidden. May also be able to point them at the Ao3 posting of Cam's story for it copying since they are likely far behind.

Austin Santos

While up in the sky Axel be like: Bring it on. This is what I live for. I'm absolutely crazy about it!

Corn The Man

While she can see the future, she still thinks she can beat Axel. So she either can't see all the future or is really really dumb. Or the seven mess with her visions. Otherwise she would have stayed far far from westeros

Alun Lewis

Hey, Axel is totally down for taking a bit of time to either demonstrate how awesome he is to the Lords & Ladies of Dorne - including one of his fathers-in-law - or putting Dany's burgeoning navy on the bottom of Slaver's Bay or the Narrow Sea and giving Balerion's skeleton some company in the Red Keep's basement, but he's getting told to wait and let his enemies gather in one spot so everyone can see him wreck house and be eradicated completely in one go. And I honestly see the logic...he just sinks the boats thst Daenerys is collecting, then he just delays the inevitable for months or years and Dany de-populates Essos in its entirety for sacrifices to boost her powers till her dragons are like Chitauri Leviathans from the MCU and she's a far prettier version of Thanos.

Alun Lewis

Of course Axel is giddy at the thought of getting to fuck up so many opponents, including literal dragons. Well, until he realized that his Precious People are vulnerable to them and all it would take is a two-pronged attack where he's distracted temporarily to cost him his wives and children. And that he's been just as bad as his dad in not taking the correct steps to properly rule Westeros. At least he's taking the need for a spymaster - or spymistresses - seriously now, though I still think Lady Oleanna will plot to work around Axel's edicts about her and Margaery working with Tyene to fully rebuild a working spy network as a team while keeping each faction honest.

Imhere4dach33ks

Are you going to include the Invincible story after the end of canon or are you just combining the power system of Invincible with the story of ASOIAF/GOT?

Cambrian

Story will probably end with an epilogue chapter of Axel's mother returning, have no plans atm to go interplanetary with this fic

Potato

Annoys me how bad he is at this