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Second Chances Ch. 3 (KPop Demon Hunters) (Patreon)

Published:
2025-09-13 01:40:43
Edited:
2025-09-26 20:29:12
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2026-06
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(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)

A/N: I hope people like this chapter. It DOES move the plot forward, but maybe not as fast as some might want. On the other hand, I had way too much fun writing it lmao.

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1opuREqfMLifL_XD1qEnJt-sdwydqqREQw0qClkA5Png/edit?tab=t.0

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Comments

Geese

Damn. Had me chuckling seconds into reading.😆

Crispined Glover Potato Snacks

Good chapter. It was sufficiently plotty. Since you have to introduce Celine, who doesn't get much detail in the movie, and establish the beginning of Celine's character arc, in addition to the regular character work this chapter feels full. Excellent work capturing Zoey's and Mira's voices. All 3 of the girls are defined by the alienation of their childhoods and how the coping attitudes they developed being enthusiastically loved by each other. Zoey is a chatty genki girl to make people like her. Mira acts too cool for school so people think she's above all the loneliness her family life caused her. The movie works so well because those two have processed and, through their love for each other, accepted their pasts. Except for Rumi who is lying. That is why my one criticism is in Rumi's voice. I understand that she is going through it and is depressed, the way she deals with those things in the movie is by trying to as fast as possibly shoving the problems down and putting an enthusiastic face on. I'd like to see a scene or two where her internal monologue is like what it is here but outward she is just a serious but happy workaholic. Also it would be so funny if Jinu is scouted by Bobby.

Ofunu

OMG! Another one this soon? NEAT!

Kyo Amamoto

this is going good so far cam please update it when intuition lets you.

Cambrian

Appreciate this feedback! Good looking out about Rumi, gotta be careful not to let fanon infect me too much when it comes to her lmao

bfoolforty

I know everyone wants Rujinu, but I'm hoping for Mijinu, just because.

Cambrian

haha ngl, the only pairing thats guaranteed is Rumi/Jinu. I'm also considering Mira/Zoey and maybe from there doing Rumi/JinuxMira/Zoey where they like Jinu for his dick but love Rumi because she's Rumi. We'll see though~

F4V0R

Great chapter, can’t wait to see where you take this! You’ve really captured the essence of the girls and I can’t wait to read more!

Kind

Banger chapter - Zoey/mira in character, confused rumi & jinu acting his age :D I like that you'll be tackling Rumi's parentage. So much potential there

Gamesempie

Lol. Very on character for all of them.

Matthias Flath

I am a sucker for hilarious misunderstandings so I think it would be funny if Rumi reveals her half demon status to Mira and Zoey and they all think Jinu must be Rumi's dad.

Gamesempie

Sometimes the lesbians just need a meat dildo for a night.

Dylan Pullock

Meh I'm for the four to get together (after all no Abby, baby, mystery or romance for the other 2 and they deserve some happiness as well, even if you use others or just Jinu 😅) The betrayal part is interesting because it can be read as number of ways. First, Rumi's father betrayed her mother (most boring option). Second, events play out similarly to how they did during Rumi and Jinu's first time but the other sunlight sisters found out and viewed it as a betrayal by Rumi's mom. This could then involve things like believing she was manipulated when she wasn't, mind control etc. Ending here would be Rumi's mom either being taken out in the crossfire when her teammates attack her lover or her teammates straight up killing both ( both dark but one is darker than the other). Guilt on their part would spare Rumi but the scenario would explain why she was raised to hate herself. The 'catch him' development is probably the best thing for both parties. I don't think the hunters will be able to catch him unless he let's them ( what are they going to do ? Put him in cuffs? Lock him in a room? He'd break the cuffs and derpy can get him out of anything). They have never had to catch a demon before ergo they don't know how to do so, and they don't have the means to keep him contained. Great opportunity for some development. Zoey and Mira might actually be Jinu's way in right now. Celine is not going to be, and Rumi's back is against a wall and she is looking for anyway to deflect and hide what she did. Great way for him to actually build a rapport, a friendship or something more with both Zoey and Mira. I can see it now Rumi: you're coming with us demon boy! Jinu: okay sure! Let me just pack my stuff. Zoey" don't make this dif- wait what? Jinu: cool, got my lute. Let's go! Mira: is it supposed to be this easy? Rumi: don't get distracted! It's a trick! It has to be Mira and zoey: it sure doesn't look like it

Alun Lewis

Hmmm...Zoey's reveal that fans of Celine & Mi-yeong's K-Pop group shipped them together feels like foreshadowing of certain uncomfortable truths. Like there are nice demons...Rumi's dad was one...Celine actually was interested in Mi-yeong...and that Celine dealt with Rumi's dad, but learned too late that Mi-yeong was bonded to him and that his death or banishment led to Mi-yeong dying in childbirth. Far easier to sell yourself on the idea that you didn't kill your best friend/secret crush by blaming the demon said bestie was shacking up with than to acknowledge said demon wasn't threat his brethren are...and that killing or banishing him led to your best friend dying due to a soul bond they willingly initiated or the conception of Rumi created.

Belly

Yeah, honestly thought they'd do more with Celine. She gave the mysterious secret boss level vibes. Like she wasnt evil, but she was behind some things. Was honestly hoping for more lore when they inevitably make either another movie or TV series about it.

Belly

You know... if Netflix ever made it a TV series to expand on the lore, I can totally see that the OG three girls could've been half demons lol, or atleast whoever trained thrm was. Like Gwi-wa said, Rumi is mot under her control, It always bothered me why hed mention that, and thought since she's only half that she can choose mot to hear his voice or ignore it completely. Would be a funny and ironic story if they did find that out.

oscar enrique sampedro lopez

Those Fanfics are hilariously wrong and on point. Now I have it in my head that Celine was crushing on Rumi mother and went a little mad when she had Rumi with a demon and killed them both. Jinu, yes, everything is going well, there is nothing to worry about at all.

Justin Uzumaki

Damn, I am incredibly late to the party, but I see others came to the same conclusion I did. There’s definitely “good”, or at least “not evil”, demons, and one of them fell in love with Rumi’s mom. Unfortunately, Celine was also in love with Rumi’s mom, but too bad that she’s a straight woman who loved the “not evil” Demon working a regular job. So Celine, like all cucks, grew to hate all demons even more fervently.