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A/N: Eighty years later. Been a wild ride guys.

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1E2mWtcFxCKPx6fAxtTnlxTMpDMDzt_4HWbZqI4ez_Es/edit?tab=t.0

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Please make sure to give me feedback either on Patreon or the Discord please! I wanna hear from you as the story comes to an end!

And of course, thank you all so much for reading!

Comments

Erebraw

This has been a great story! Thank you!

TheSinful

Last chapter is stupid early

Cambrian

lol yep, figured I'd just throw it up early today ;)

thevolunteer

Nice end. The second I saw Dany was empowered the way she was through Rhollor I figured we’d get a happy ending, especially once the Seven became the main religion of the entire world. Come canon invincible time, Axel’s empire is going to be significantly stronger than the Viltrum empire.

TheSinful

Obviously, Axel won. Why? Cuz I said so.

thevolunteer

Thanks for the story Cam, I really enjoyed it :)

Sebastian Begg

Loved the story excited to see what next

Corn The Man

Great story Cam, pretty creative overall. Can't wait to see what the next story is about.

Jlslick13

Thragg would shit himself.

Kevin L

Was a fun ride. Quite enjoyed it 😁

Clayton Riggs

Honestly, the whole story has been a huge treat. The smut was great, sure, but I was mostly in love with Axel's character. Too bad we never got to see the Maiden become the Matron, though. Sadge.

Lord Sesshomaru

I thought it was nice that you didn't tell us who Axel's Mom is, but you gave us free rein on WHO it could be ❤️ Anissa would be the best choice, but a random Viltrumite woman would also be fine 😌. I imagine the fight will end with Axel winning, and Mom will begin her life as a Grandma training all her grandchildren? 😏 I'm so happy to have followed the story since day one ❤️. I can admit, this is one of your best stories! Thanks for this amazing adventure, Cam, until the next update 💪🏻.

emahue64

Loved this story thanks for all the chapters

Munsu

Mama must be proud. Win or lose, her boy became one hell of a man.

Sirca Mori

Excellent ending and compelling throughout. Don’t actually think it needed any more chapters tbh, good as it was.

Ofunu

Cliffhanger ending? WHY? Loved it though.

RNGGod3670

Amazing story Cam loved every second!

st1heart_scholar

Nice Epilogue, I'm kinda dissapointed to not see more from this setting but oh well. What's going to take the daily free write spot after this?

Freewat

Excellent story, through it up with your other best works

Amantacha_9

Damn, I don't usually comment, but this deserves it. I really liked this one a lot. I hope we can see this universe in a future work of yours. Would love to see more invincible stuff from you.

Potato

Absolute cinema, your stories truly are peak, like yeah the smut is good but I have to The story as a whole was amazing

Cambrian

Up to you to decide! (but yeah, I mean he's the MC, he probably won ;P)

Cambrian

Nothing is going to be officially taking the daily free write slot yet. But I might do bonus chapters of Second Chances, we'll see

JLG33

Yes, indeed. I enjoyed this as much as Iron Resolve. I haven't started on the K-Pop Demon Hunters one yet because I haven't seen the movie, but I bet I'l really like that one too. Great job Cam!

Suika Nine

Thank you so much for writing this fun story. I really appreciate you sticking to your guns despite the burnout. Hopefully your next daily story will be just as a banger as this one.

VaticToxic

Cliffhanger ending XD Cam enjoys torturing us readers lol Headcanon: he totally won. Headcanon epilogue: the Empire doesn't check for another 100+ years and by then, well, tech has improved greatly, the Seven have multiple worlds of Near Immortal Baratheons, and the Viltrum empire is outnumbered, like, 1000 to 1 lmao.

Jay Emberhowl

Great story, loved wtf moments shown with people of planetos regarding axel, loved the humour and the action and his exploits with his woman,just overall loved reading it and kinda sad its ended, well just gives me excuse to reread it from begining, i know youve started your kpop fic and have other ongoing fics on the go yet have you considered a sequel in the future not now since your recovering from burn out but in distant future showing the starborn getting involved with invincible storyline or axel or his kids building a starborn stella kingdom with maybe words like rwby and atla words could fit in universe with some tweaking, just an idea any road sorry for the rambling , again cheers and have good weekend when it comes

IsekaiMeInDcPlease

As I said in the previous chapter, just saying "thank you for this" isn't enough. Thank you so much for this story; it was a fantastic adventure. I didn't realize that the word "unbreakable" meant something like "invincible" after all, lol. I really appreciate that without that, nothing would still be alive after 80 years and remain young and beautiful. If you could write your next story in the world of The Boys, Fear the Walking Dead, or The Originals/The Vampire Diaries, that would be amazing. Especially the last one, because, despite all the stories I've seen, none of them take the time to have the character create a kingdom as an immortal vampire; they're always directly involved in the main plot... I would like to just watch from the sidelines, I wouldn't ask to be directly involved in the main story. I would create my own kingdom, an island where I would be the king, and I would create a secret army that would rule the world as I see fit. I would prevent World War I, World War II, and many other things...

Cambrian

Yep np. It even has sequels, though most are unfinished and also 8-9 years old lmao

Tsorov

It already kinda is. If we go with the invincible timeline, where the Viltrumites are nearly wiped out trough a Virus, then Axel and his children are the biggest Viltrumite concentration in the entire empire. And since we don't know how strong Axels mother is in context, he could be strong enough to hold of the other Viltrumites if he trains his children to his level

Tsorov

To be honest, I came for the smut at the beginning, but in his daily writes I mostly skim the smut to get the story bits, because the storie writingis just better than the smut. Which is quite funny now that I think about it.

RJKY

Unyieldible.

RichterQ87

In regards to my previous comment on the earlier chapter, I'd say this is indeed a very good 'middle ground' between Axel getting his ass kicked by his mother but not ENDING the story on that. It's interesting to see Axel being on par with his mother in terms of strength, despite only living for like a hundred years. I assumed since he didn't really have anything challenging him and only a couple of near-death experiences, he couldn't really improve that much except with the help of the Seven. I failed to account for the fact that of course his children would be Viltrumites too and he'd be doing plenty of sparring with them lmao. Obviously, they wouldn't be nearly on par with him either, but at least in numbers they'd help him hone his edge. Then the Seven (and Daenerys) help seal the deal from there. My head-canon is either: 1. The fight is almost equal but with his mother ultimately being slightly stronger and more well trained and thus beating the ever living shit out of him for most of it until Axel somehow squeaks out a victory at the last possible minute by catching her off-guard in some way. Then she gets to stay and spoil her thousand grandbabies for the rest of her years, helping them prepare for the next arrival from the Viltrum Empire. 2. The fight is again mostly equal, with Axel putting up one hell of a fight, only he can't quite squeak out the win. Then we get a sort of mirror of the Mark/Omni-Man scene, except it's less the emotional attachment that makes her spare him (since there's precious little) but pride at how he almost managed to beat her. And since Axel refuses to back down even near-death (because he's UNYIELDING), she's forced to forfeit the duel to avoid killing him, allegedly because she doesn't want 'reprisal' from her grandchildren, but that's really just an excuse. After that, she's 'forced' to stay because she can't go back to Viltrum a failure. End result is the same as in the first. All-in-all, this story was a lot more fun to read than I was expecting given the premise of an obviously overpowered MC in a world mostly consisting of 'primitives'. I really wasn't sure if it could be interesting since it would be hard to create stakes, but you did a wonderful job of it (even though I still hold the opinion that Axel could have defeated the Night King by himself for Round Two if he just used his speed properly). Interested to see what daily write you pick next. I know that won't be for a while, but I'm looking forward to it either way.

Bazuak

Great work cant wait for the next big story

Kluvial

TYFT story. Kinda wish Brienne got made a knight or to the Queensguard or something

IsekaiMeInDcPlease

Well, I've already finished reading it; it went by quite quickly. There were 41 chapters, which were quite engaging. It turns out that I kind of imagined things would go this way when I was even writing my own Vampire Diaries story, so I'm quite satisfied. Although the ending was a bit of a WTF moment, and I'm disappointed that there weren't any real romantic relationships; it was mostly people trying to control him, and that's something I wouldn't have been happy with. And the fact that he ended up sleeping with his daughter—that really didn't sit well with me. But then again, for someone who's mortal, I guess it's understandable.

Sith2go

Pretty sure the Viltrumites are functionally immortal, since they grow stronger the older they get, which slows their aging. So they will never actually die of old age.

Alun Lewis

Well...since some of the kids and grandkids are female, Axel certainly should be completely non-averse by now to getting violent with his mother due to presumably sparring with them over the last 80 years. So no holding back even a bit like he did initially with Dany...though I think the eventual victory over Mom won't lead Axel to take the same steps of conquest he did with the former Dragon Queen. 😉 Still, probably the only really satisfying way for this story to have ended was this kind of cliffhanger finale...where the reader decides how things go from here, though I can't see any of Axel's offspring or descendants NOT trying to fight their grand/great-grandmother themselves if Axel did end up losing. All in all, a great ending to a magnificent story, Cambrian!

JRC

As someone who has also not seen the movie, I assure you, you will not have any problems whatsoever. Thank God Cambrian's updating that one more frequently than once a week!

Smithz

It should have been mark who showed up…

CkLance

Yet another story binged 🥳

MyAfroAteMyDog

It was great from start to finish took me a couple days but I binged it all. Thanks for writing this