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A/N: How’d they figure it out?!

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AvY3rtqoGULT1KMv5YocXq0HLiLf1mshlhbbps-Zd14/edit?tab=t.0

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William

I kinda hope the eventual confrontation with Rumi goes like: 'Mira and Zoey rush into Rumi's room'.... "We KNOW!" .... 'Mira and Zoey Tackle Rumi into her bed to hug her and refuse to let her run away, and they all just whisper through the teary eyed conversation and cuddle until the emotions wind down.'

Tyler Erdman

You know when Jinu eats something I hope he does that swallow something whole like he’s got no gag reflex thing that Rumi did on the plane. They’ll like go well that’s another mark in the half demon category

Your Jordan's Are Fake

Also love the little things, zoey's slightly gay panic, the ways they reassure and comfort one another, it really do feel like these two know each other deeply both in a maybe romantic way and a best friend way.

Voltron-0Q1

FREAKING LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!

Clayton Riggs

What a delightful treat before bed.

RHar

I'm sorry, did you say "no gag reflex"?

Dylan Pullock

Yeah... Rumi deepthoats a.... i think it's a veg roll of some kind? Thing is, its the length of a boeriewors roll (think a bit bigger than a hot dog). It was a real WTF moment in the movie. Funny as hell though. https://share.google/dAs0uVUTGE7jM1Ic6 This response is based off the assumption that the comment was made because you haven't seen the film but came across the fic because you're a cam regular. Apologies if that isn't the case.

Alun Lewis

Gotta say...both Mira & Zoey come off as quite astute here in their independent explanations of why they clued in on Rumi being a half-demon, along with showcasing their respective personality quirks. Though Zoey's comments about the Sunlight Sisters' manager dying basically at the same time as Mi-yeong did under mysterious - assumed Hunter-related circumstances - really jumps out at me...along with Zoey noting that some Sunlight Sisters fans speculated that Rumi is the product of an illicit romance between Mi-yeong and the band manager. Cuz wouldn't be a kicker if those fans were right...but also said manager was secretly a demon either working their own angle or trying to hide out from Gwi-ma by being entrenched within the then-current Hunter team's camp? Best way to either keep yourself safe or build up a power base of your own is to basically be wolf in sheep's clothing that's waiting till it's safe to reveal yourself.

RHar

*in my best (still terrible) Dave Chapelle impression* Y'all got any more of them bonus chapters?

Cambrian

There will definitely be one later this evening my time!

JRC

Instead of "The most plausible theory that anyone has ever come up with is to that the Sunlight Sister’s old manager is the father", you want "The most plausible theory that anyone has ever come up with is that the Sunlight Sister’s old manager is the father". Instead of "before just writing off Rumi of all people has having made a deal with Gwi-Ma", you want "before just writing off Rumi of all people as having made a deal with Gwi-Ma" By the way? This is awesome, I can't believe I was on the fence about it when you released the first chapter. Although, to be fair, I went through the same process with "The Unyielding Stag"

Cambrian

good catches, fixt! and I'm really glad to hear that!

RHar

BTW I'm sorta love-hate-ing this thing where I don't know for sure when there's going to be a bonus chapter but I think this is a good thing for you overall because it means I'm definitely checking your page every day instead of waiting for some accumulation of chapters to binge. I don't know how common that is but it's definitely the case for me with this story.

Cambrian

haha yeah, ultimately I just can't commit to doing daily chapters for this story so the schedule is whatever I can make work while always guaranteeing at least one chapter a week at a set time