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A/N: Heart to heart time from another Mira/Zoey split POV!

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Supperwaffle

Can I get a time stamp for that scene

Cambrian

Should be 21:01 if I'm not mistaken!

Voltron-0Q1

I Freaking… LOVED THIS!!!!!!!

JRC

Wow, that was heavy. Mira's point was almost scarily good. Yeah, of course they know demons can disguise themselves as humans. Patterns… demon, kill it! Yeah, an all too likely end for our primary female protagonist, honestly. Is it any wonder they're hopping mad at Celine?

RHar

I'm a bit confused as to how being like Blade constitutes teasing about her crushing on Jinu. Although it is 2AM and I may not be reading right.

Alun Lewis

Zoey makes a very good point...Celine had the opportunity to explain at least the basics of Rumi's status as a half-demon when Mira & her were initially brought in for their Hunter & Idol training. Emphasize Rumi being unique to remove any possible cause for hesitation during fights and make possession of a soul the deciding factor. Though one supposes the question of Rumi being conceived via consensual sex or not would then be on the table...and only a truly villainous Celine would outright paint Rumi as the product of SA (which I don't think Celine is...truly malicious and uncaring about Rumi, I mean).

Cambrian

nah she's choosing not to tease Rumi about crushing on Jinu right now. she went with a callback instead :P

RHar

My headcanon has always been that Rumi's dad was a demon that tricked Rumi's mom by disguising himself as human, somehow being more successful than the demons we see who aren't Saja boys. If that's true (or something similar that doesn't preclude replication by other demons), there could possibly be other half-demons out there. Also, we don't know that there aren't other part-demons in this story. We just know they definitely exist beyond theory because Rumi.

Belly

I liked those part, hindsight of "we're hunters but ee didnt really have any background or notion of what's good or bad", since in actually Korean lore its almost similar to the Hindu myths of good and evil devas and gods. Theres good and evil spirits, and usually they're even further categorized into monsters, ghosts, demons, etc... If they'd been upfront from the beginning, it would've caused less trouble le, and also like the few previous chapters of sketchy ways of "hiding" her secret, it would've made more sense if they used one of thr old OG scripts where Rumi had a childhood friend who she secretly told who had a bad reaction to her marks, so Rumi in her grief amd sadness tried burning them off, leaving actual scars which could excuse her avtually hiding her skin a lot. Also enjoyed Rumi's weak excuses after their input, would've honestly been harsher with the rebuttal when Rumi explained the whole "we needed you to be tough and have killer instincts speal" when if they did have those instincts theyd always feel something off about rumor over the years and closer and closer to golden, the more suspicious theyd be that something replaced Rumi. Excellent chapter once again. But we need more derby time

StrevHd

Man Mira is spitting facts. Rumi's no hesitation speach even bolsters Mira argument. If Celine trained them to be basically matador bulls upon seeing patterns, Rumi is dead with one slip up. Rumi's first line in the next chapter, "you want to help make me better voice." I know endgame is a quople between the girls and Jinu, but I'm wondering what Jinu will actually do with his life.

Munsu

Yes, Zoey. This is a Golden Rule, far more precious than than trashy Golden Honmoon : if you can throw a reference, summon pop culture, in the wise words of the (Pimp)Emperor : DO IT !