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A/N: Everyone arrives back at the penthouse~

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T10sAYtBNUYqjdOHjPm2n6cyF7y85ajvJTSVYW0Ki3Q/edit?tab=t.0

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Munsu

Reminds me of the meme, with the dog sitting at its desk, while everything is on fire around it. "That's fine. Everything is fine."

Crispined Glover Potato Snacks

"Let’s get order all our favorites sent up from the tower cafeteria and you can tell us about the vision over some food!" - this sentence is a bit jumbled I think. Should it be "Let’s get all our favorites sent up from the tower cafeteria" or "Let’s order all our favorites from the tower cafeteria"?

RHar

Actually, I'm gonna go against the grain and say "it's actually fine". Mostly. Is Celine going to be able to suss out that Bobby knows about Rumi's patterns? Probably not. Is she going to sense the rainbow Honmoon on his Bowie knife? Possibly. Is Bobby going to put his foot down on some issue and create a conflict that is only semi-necessary? Probably. But that's fine, because we have bisexual female POV and that can't be taken away.

Alatoic

Will be interesting when Jinu tell the girls about the vision of his family, maybe they can confirm that his sister was a hunter (there must be records about who where hunters), maybe even learn more about her. Will we see a night "date" between Rumi and Jinu?

MercerV12

God I want Bobby and Celine to get together in this fic, I think their characters would actually mesh really well, with Bobby both being enough of a pushover and a serious/strict enough guy when it maters to counteract all of the insecurity and forcefulness of celine. Plus Bobby deserves nice things ahahaha absolute bro that he is!

Alun Lewis

I wonder if Celine has ever thought about which of the three "girls" is most likely to stand up to her...though it being Mira probably is the obvious choice. Still awesome to see Mira offer Celine some of the older woman's attitude back to her when confronting Celine about the previous night's revelations. I do worry that Celine will use Bobby as a available target to vent any lingering frustration about HUNTR/X suddenly "losing their edge" just before the metaphorical finish line of getting the Golden Honmoon completed...though I hope Bobby can call her out on placing all of her hopes on having her cake and eating it too (i.e. assuming the Golden Honmoon won't kill or permanently harm Rumi while it's sealing off Gwi-ma's domain from the human world) when she doesn't know for 100% certainty.

JRC

I suppose if Bobby tips his hand to Celine things could get rough, but I imagine it wouldn't be too bad otherwise. I guess it depends on how confrontational Celine wants to get with Jinu. I admit, I'm looking forward to seeing how the girls react to Jinu's story. Probably something along the lines of "oh, a demon king misled someone in an attempt to make them miserable? What a shock!" XD

Gmachine3825

The Hawaiian shirt RIP Abby I miss you My favorite Saja Boy

RHar

On the one hand, yes, but on the other hand I always like big harems and a bigger harem for Jinu is always a good idea in my book. But, @Cam, if you're going to go this route, go all the way and go full "Nana to Kaoru" (the manga) with this relationship.

RHar

The more things change, the more they kink the same.

RHar

@Cam, I'm rereading the fic over on AO3, and got to the Angel and Buffy references. When this fic eventually starts getting steamy, I think we have to have a moment when Zoey either jokingly or seriously worries about Jinu losing his soul when he finally gets laid. Also, this is just my brain running through a lot of ideas simultaneously, but I guess similarly to Buffy, Rumi would also be a virgin at that point because she could never get naked with anyone because demon patterns, much less as an "Idol" and with Celine monitoring.

MercerV12

While I agree that Bigger Harem most of the time = Better Harem, I don’t think Celine would mix well with Jinu and the Girls in a relationship, I’m sure Cam could definitely manage to write it well, but I think Bobby/Celine would just flow better for the story, but it is as always in the hands of our illustrious author where he decides to take the story.

RHar

Thinking on it, I'm not sure I've seen Cam do a story where a secondary lead male gets solo (with a lady) sexy screen time. Maybe I'm just forgetting