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(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)

A/N: Jinu makes sure everyone knows the rest of his crimes.

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Chapter 38 Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SiDEXTm4Ngrqm40fZTsotBggshTk0NjryPXxtz2CrTY/edit?tab=t.0

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Chapter 38.5 Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Cg9OMfYFdL5vxFyPe_AodjXrVx0lv916NexODckaYAM/edit?tab=t.0

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A/N: Alright so the plan is to have all of the smut take place in these .5 chapters so that anyone who wants to read the story without smut can just enjoy the fading to black version.

Will this work? I dunno, we’re gonna find out together, lmao.

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Comments

Alun Lewis

Honest feedback about the smut being its own mini-chapter? It's good that readers who are here for the plot don't have to scroll through a (potentially huge) block of text to skip the sex scenes and possibly lose their flow. But...those of us who are here for the giggity giggity, it could be a bit awkward to have to open a separate Google Docs file to read the smutty goodness you've given us...but only if the sex scenes are happening in the middle of a chapter. If sex scenes for this story get used like transitional scenes - like here - then I think this format will work out overall. But maybe a poll just to get widespread feedback from everyone, including lurkers who don't tend to leave comments?

Alatoic

Love how Rumi have made her mission to save Jinu from his self pity, someone have to. Now I suppose Mira will began "Operation seducing Rumi and Jinu with help of Zoey so all we can live together and happy ever after". .5 be the smut is a great idea to keep the story PG13 and can reach farther, if people want the naughty things they can come here, as long its not required to understand the plot I 100% agree.

HugoH

Now big question, will they form a polycule : Rumi/Jinu and Rumi/Mira/Zoe ? Or will they form a quad ? With Jinu probably being in a weird situation since it’s obviously Rumi that the other two huntrix want and love, beyond physical attraction toward Jinu.

RHar

Are you planning on lowering the rating of the fic to M or whatever on places like AO3 And having the smut chapters as a companion story? Might get more exposure that way, even if it's a pain in the ass to read on Kindle later on.

Cambrian

Nah, I don't think so. Mostly doing this to make it easier to continue posting on Royal Road and Spacebattles going forward. For AO3, I'll probably just post both pieces as one chapter and put in a little message to let people know the smut is starting when it begins so they can skip it if they want.

Cambrian

The ultimate plan is Jinu/Rumi/Mira/Zoey with Rumi as the nucleus heh

RHar

If I had to guess, there's a probably a reason all three of the girls describe themselves explicitly as bisexual rather than lesbian.

Potato

Good idea with seperating the chaps

Monkeu Pon

Should have played idol at least that was 🔥

Cambrian

I want to eventually play both Soda Pop and Your Idol for Mira and Zoey, but I want it to be in a bit more fun circumstances hehe. Like Rumi bullying/teasing Jinu into privately performing it for them basically, rather than him showing it to them as part of an attempt to make them hate him.

Monkeu Pon

Idol's transition into Rumi's song was an epic scene as well but did she even hear idol before she came in?

Cambrian

I like to imagine Rumi got there right as Your Idol started and was actually kind of enjoying the song until they straight up summoned Gwi-Ma and everyone started walking towards his flames. Then she was like "oh shi-!" and got involved lmao

sihko gaud

Love this fic. Missing comma fix: "Other Rumi hadn’t managed to convince him. She had it just… hadn’t stuck." Should be "Other Rumi hadn’t managed to convince him. She had, it just… hadn’t stuck." Had me a bit confused when I read that without the comma.