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Hell of a Show Ch. 4 (DxD AU/Multi)

  • Skip straight to the heist 163
  • Show the planning first 289
  • 2025-12-12
  • —2025-12-18
  • 452 votes
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(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)

A/N: Amadeus and Grayfia’s first time.

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GS-mp7E94AkQQD3zadvj9DdLCK10c-2fm0I_11vuIjc/edit?tab=t.0

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A/N: If you see any mistakes in posting, let me know ASAP so I can fix em!

Comments

SylverIron

You son'va bitch. I'm in.

AR

At least for this first one, it feels like it's important to show the planning and how the MC approaches it.

Rotaugur

Just a suggestion, but what if instead of a normal set , even if he were to steal a king as well, he instead steals a prototype set , that not only has the ability to optimize the recipient, instead of just enhancing them after the chess figures, make a dragon more dragon or remove its weakneses or turn a nekomata into a nekoshu. Or it could give every member of the perage access to the abilitys of the other members, limits could be pawns get acces to one, bishops to two etc. , decided by the king and he can change the acces later on as well. Would be a nice variation to the usual boring sets. If he were to rob ajuka, will he also see some of the other hidden projects? In canon there is the whole eveil sacreat gear stuff hidden in some vault, and if he were to already steal it, it could not get into the wrong hnds later on. A wish i had for his future members would be Lucoa from the dragon maid anime. She was for a time a goddes in the atztek pantheon, but was later kicked out because she was drunk and did something dumb. Would be a nice way of adding a dragon to his harem, without adding tiamat like every oter fic.

Rotaugur

And even how he finds out where the stuff is hidden. He took a nap for 500 years, there should be some changes for secruity and storage .

Just_Call_Me_Steve

Obviously he will just Unlock the knowledge. On a more serious note, I do wonder what gadgets and gear the Valefor may have left.

SpectralTime

I love a good planning scene, but generations of heist movies were explaining the plan in advance only ensures that something will go wrong compel me to pick in what I see as the self interest of the character

Rotaugur

maybe the holy handgranade of antioch??? could be fun...

Devilsadvocate

This is a Devil-lock 666 it can be opened using a Devil-lock 666.

~9a@zJ

Given some of Grayfia's dialogue, you should have titled this chapter "Rock Me Amadeus" based on the Falco song... but that fruit was perhaps too low hanging.

Alun Lewis

You'll wear her down eventually, Amadeus...just keep your head - and cock - in the game via finding those hidden kink exploits that will allow Grayfia to see that she can be an extra submissive servant AND your blushing bride simultaneously. Especially if you get her to be a battle maid 😉

Rotaugur

What if the explanation comes after the heist is already succesful? Like in the movie about the magicans who hold shows and rob people, "Now you see me"? Could be a nice compromise.